manan-cant live without u ch24-pg136 (thread 2 limk on index)

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INDEX
INTRO N CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 1
CHAPTER 1 A - PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2 - PAGE 3
CHAPTER 2 A - PAGE 4
CHPTER 3 - PAGE 6
CHAPTER 3 A - PAGE 8
CHAPTER 3 B - PAGE 9
CHAPTER 3 C - PAGE 10
CHAPTER 4 - PAGE 11
CHAPTER 4A - PAGE 12
CHAPTER 4B - PAGE 15
CHAPTER 4C - PAGE 17
CHAPTER 4d - PAGE 19

CHAPTER 5 - PAGE 21
CHAPTER 5A - PAGE 22
CHAPTER 5B - PAGE 24
CHAPTER 6 - PAGE 26
CHAPTER 7 - PAGE 29
CHAPTER 7A - PAGE 30
CHAPTER 7B - PAGE 32
CHAPTER 7C - PAGE 34
CHAPTER 8 - PAGE 36
CHAPTER 9 - PAGE 37
CHAPTER 10 - PAGE 38
CHAPTER 10A - PAGE 41
CHAPTER 11 - PAGE 41

CHAPTER 11A - PAGE 43
CHAPTER 12 - PAGE 45

CHAPTER 12A - PAGE 49
CHAPTER 12B - PAGE 50
CHAPTER 13 - PAGE 52
CHAPTER 13A - PAGE 54
CHAPTER 14 - PAGE 56
CHAPTER 15 - PAGE 57
CHAPTER 15A - PAGE 59
Chapter 16 - page 62
Chapter 16a/b - page 65
Chapter 17 - page 66
Chapter 17a/b - page 66
Chapter 18 - page 70
Chapter 19 - page 77
Chapter 19a - page 80
Chapter 20 - page 84
Chapter 20a - page 87

Chapter 20b - page 91
Chapter 20c - page 93
Chapter 21 - page 98
Chapter 22 - page 110
Chapter 22a - page 115
Chapter 22b - page 119
Chapter 23 - page 25

Chapter 23a - page 130

Chapter 24 - page 136

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Introduction

MAnik and nandini got married as soon they completed their music course at space n manik is owner of malhotra industries...his father gave him all the property when he was 21 n he also runs a music company n fab5 r famous n do lot of concerts in different cities n country...n nandini is studying science 3rd yr...when manik got to know that before coming to space nandini wanted to study science he decided to motivate her to continue study science n gifted her an admission letter to her when they got engaged n she accepted the gift n she's doing gr8 in science field n she also practice music everday early in the morning
Its been 1 yr manik n nandini got married n both of them r very happy

Niyonika accepted nandini but manik never trusted her so when manik got all the property including space , he gave it to her n they made a deal that she will never come between his personal life n she agreed

Cabir n navya r also married n have a daughter kavya who is 3 yrs old n cabir loves both of them a lot

Dhruv n aliya r engaged n they r living together n harshad lives alone

Mukti n abhimanyu r in relationship as abhi came back from america after his complete treatment during manik n nandini marriage n mukti forgave him for living her alone n r happy together


Chapter 1

Servents were running here n their working n keeping bags in the car n fab4 were shouting as manik was late
Cabir - are yaar ye manik na kabhi nahi sudhrenga main raat me hi isse inform kar diya tha jaldi ane...zarur romance kar raha honga

Navya - its OK cabir kyu itna ghussa kar rahe ho...servent ne mujhe has abhi bataya ki manik ready ho gaya hai bas niche utar ta hi honga...but ye nandini kaha hai dikhai nahi de rahi

Mukti - navya isi liye to cabir ghussa kar raha hai kyuki agar nandini yahi kahi hoti to manik bhi wahi hota aur nandini dur dur tak kahi bhi nahi dikh rahi hai to iska matlab manik zarur room me nandini ke saath romance kar raha honga

Dhruv - guys chill flight ko abhi aur time hai to hum easily flight board kar lenge

Cabir - acha agar time hai to rhodium masti karle (he looks at navya n winks n she blushes)

