Dust of the Dandelions-pt12A-pg142-5/11 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sanam84

.....so i broke it into two...Dande n Lions...ab theek hai...ye dono words pata hai... 😆 Dande khane ki to adaat hai bachpan se...n i liv wid a lion 😆

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Very captivate beginning Shoba Di, loved how you described the details of the place. I wish i could go somewhere like that and forget about the surroundings and the world.

The title of your ff brought back some child hood memory of mine, where my cousins and i used to pick up the dry Dandelions and blow them in the air, and we used to have race who could pick up the most yellow Dandelions. After while we learened it was my nani's idea of getting the Dandelions out of her grass😆

PS samu dande and lion you meri pagal pagal dost🤣

Hey Sheena a new ff yippee!!! 😃 Its gonna be like CITW? That's good enough for me😉…that's one of my favourite ff's. 👍🏼 😃

I loved the prologue 😊… Bani's introduction was captured beautifully…where she lives…the location…everything sounded dreamy, just like in a book. 😍

Love the title 👏…very unique and thought provoking. Big thumbs up for that 👍🏼 And the poem was great too. I liked how u gave reference to where the term Dandilions came from…didn't know that. Always learn something new from ur ff's 👏

Looking forward to read more😊…I'm am sure this ff will be just as good as ur others ff's

Tazoo! 🤗