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Chapter 3

Next morning It was 9 am n nandini was still sleeping...then fab5 n navya reached on mumbai airport
Then manik called chachi while their checking on airport is going on

Chachi phone bell rang - are manik to Australia me hai fir uske Indian no se kaun call kar raha honga(she picks up the call) hello

Manik - hello chachi nandini kaha hai

Chachi - but beta tum to Australia me ho na to fir india ke no se kaise call kiya

Manik - chachi main Mumbai me hu bas abhi pohcha...airport par checking karwa raha hu...

Chachi - chalo acha hai tum aa gaye...nandu uske room me hai abhi
Manik - ha chachi pls usse mat batana main aa gaya hu...mujhe usse surprise dena hai

Chachi - but beta tum to ek hafte ke baad ane wale the itni jaldi kaam khatam kar liya

Manik - ha chachi concert ho gaya ache se

Chachi - theek hai beta aao tum main nandini ko nahi bataungi

Then chachi went to nandini room n saw her she was still sleeeping on study table n chachi got wooried

Chachi - oh no manik ne agar isse aise dekha to kya sochenga ki main nandu ka khayal bhi nahi rakh payi

Then chachi tries to wake her up but she was not waking up then she touched her forehead n fever was gone

Chachi - chalo acha hai isse fever nahi hai ab koi tension nahi...shayad manik ke yaha pohchne tak ye khud uth jaye

Then cabir navya in one car n abhi came to recieve mukti n dhruv n alya in one car n manik's driver came to recieve him so he also left from the airport

Fab4 with navya n abhi went to cabirs mom place n kavya came running towards them n hugged navya n cabir together

Cabirs mom - are beta manik aur nandini nahi dikh rahe

Cabir - mom wo nandini ke pass gaya hai thodi der baad usse lekar aa jayenga

Cabirs mom - acha theek hai tum sab ko bohot bhuk lag rahi hongi na tum log khao main manik aur nandini ke liye nikal deti hu

Then everyone sat on dining table started having kheer puri n lot more

Then manik reached Murthy's mansion n went inside n touched amms n chachi feet n hugged chacha n rishab

Manik - chachi nandini kaha hai

Chachi - beta wo to upar room me hai
Manik - kya abhi tak neeche ayi hi nahi

Amms - ha kal uski thodi tabiyat kharab thi aur usko vomit karne ka man kar raha tha

Chachi - but abhi theek hai uska fever bhi khatam ho gaya hai...

Manik got worried listening to chachi n ran towards her room n saw her she was still sleeping on study table...he went close to her n removed hair hiding her face then he slowly picked her up from the chair n placed her on bed n he was just looking at her then he kissed on her forehead n went close to her ear n whispered

Manik - I love u nandini

N then quietly closed the door n went downstairs

Chachi - kya hua beta manik wo uthi kya

Manik - nahi chachi woh abhi bhi so rahi hai

Amms - acha beta shanno ne table pe breakfast laga diya hai tum kuch kha lo itne lambe safar se aye ho thak gaye honge

Manik - nahi amms mujhe bhuk nahi lagi hai aap log khao main nandini ke saath kha lunga

Chacha - are beta kha lo warna nandu uthi aur usse pata chala na ki tum ne nahi khaya hai to fir wo bhi nahi khayengi

Manik - are chacha pls na sahime mera maan nahi kar raha hai khane ka aap pls samjho na

Amms - ayyo manik beta tujhe meri kasam pls kha le thoda aur fir tum healthy rahonge to usse sambhal paonge

Manik - are amms aap bhi na...theek hai main kha leta hu

After finishing having breakfast manik called cabir

Manik - cabir sun na main ghar pe nahi aa paunga...aunty ko pls sry bol dena meri taraf se

Cabir - kyu kya hua sab theek hai na...fir se to tum dono ne jhagda to nahi kar liya na

Manik - nahi yaar wo actually nandini so rahi hai uski thodi tabiyat kharab hai to mera ana Zara mushkil hai

Cabir - theek hai main mom ko bata dunga tu tension mat le Uska khayal rakh hum log sab sham ko ate hai

Manik - ha OK thanks bro bye

Amms - beta tum thak gaye honge jao nandini ke room me Jake aram karlo

Manik - ha main jata hu

Then manik went inside the room n locked the door n slept next to her keeping his hands on her waist n pulled her close to him

It was 11am nandini woke up n saw manik sleeping next to her...she got up with a jerk n rubbed her eyes n pinched herself...then she shouted loudly with joy n manik got up getting worried n she hugged him tightly

Nandini - oh my god manik...tum kab aye

Manik - bas thodi der pehle hi aya jab tum table pe apna sir rakh kar so rahi thi

