Dust of the Dandelions-pt12A-pg142-5/11 - Page 4

Good Morning

The description about the bull carts, and the fight was so wonderful, it made me love india more, the song Mere Desh ki darti came to my mind when i was reading the description of that part. Thanks for the wonderful research you have done on your ff. 👏

Wow Aparjit, Tarun and Mohan all of Bani ex admirers from KS are Aditya friends😆

Uday Walia is just a sick old man, so disgusting😡🤢

If someone i knew did that, i would break the contact also with them, its so digusting and heart wrenching. 😭

I would have rebelled the same way like Jai did.

Jigs should know running away and getting married is not always the answer to your problems, but she is stubborn, and independent😡

Loved the character description of Jai, he is just 17 but an angry young men, in the making. He stood up to his dad, and told him how he felt.

I was trying to recall Massi name, when Jai went to the hospital, i was like is it Shoba kapoor, i didn't here the s but i know its kapoor. As Mayi loves to use her families name in her serial.

Can't wait for the journey to Mt. ABu.

Great picture, oh those lazy hazy days of summer.

Different story line
plz continue soon waiting for next update and Bani's entry

LUV
Dalia

Sheena Di,so happy to see you back with another amazing ff. 😃

the prologue and first part were just beautiful.so descriptive that I could imagine before my eyes.loved Jai's outburst with his day,his pain came across very well.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Great part, Sheena looking forward to reading more... its a unique concept! Our hero is just 😳 Dying to see how Jani will meet!
The picture reminded me of a painting i had seen in Jaipur last time i was there..Please continue soon.
Kripa

Rekha: Intense story line coming up! 😉 😉
Thanks for liking the description, believe it or not - some parts are from a school I went to in elementary, some parts from a valley in front of my house in India, some on the famous peak I climb up and down in summer, here in US. Thx for the compliments.

Divan: thanks for liking the concept, yep there will be a bit of romance between ADI and Jigs, I was a frequent visitor of the villages (both grand pas) and they had all these, as a kid, I used to love it.

Twinkle20: Yep, our man Jai will be a bad boy for quite some time in this fiction. Ragin bull is right. Uday is a sicko...

Rimpy: Thanks honey, Adi is just a happy go lucky guy, a little lazy right now, but he will come around.

Piku: Mamta, thanks honey!

Dalia123: Dalia, yes, it is an original concept but sticks to the love of JB...

Coolgurl_2005: Hey Preet, thanks sweety, I have actually been to places like these, so most of them are from my memories.

Kripa0521: Hey Kripa, thanks - Jani will not meet until Chapter 2. I am splitting each chapter into two because of my inability to do frequent updates. Yes, the pic is a Rajasthani painting.


Swatinarang: Hey babes, where have you been, missed on the forum lately.

Sheena, Y'know what I love to read about your FFs is your very wide ranging eclectic choice of poetry, and your vivid descriptions, they're like word pictures and one actually is able to visualise the crowded train, the angst ridden confrontation between father and son, the ripe odours of the cowshed. Very well written, always a pleasure to read.
BTW read all the parts of Adura Zindagi, and really liked it. Will read the others too.
Somali

Wonderful Update Di, I like everything you write.

This UW is worst than KS, how can he have a child just after his wife passed out. Can't believe there are people like these roaming around. Should have spared thought about his son and only daughter.

Was sad to read that bit about Jigyasa. I remembered a movie I saw last or a year before when the daughter just wants to run away and marry a man anyone just because of her own mother who loves only her second child because she was lost for 6 years after birth and treated that girl as a step child.But at the end the mother apologised. Will wait to read if UW does the same or will pass away.

Waiting for your update eagerly.

With Love,

Shiya

One more great FF Shinshin.
i have realized something...u seem a sucker for the plain and cultural surroundings aren't u? i mean u love many cultures of the world and love to describe each and everyone in details. i have to give u a standing ovation for that, you do it so fantabolously 👏 👏 👏
loving the whole story you have it going here...especially the setting. it is the whole punjabi ishtyle. 😃
I can't wait for the next intense part! 😉 😉
plz continue soon
rooj

PS: in a hurry so small msg. also thankoo for the wishes. 😃

Hi Shoba (PM of LS)😛!!

I am back with my bakbak😃

Fantabulous part dear. Loved how you described the bull carts and fight. It's just amazing. Character of Aditya was portrayed a little bit differently than other FFs......Jigs should be careful......but I think they would make a perfect jodi. UW is sooo disgusting. Liked this bold Jai who was able to protest against his dad......glad to see a JW with his RB avatar. So all are heading to MT Abu where our Bani-rani lives. waiting to read how our JB are gonna meet each other under what circumtances. Please update soon. Thanks yaar for bringing another wonderful story on the board.

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P.S.: Loved the poem😊