Navya - cabir tum bhi na kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho

Dhruv - wah beta khud yaha PDA chalu hai aur bechare manik pe ghussa ho raha hai

Cabir - kya yaar tum log bhi na aur main koi romance nahi kar raha tha main to ye bol raha tha ki manik abhi tak niche nahi utra hai to kyu na hum hi upar ja kar dekh le ki kya ho raha hai

Aliya - very bad cabir aise kisi couple ko pareshan nahi karna chahiye don't u know

Cabir - miss samajdar agar hum abhi upar nahi gaye na to manik shaam tak niche nahi utrenga

Aliya - cabir hum sab 1 week ke liye Australia ja rahe hai n manik itne dino tak nandini ko dekhe bina reh hi nahi sakta so WO pure 1 week ka romance ek hi bar me kar raha honga

Navya - ye nandini bhi na agar humare saath chalti to kitna maza ata

Mukti - wait let me call her ab wo hi hai Jo manik ko niche bhej sakti hai


UPSTAIRS IN ROOM

Phone bell rang n nandini picked up the phone n in a sleepy voice she replied

Nandini - hello who is this

Mukti - oh shit nandini wake up r u still sleeping...n where the hell is manik we r getting late yaar send him down asap warna humari flight miss ho jayengi
(Nandini saw the time n she she looks at her phone it was mukti)

Nandini - oh no I m so sry mukti pata nahi main kaise itni der tak so gayi aaj I m very sry main bas abhi niche ati hu aur manik ko bhejti hu

Mukti - ha pls jaldi aao dono niche

Nandini look around n manik was not there she got up from the bed n shouts

Nandini - manik where r u ...manik

She then goes to her study room n finds manik picking up her books which r lying down n nandini looks at manik cutely murmuring

Manik - ye nandini bhi na pata nahi itni der tak kyu padhai karti hai thode marks kam aa jayenge to thodi na fail ho jaengi

Nandini goes near him n hug him from back n without turning manik Caresse her hand

Manik - gd morning my intelligent princess

Nandinigm...manik main aaj itni der tak kaise so gayi aur tum kab uthe mujhe uthaya kyu nahi aur sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai niche tumhe Jana nahi hai kya tum late ho jaonge

Manik turns around n looks at her angrily n hold her from waist

Manik - first of all tum agar raat ke 2 baje tak padhte hue study table par hi so jaongi to tum jaldi kaise uthongi aur tumhe apna khayal hai ya nahi aur Maine tumhara phone alarm band kar diya isliye tum nahi uthi aur Maine isliye nahi uthaya taki tumhari peaceful sleep disturb na ho samjhi
(N he holds her chin from one hand pecks on her lips)

Nandini - sry manik mera project complete nahi hua tha isliye late ho gaya but next time pakka promise main jaldi so jaungi (she hugs him more tightly)

Manik - acha main one week ke liye ja raha hu to Maine chacha Chachi ko phone karke bol diya hai n tum unke pass time se chale Jana n pls pareshan mat karna unhe aur Sab work time pe khatam kar Lena n main yaha nahi hu to kisi problem me fas mat Jana OK

Nandini - manik pls apna khayal rakhna n all the best for ur concert n (manik interrupts her while talking)

Manik - oh hello tum mujhe all the best aise bolongi ( n gives her a naughty smirk...she pushes him n he holds her hand n come close to her)

Manik - mujhe late ho raha n Sab niche se upar aa jaye usse pehle kam khatam kar lete hai to chalo apne special style me all the best bolo

Nandini keeps her hand around his neck manik holds her waist n both of them come more close to each other n kiss passionately n then they broke the kiss n nandini goes near n whisper very sexily

Nandini - all the best manik
( n again pecks on his cheek )

Manik - OK ab niche chale

Nandini - hmm chalo
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Chapter 1a

Manan goes down holding hand

Cabir n mukti together - oh finally aa gaye

Dhruv - buddy its getting late now Hume nikalna chahiye

Nandini goes near navya n ask her about kavya

Nandini - navya kavya ko bhi le jao waise bhi uski holidays chalu hai na

Navya - nandini kavya ka passport nahi hai...isliye usse hum uski dadi ke pass chodh kar aye hai