Nandini - aww manik so cute

N she hugged him again tightly but manik broke the hug n held both her hands

Nandini - what is wrong with u aaj holiday thi fir bhi raat bhar padhai ki aur yaha table par hi so gayi...dekho khud ko Zara kitni kamzor ho gayi ho

Nandini - manik tum to aise baat kar rahe ho jaise mujse 2 din baad nahi ek saal baad mil rahe ho


Then nandini hold his has hand kept it on her heart

Nandini - main bilkul theek hu aur tumhare pass hu manik

Manik - acha agar theek ho to kal tumhe fever kyu hua n tumne vomit bhi to kiya

Nandini keeps her head on maniks lap n manik was creasing her head

Nandini - oh ho manik ho sakta hai ki Maine itne dino ke baad roadside chatpata khaya isiliye vomiting ho gayi

Manik - OK get up now fresh ho jao then neeche chalke much khate hai...tumhari wajah se Maine kuch bhi nahi khaya abhi tak

Nandini jets up with a jerk - what manik Maine humesha kaha na tumhe ki mere wajah se apni meals skip na karo but tum ho ki meri sunte hi nahi


Manik - achha aur jab main ye same cheez tumhe kehta hu to tum meri kabhi sunti ho

Nandini - OK fine tum chalo main ati hu fresh hoke

Manik with a naughty smirk on his face - are dono saath me chalte hai na aur agar tum chaho to fresh bhi saath ho jate hai...what say (winks)

Nandini smiles naughtily n come close to his lips - I don't mind (winks)

Manik was not expecting this ans but then he gets down from the bed n picks her up n go inside the bathroom n starts splashing water on her while she is brushing her teeth then after brushing nandini put on the shower

Manik - wow nandini shower...come let's bath together ( n takes off his shirt )

Nandini - manik what r u doing

Manik - apne kapde dhone ki practice...dikhayi nahi de raha that I want to have a bath with my beautiful wife

Nandini - OK manik ab bohot ho gaya tum bahar jao pls n let me get fresh

Manik - oh come on nandini...kitne din ho gaye humne saath me shower nahi liya

Nandini - manik pls jao na...warna main

Manik - warna kya...r u trying to challenge me

Nandini - warna main kuch bhi nahi khaungi...fir soch lo

Manik makes a puppy face - fine ja raha hu main

Then manik went outside the bathroom n nandini suddenly felt a bit uneasy n sits down holding her head

Nandini - shit what's happing to me

Manik knocks on door - kya hua nandini r u ok

Nandini - ha manik main theek hu bas 2 min main ati hu

Then nandini took bath n after changing she went outside the bathroom rubbing her hair with a towel n manik was just mesmerizing her then nandini saw he was looking at her so she went near him n rubbed her hair so the water droplets fell on His face then he held her hand n both fell on bed...manik removed hair strokes from her face n placed behind her ears n signalled for a kiss n she came close to him n kissed softly n replied back cutely kissing her then they were out of breath n broke the kiss...manik looked at her n her eyes were close he kissed her forehead she opened her eyes pecked him on his cheeks

Manik - I love u

Nandini - I love u more

Manik - ur beautiful

Nandini blushed both of them got up n went downstairs holding hands

Chachi - are beta nandu ab kaisa lag raha hai...tabiyat to theek hai na

Nandini - ha chachi main bilkul theek hu aap tension mat chal

Chachi - acha chal ab kuch kha le

Nandini - ji chachi...ap logo ne kha liya na aur amms rishab aur chacha kaha hai

Chachi - tere chacha office gaye hai...amms aur rishab mandir gaye hai

Nandini - ok...chalo manik tum baitho main chachi ki help karti hu

Manik - tum baitho Chachi ki help main karunga aur ha Maine breakfast kar liya hai

Nandini - but abhi to tumne upar room me kaha ki tumhe bhook lagi hai

Manik - jhut kaha tha taki tum jaldi tayar ho aur breakfast ke liye jaldi neeche chalo aur agar main jhut nahi bolta na to tum mere saath upar bahane mar mar ke rehti aur main bhi nahi kha raha tha but amms ne kasam de Di isiliye kha liya

Nandini pulls his cheek - aww so sweet manik

Then manik went to help chachi in the kitchen n served food for nandini n sat with her n he was looking so adorable

Chachi was looking at them n smiling...she went near them n wiped kajal from her eye n putted behind their ears

Chachi - hay nazar na lage mere bacho ko

Manik - chachi ye kajal humare kaan ke peeche kyu lagaya apne

Chachi - taki tum dono nazar na lage

Manik laughs - ye chote se kajal ke teeke se kya honga chachi

While talking to chachi manik makes nandini eat food from his hand n also tease her in between

