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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really nice start
Plzz update soon
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beautiful...loving this story a lot
u penned it beautifully
continue soon
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your story is really very nice.please do u continue.can u pls pm me after u update
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nice story
pls add me to the pm list

continue soon

p.s.-pls make an index
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its awesome yaar..plz do continue nd pm me fr next update..
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Awsm story!!!
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Chapter 2

Next morning in sydney everyone got up late as they slept late last night
But in india nandini woke up on time and got ready n went to clg

In Sydney

Manik got up n looked at his phone...nandini has called her 10 times n there was a msg from her that she is in clg n will call him later

Manik - shit...ab nandini shayad ghussa ho jaye...(looks at his phone)
Offo 1 baj raha hai sabko uthana padenga

Manik goes to bathroom n gets fresh change his clothes n saw mukti who was already awake n she was talking to abhi...then manik went to cavyas room n knocked

Cabir - who's there

Manik - tera baap...uth ja jaldi sponsors ke saath meeting hai

Cabir - ha main ata hu ready hoke

Manik - ha get ready fast...main aur mukti neche jate hai fir saath me sab lunch karte hai

Cabir - ha OK jst give me 20 mins

Manik - hmm

Cavya in room

Cabir - kuch karna padenga manik ko busy rakhne ke liye warna wo pure time nandini ke bare me sochta rahenga

Navya - lagta manik ki nandini se baat nahi hui subah isi liye wo thoda pareshan sound kar raha tha

Cabir - hmm nandini must be in clg right now isi liye in dono ki baat nahi ho payi hongi...navya call nandini now pls

Navya - cabir she must be busy in clg right now

Cabir - are try to karo...agar wo busy hongi to call recieve nahi karengi

Navya - OK karti hu

Then navya calls nandini n she picks it up

Nandini - ha bolo navya

Navya - kaha ho tum...busy to nahi ho na

Nandini - nahi actually sir abhi tak aye nahi hai class me bas unhi ka wait Kar rahe hai sab log

Cabir - hey nandini its me cabir

Nandini - ha bolo cabir

Cabir - tum pls yaha aa jao...manik bohot zyada sad lag raha hai

Nandini - cabir I called him 10 times but usne call receive hi nahi kiya

Cabir - agar abhi tum free ho to usse call karo

Nandini - ha karti hu

Cabir - OK bye now

Then manik and mukti were waiting for cavya n dhrulya for lunch

Mukti - kya hua manik tu itna khoya hua kyu hai

Manik - kuch nahi yaar bas aise hi

Mukti - its ok yaar bolna kya hua

Manik - woh actually nandini ne subah 10 times call kiya but main itni gehri neend me tha ki Maine uska call receive hi nahi kiya...pata nahi usne kuch khaya bhi honga ya nahi...I m really tensed about her health yaar

Mukti - don't worry manik amms aur Chachi hai na wo usse bina khilaye clg jane hi nahi denge

Then after some time cavya n then dhrulya came for lunch n they were trying to cheer up manik who was not ready to eat anything

Cabir - shit lagta hai nandini ne manik ko call nahi kiya...navya msg nandini n tell her to call manik right now...warna ye khane ko haath bhi nahi lagayenga

Navya - ha main usse msg karti hu

Then navya was about to msg her...manik phone ranged n it was nandini then everyone got a relief

Manik - I m sry nandini I m really sry
...I was so tired ki neend ki wajah se maine tumhara call bhi pickup nahi kiya

Nandini - calm down manik main naraz nahi hu n I understand ki tum Thak gaye the

Manik - OK acha Sab chodho aur ye batao tumne kuch khaya ya nahi n tumne medicine liye ya nahi aur ratko zyada der tak padhai to nahi ki na aur neend to ache se ayi na

Nandini - omg manik apne que ko thoda pause lagao...aur meri chodho aur apna batao

Manik - Mrs nandini manik malhotra Maine aapse kuch pucha hai so don't try to divert my que OK aur chup chap batao

Nandini - manik main chup ho jaungi to bataungi kaise

Manik - nahi kiya na tumne breakfast aur lunch n as usual medicine bhi nahi li hongi

Nandini - but manik...

Then manik turn towards cabir n say

Manik - cabir sab kuch cancel karde aur aaj ki return ticket karwa right now

Nandini - manik pls no aisa mat karo...aur I know tumne bhi breakfast nahi kiya isliye mera bhi man nahi kar raha tha aur main late bhi ho rahi thi too...