Cabir - aur nandini agar agar passport hota bhi na to bhi hum usse nahi lejate coz wo abhi bohot choti hai aur navya usse waha kaise sambhalengi
Jab main busy rahunga toh

Manik - directly bol na ki second honeymoon plan kar raha hai

Cabir - kya kaha tune fir se bol na zara

Manik - are dhruv yaar chalo chalte hai time ho raha hai...bags to sare rakhwa diye hai na

Cabir - ek sec itni jaldi kya hai...kaha the bhai Saab aap itni der se aur nandini how come u woke up so late today...I m shocked actually
Mukti - ha guys tum log aisa kya kar rahe the raat me ki itni der ho gayi subah uthne me

Manik - mujhe malum tha tum dono bina tease kare reh hi nahi sakte bhale hi kitna bhi late kyu na ho raha ho

Cabir - wah bhai ulta chor kotwal ko dante ek to sir ji ko kitna bhi late ho raha ho romance karne se kabhi nahi
Rukte aur hum sirf ache se puch rahe hai to inhe late ho raha hai

Nandini - woh mera project complete nahi hua tha to main late soi thi aur manik ne alarm band kardiya tha to main jaldi nahi uth payi

Cabir - chalo kuch to acha kam kiya manik ne ( manik hits cabir playfully n everyone laughs )

Druv n aliya - ok guys stop it now baki ki bate flight me karlenge warna Hume pohochne me deri ho jayengi

Navya - nandini tum bhi saath chalo na pls warna humara man nahi lagenga

Manik - aur mera bhi ( n makes a puppy face)

Nandi - sry guys but mera submission hai iss week to main nahi aa paungi but u go n enjoy hum sab saath me next time jayenge to aur maza ayenga

Manik was looking at nandini n he was looking sad coz for the first time he will be staying without her for so many days

Nandini - manik stop making such cute faces OK main nahi aa paungi pls samjho

Manik - OK fine but u take care n miss me ok

Nandini - ya I will miss u a lot n u 2 take care of ur self aur meri chinta mat karo tumne jaisa kaha hai main waisa hi karungi OK ( n pecks on her cheeks)

Everyone bids goodbye to nandini n leave from their
Manik cabir n navya in one car n mukti dhruv n aliya in other car

Nandini close the door n walks inside the house wiping her tears n thinking about manik...while manik was also thinking about her n then he gets a call from nandini n a smile appears on his face

Cabir - oh ho thank god lagta hai nandini ka call aa gaya warna thodi der aur ho jati na to ye car wapas ghar le Jane ke liye bolta

Manik gives an angry look to cabir n navya laughs

Cabir - what yaar sach hi to bola Maine...ab look hi deta rahenga ya call bhi recieve karenga

Manik - yes my princes bolo

Nandini - I love u n I miss u

Manik - I love u 2 n I m missing a lot like hell

Nandini - manik how we will leave without each other for 1 week

Manik - I don't know yaar...concert cancel karwa du

Nandini - manik don't even think of it ok

Manik - hmm

Manik - acha sab chodho n jaldi se Tayar hokar murthy mansion ke liye niklo Mrs nandini manik malhotra...rishab ka msg aya tha usne jaldi bhejne ke liye kaha tha to pls tum jaldi niklo

Nandini - manik tum pehle flight board karlo uske baad Tayar hokar chali jaungi OK fir jab tak tumhari flight land nahi hongi main tumse baat bhi nahi kar paungi

Manik - OK baba atleast u can have ur breakfast while talking to me na

Nandini - no manik I don't fell like eating

Manik - dekho aisa mat karo warna main wapas aa jaunga sab cancel karwa ke

Nandini - no no no pls aisa mat karna main abhi breakfast karti hu

Manik - OK to fir jao abhi dinning pe tumhare liye breakfast rakha hai aur ha tum mujhse puchu usse pehle main hi keh deta hu ke maine breakfast kar liya hai