Chachi - beta manik pehle ke zamane ke logo ka ye manna tha ki jab kisi ki buri nazar lagti hai to wo bimar ho jate hai aur unke saath bura hota hai aur issi buri nazar se bachne ke liye kajal ka teeka lagate hai

Manik - aah fir to app nandini ke pure muh pe lagado ...taki wo kabhi bimar na ho aur uske saath kuch bura na ho
Nandini - manik don't tease me OK

Manik - acha baba sry ...tum ye plate puri finish karo main medicine lata hu room se

Manik went to her room n took medicine from her cupboard n came downstairs n nandini had finished eating...he gaved her medicine to eat then Manik picks up nandini n she got surprised n chachi was smiling looking at them

Nandini - manik Chachi hai samne thoda to control kiya karo

Manik - to kya hua chachi hai to...kya nandini tum ab meri girlfriend nahi wife ho bhul gayi

Nandini - manik put me down

Chachi gets up n goes to her room - koi baat nahi beta Maine kuch nahi dekha

Nandini blushed n hits manik on his chest playfully then both of them went to her room n manik placed her on bed gently n sat next to her resting his head on her waist

Manik - so kya karne ka irada hai tumhara aaj ...chalo ek long drive par chalte hai

Nandini - nahi manik abhi nahi bohot dhup hai bahar...sham me chale pls

Manik - OK sham ka to plan ban gaya but abhi kya kare

Nandini - manik ek baat batao

Manik - ha bolo

Nandini - tumhara concert to ek hafte baad tha itni jaldi kaise khatam ho gaya...kahi tumne cancel to nahi karwaya na

Manik laughed - are wo Jo owner tha na usse laga ki uski marriage anniversary ek hafte baad fir jiss din hum raat ko waha pohche na tab USSe pata chala ki uski marriage anniversary ussi din hai to fir usne humme shaam ko perform karne ke liye convince kiya n we did it very well n u know waha ka crowd itna enjoy kar raha tha aur pata hai ek fan ne to dhruv ko crowd me kheech liya tha aur uski t shirt faad di...aliya ki shakal to dekhne layak thi she was getting so jealous

Nandini - dhruv ko chodho aur ye batao tumhe kitni female fans ne apna no diya aur ek na ek ne to zarur tumhe cheeks pe kiss kiya hi honga

Manik - he he nandini aisa zyada kuch hua nahi bas main to interview dene me busy that

Nandini - acchha pakka na aise hi hua tha

Manik - are baba ha na

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Posted: 10 years ago
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cute update
manik taking care of all the small small things related to nandu!
scolding her, teasing her, feeding her!

chachi is super cool as usual

but whats up with nandu's health?
hope nothing major!

continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i think nandu is pregnant...
nice update.
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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phew read all in one go but nandu ko hua kya hai hope nthng major happened cont soon amazing story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for liking it but I need more comments n some feedbacks then only I will update
Edited by sadiya51 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved it plz update next part.
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Yaar u should pm na... i had receive your pm only one tym... plz pm me from nxt tym... then only i ll give u feedback
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome...
Plzzz update nxt part soon...
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Chapter - 3a

Nandini - acha main to mazak kar rahi hu...n manik hum apne ghar kab jayenge

Manik - tum bolo to abhi chale

Nandini - chalo

Manik - n what about amms

Nandini was about to say something someone knocked on the door

Manik - kaun hai

Cabir - tera dada...khol darwaza khatam nahi hua kya tera

Manik opens the gate - shut up cabir

Cabir navya kavya mukti abhi dhruv aliya came to meet nandini...manik saw a heavy bag on cabirs hand

Manik - ye bag kyu laye ho...yaha shift hone ka irada hai kya tera...ya navya ne tujhe ghar se nikal diya

Cabir - kyu paka raha hai yaar dekh nandini ko bhi hassi nahi aa rahi hai

Then all came inside and sat around nandini n manik was standing n navya took bag from cabir n gave gifts to everyone

Nandini - navya itne sare gifts ki kya zarurat thi

Navya - nandini agar humari jagah pe hoti to sabke liye zarur kuch na kuch leti but iss baar tumhari jagah humne le li

Aliya - wow navya tumhari choice kab se itni achi ho gayi

Cabir - jab se wo meri company me ayi hai tab se smart ho gayi hai

Manik - oh pls cabir...black n white madhubala is still the same bas uski choice badal gayi hai

Dhruv - wo to hai

Mukti was busy romancing with abhi n manik saw her

Manik - guys look over their

N everyone turns toward abhi n mukti n she didn't even noticed

Manik - chalo aaj iski game lete hai

Aliya - manik be careful its mukti

Manik - wah beta jab wo pareshan karti tab nahi dikhta

Aliya - jab wo tumhe aur nandini ko pareshan karte hain na tab bhi main usse dat ti hu