Nandini - very good my cute hubby

Manik - (seriously) ok ab time waste mat karo aur breakfast rakha hai aur ha tum mujhse puchu usse pehle main hi keh deta hu ke maine breakfast kar liya hai

Nandini - very good my cute hubby

Manik - (seriously) ok ab time waste mat karo aur breakfast khatam karo...main airport phoch gaya hu...(takes his bag n goes inside the airport )

Cabir from behind - are Bhai hum Sab ke liye to rukh ja

Nandi - is cabir shouting at u

Manik - hmm

Nandini - manik tum jao hum baad me baat kar lenge

Manik - nahi its OK he is jst teasing me

Nandini smiles n stay silent for some sec

Manik - kya hua

Nandini - I was eating my breakfast na that is why main shant thi

Manik - pakka na tum ne breakfast finish kar liya na

Nandini - ha baba finish kar liya now happy

Manik - that's like my princess

Cabir n mukti shout together - manik waha kaha ja raha hai idhar Jana hai

Manik - oh shit

Nandini - manik mujhse baat karte karte airport par bhatak mat jana

Manik smiling - hmmm

While manik talk to nandini she gets ready n asked driver to take out the car n at airport cabir mukti are teasing manik as he hasn't stop talking to nandini even for a sec n dhrulya is busy with each other n navya is talking to cabirs mom n asking whether kavya is disturbing her or not...then every one is in flight n then an air hostess comes to manik n ask him to switch off his phone

Manik - OK so I have to switch off my phone now so bye

Nandini - ha main bhi bas Chachi ke ghar ke pass hi pohoch gayi hu so bye tc manik aur ache se khana khana meri tension mat lena aur ha pohchte hi call karna aur kisi ko bhi pareshan mat karna stay calm OK bye (n then she gives a kiss from phone )

Manik - OK baba bye tc ...I love u nandini

Nandini - I love u 2 manik

Then manik switch his phone off n nadini reach at murthys mansion n both of them r thinking about each other then flight takes off n Chachi came running as the bell rang

Chachi - are zarur nandini aa gayi hongi...aa rahi hu khol rahi hu darwaza ruko

Nandini - are Chachi main hu nandini

Chachi - are nandu mujhe pata hai tu hai aa rahi hu main...ye murthy ji bhi na pata nahi kaha gaye...beta rishab chal nandini aa gayi hai tune surprise to ready rakha hai na

Rishab nods in yes...then both of them together welcomes nandini n rishab keept his hands on her eyes n then chacha stand in front of them n tell them to let her see the surprise

Nandini open her eyes see that chacha is standing n there's a huge piano in front of her n she gets happy after looking at it n start jumping in excitement

Nandini - oh my god chacha Chachi rishab this is amazing...I love it...ur the best family I ever have thank u so much

Chacha - nandu sirf ye hi nahi ek aur surprise hai

Then nandini saw amms coming downstairs n run towards her n hug her tightly

Amms - ayo nandini tumhe ek hafte ka Sara pyaar ek bar hug karke dena hai kya ha

Nandini - ayyapa I m so happy thanku so much n I m so happy ki main apko bata nayi sakti hu...

Chachi - manik aaj hi subah subah amms ko lekar aya

Amms - manik jaisa shadi ke pehle tha abhi bhi waisa hi hai uska mujhe call aya bola amms ap apna bag pack karlo Maine tickets nikal li hai ab app bas yha Mumbai aa jao nandu ke pass aur main aa gayi

Chacha - aur nandu ye pione bhi manik hi tumhe gift karne wala tha but Maine aur rishab ne usse manaya ki hum tumhe ye gift dekar surprise kare

Nandini in mind - I love u my monster
Chachi - acha chalo maine khana nikal Di hu baki ki bate baad me kar Lena

Nandini - nahi chachi abhi nahi khana Maine bas abhi breakfast ki hu mujhse aur nahi khaya jayenga

Chachi - dekh nandu tu bohot kamzor ho gayi hai padh padh ke aur manik ne khass bola hai ki nandini ko har do ghante main khana khilana aur fir tu itne Natak karengi to main manik ko kya jawab dungi kam se kam uske liye to kha le

Amms - ayo nandu tu apni amms ki baat bhi nahi manengi

Nandini - acha OK main kha leti hu but thodu sa hi ha pls

Then everyone finishes eating n goes in their room n nandini start completing her clg work n rishab helps her in it n then at evening she plays piano n everyone watch her playing it n then after having dinner everyone goes to their room to sleep but nandini was not sleeping as she was missing manik...she was looking at their pics in her phone

Nandini - I miss u a lot My monster...