Cabir - Acha theek hai meri maa bhashan baad me dena chal lets have some fun

Then all of them together were staring at them n then mukti realised that everyone r quiet n both abhi n multi looked at them n everybody started singing an old song

Wada raha sanam honge juda na hum chahe na chahe zamana

Then mukti got irritated by that song n started running behind cabir n manik to hit them but abhi caught her n calmed her down

Abhi - mukti u look so cute when u get angry

Mukti - aww thank u baby

Cabir - wah Bhai kya baat hai itna acha jhoot tu kaise bol leta hai

Mukti - cabir I will kill u

Abhi - are baba Jane do usse

Mukti - aaj to tu bach gaya cabir next time tujhe nahi chodungi

Cabir - ja ja tujh se kaun darta hai

Then amms n rishab came to nandini room

Amms - are wah aaj puri ki puri ravan seena yahi jama hai

Then everyone said hi to amms

Amms - nandu baita ab kaisa lag raha hai ab to tu theek hai na

Nandini - ha amms main theek hu

Amms - beta main ye bolne ayi thi ki main aaj shaam ko 7 baje Mangalore
Wapas ja rahi hu

Manik - but why amms aap itni jaldi kyu ja rahe ho pls ruk jao na

Amms - nahi beta manik main to yaha sirf tumhare kehne par aa gayi thi nandu ko sambhalne ke liye but abhi thoda kaam hai isiliye Jana padh raha hai

Manik - pls amms thode din mere liye rukh jao na pls...nandini tum bolo na amms ko

Nandini - amms manik ki to sunlo pls ruk jao na

Amms - ayo beta nandu manik Mangalore me mera ek student hai aur uska competition hai to he wants me to be their...so mujhe Jana padenga

Manik - OK amms but hum apko airport pe drop karne jayenge

Amms - OK ab tumlog enjoy karo main Shannon ke pass jati hu

Nandini - amms rishab kaha hai

Amms - beta wo Apne room main hai

Nandini - theek hai

Then navya gave gift to amms chachi rishab fab5 n nandini abhi also n everyone loved it

Manik - are sabko gifts mile meri kavya ko kyu nahi

Kavya - Chachu gifts to mujhe hi sabse pehle mil gaye dadi ke saath

Manik - hoo kavya not fair how can u open ur gifts without me

Kavya - its ur fault Chachu u went to meet massi before me so its ur punishment

Manik - OK meri maa I m sry next time I'll meet u first OK

Kavya - ok

Then all of them were chatting n telling about their trip to nandini n abhi...then all of them had lunch n later went to their home

Manik - acha nandini tum aram karo main thoda office jake ata hu tum sham ko ready rehna OK...hum pehle amms ko airport drop karenge fir waha se olives ( one of the best restaurant only for rich people n mostly big celebrities) jayenge dinner ke liye

Nandini - manik I think u should rest tum aaj subah hi Australia se aye ho n right now its 4pm to Jane do na aaj mat jao kal se chale Jana

Manik - pls jaan samjho na I have some pending works in office n don't worry I won't be late...I'll come soon OK

Nandini - OK

Then manik kissed her forehead n left for office then nandini went inside n she started completing her projects n after completing it she got ready n she was wearing a beautiful knee length royal blue colour gown with black colour pumps n black colour bracelet n earnings which manik gifted her when she came 1st in her first semester for 3rd yr n she only did eye makeup n went out n amms saw her

Amms - beta nandu tu kaha ja rahi hai itna tayar home

Nandini - amms aap bhul gaye...main bhi to airport drop karne aa rahi hu

Amms - ha to beta sirf airport Jane ke liye itna tayar ho gayi...kuch aur bhi plan hai kya tera

Nandini blushed - ha amms actually wo manik ne kaha hai ki apko drop karne ke baad hum bahar dinner pe jayenge isiliye

Amms - acha manik kaha hai flight ka time ho raha hai

Manik - apka manik yaha hai amms

Amms - chalo beta acha hua tum aa gaye

Nandini - are amms chalo na ab to manik bhi aa gaya

Manik - ye kya tarika hai nandini...tum amms ko bhejane me itni jaldi kyu kar rahi ho

Nandini got sad - sry amms n sry manik

Then manik n amms look at each other n starting laughing n then nandini hits on manik stomach playfully

Manik - OK ok chalo abhi flight ka time ho raha hai main bags car me dalta hu amms aap chacha chachi aur rishab se mil lo main bahar wait karta hu

Then manik placed bags in car n amms met everyone n chachi chacha n rishab took blessing from her n then manik nandini n amms left for airport
Edited by sadiya51 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...
want more manan cute scence

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