Flight lands n as soon as fab 5 n navya came out of airport cabir called her mom...mukti called abhi...n manik called nandini as manik was getting restless

Nandini phone bell rang n without looking at it she received it

Nandini - manik

Manik - hey hi how r u my princes...n I m so sry ki maine late kiya call karne me actually woh checking ke time thoda problem ho gaya tha isliye

Nandini - manik kya hua tum itna low kyu sound kar rahe ho...Sab theek to hai na

Manik - kuch nahi bas I m missing U a lot

Nandini - aww I m missing u 2 baby

Manik - I don't know yaar tum yaha mere samne nahi rahongi to main perform kaise karunga

Nandini - manik mera project submission agar issi week nahi hota na to main khud clg se leave le leti but I guess this time we both don't have any other option

While manik was talking to nandini...fab4 n navya were standing looking at him


Cabir - my god isko dekho to kitna khoya hua hai nandini se baat karne me

Mukti - I think we should leave now warna iska bas chale to yahi airport ke bahar sone pe majbur kar de

Cabir - chalo sab saath me bulate hai

Dhruv - OK

Aliya - guys let him be...usse disturb mat karo

Navya - jitna manik ko nandini ki zarurat hai utni hi nandini ko bhi uski zarurat hai...kam se kam uske bare me socho

Aliya - ya guys pls nandini ke liye mat karo aisa...waisebhi kuch dino se uski health me thoda ups n downs ho raha hai...isliye manik bhi itna tension me hai

Dhruv - aliya hum usse nandini se baat karne se nahi rok rahe hai bas usse hotel chalne ke liye bula rahe hai

Aliya - OK to fir saath me bulate hai

Cabir - OK so 1 2 3

Cabir mukti dhruv aliya shouts together - maaannniiikkk
Manik turns around listening to them

Manik - ya I m coming...just give me 5 mins pls

Dhruv - are manik tu car me baithe baithe baat kar Lena...we promise hum tujhe disturb nahi karenge

Manik - ok buddy main aa raha hu

Nandini - manik tum rest karo hum kal baat kar lenge

Manik - hmm ok bye gn love u

Nandini - I love u 2...bye gn

Dhruv - hum tujhe nandini se baat karne ke liye mana nahi kar rahe the buddy...bas hotel chalne ke liye bula rahe the

Manik - its ok buddy waise bhi waha 12 baj rahe honge let her sleep aur waise bhi wo dikha ti nahi hai but uski health thodi kharab hai n I don't want ki uski health aur kharab ho

Aliya - hmm ur right manik...acha chalo nikalte hai

Then everyone leaves the airport n reached hotel...cavya in one room dhrulya in one room n manik n mukti in their single rooms...mukti was missing abhi n as usual manik was missing nandini n talking to himself

Manik - why god why is this so difficult for me to stay away from her...usse call karu kya...oh no she must be sleeping...hmm acha msg hi kar deta hu isse pata bhi chal jayenga ki wo soyi bhi hai ya nahi

Manik messaged her n she was not sleeping she was reading her books n saw manik has messaged her

Nandini - sry manik but agar maine msg dekha to tumhe pata chal jayenga ki main jaag rahi hu Aur fir tum bhi nahi songe

Manik - itni der ho gayi msg dekha tak nahi...hmm she must be sleeping... Chalo acha hai ab main aram kar sakta hu

Then manik kept looking at her pics in his mobile n nandini was studying n while reading she slept on table n manik also slept watching her pics

Every one slept as all of them were hell tired n it was really late in Sydney

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