Manik - too tumne isiliye kuch bhi nahi khaya...aur main so raha tha isiliye breakfast nahi kiya...but tum to kar sakti thi na

Nandini - manik I m sry

Then cabir gets up n come towards manik n keep his hands on his shoulder

Cabir - manik tu ek kaam kar...room me ja Skype on kar aur usse tere samne abhi lunch karwa aur khud bhi kar

Manik - hmmm OK

Then manik goes to his room n tells nandini to come on Skype

Manik - hmm ab apna Skype on karo

Nandini - but manik main abhi clg me hu abhi nahi

Manik - oh to tumhari classes to sari khatam ho gayi hongi na...to tum ghar ke liye abhi niklo

Nandini - but manik how can I jst leave like this...sunny aur Aisha ne mujhe rukhne ke liye kaha hai unhe mujhse koi kaam hai

Sunny n Aisha both r siblings n nandini medical clg friends...sunny is very dramatic n Aisha is very focused girl

Manik - oh ho I will talk to them later u don't wry...just leave right now warna main bhi lunch nahi karunga

Nandini - OK fine I'll leave

Then nandini messaged Aisha sunny n left from the clg

Manik - acha nandini tumhara submission kaisa tha aaj

Nandini - acha tha but pata nahi kyu bohot tension ho rahi hai

Manik - kyu kya hua project ache se nahi bana tha kya

Nandini - project to Maine complete kiya tha but wo actually aaj botony lecturer late aye to i was talking to sunny n aisha n Maine bina idhar udhar dekhe ye bol diya ki sir to hamesha late ate hai aur reason bhi nahi dete n inki wajah se students ko suffer karna padta hai aur fir ek 45 mins ki class me dhang se sabke submission bhi nahi hote aur jinke roll no baad me ate hai unka reh jata hai

Manik - ha to kisi aur student ne tumhari complain kardi kya sir se...just tell me the name of that student n I will deal with them

Nandini - nahi manik kisi student ne complain nahi ki...main jab ye sab bol rahi thi tab sir mere peeche khade the

Manik - oh shit to unhone data kya tumhe

Nandini - no but unhone sabke samne taunts mare mujhe khada kar ke...

Manik - to jab tum ye sab bol rahi thi to sunny aur Aisha kya kar rahe the unko tumhe batana chahiye tha na ki sir peeche khade hai

Nandini - ha wo dono mukhe rokne ki koshish kar rahe the but maine dhyan hi nahi diya

Manik - don't worry agar usne tumhare project me jaan much kar kam marks diye na then I will deal with him

Nandini - no manik pls aisa waisa kuch bhi mat karna pls main handle kar lungi u don't neend to worry...acha main ghar phoch gayi hu

Then nandini gets out of car n goes inside

Nandini - hi Chachi

Chachi - are wah beta nandu tu itni jaldi aa gayi aur tera submission kaisa tha

Nandini - ha Chachi acha tha aur rishab aur amms kaha hai

Chachi - dono tarase par hai tu phone pe kisses baat kar rahi hai

Nandini - manik se

Chachi - acha de to Zara Teri complain karti hu usko

Nandini - are Chachi nahi na pls

Chachi takes phone from her hand - ha beta manik kaise ho chachi bol rahi hu

Manik - hi chachi I m fine...how r u

Chachi - main to bilkul theek hu aur tum batao waha Sydney me tumhara kaam kaisa chal raha hai

Manik - nahi chachi kal hi to aye hum yaha kaam aaj sham se chalu hone wala hai

Chachi - ache se man laga ke kaam karna beta ha

Manik - man hi to nahi lag raha chachi...nandini Jo nahi hai yaha...lekin chalo ye to acha hai ki nandini aap ke pass hai warna main to so bhi nahi pata

Chachi - acha beta tum nandini se baat karo main jati hu

Manik - OK chachi bye

Nandini - ha bolo

Manik - bolo kya bolo...go to kitchen lunch lo aur room me jao n Skype on karo

Then nandini got food from the kitchen n went to her room n came on Skype

Manik - oh my god aisa lag raha hai jaise kitne Dino ke baad dekh raha hu tumhe main

Nandini - OK chalo lets finish our lunch warna thanda ho jayenga

Then both of them finish their lunch
N sit comfortably on bed

Nandini - so aaj tumhari meeting hai na sponsors ke saath

Manik - ha 6 baje hai

Nandini - ha to manik tumhe preparation karni chahiye na

Manik - meeting ki preparations kyu karu

Nandini - manik what if he'll tell u to perform for him

Manik - nandini he has already seen our performance...tabhi to he is signing fab5 na

Nandini - hmm waise bhi u guys r the best

Manik smiling - hmm

Then cabir n aliya come to manik room

Cabir - are nandini kabhi humare liye bhi time nikal liya karo

Aliya - ya nandini srsly tum to Hume bhool hi gayi ho

Nandini - aisa kuch bhi nahi hai aur waise bhi tum log khud aaj kal itni jamming karte ho ki mujhe bhool jate ho aur main tumhe disturb bhi kaha karti hu

Cabir - ha ha kyuki tumhe manik ko disturb karne me zyada maza ata hai na isiliye

Nandini - really manik main tumhe disturb karti hu

Manik - bilkul bhi nahi baby

Aliya - OK guys ab baki ki bate baad me karlena...actually wo sponsors ka call aya tha he wants to meet us now

Manik - what now ...but why meeting to 6 baje ki hai na

Cabir - pata nahi yaar kya chakar hai wo bada panik bhi kar raha tha baat karte time so I think we should leave right now

Manik - OK then lets leave...nandini i'll call u later OK bye baby

Nandini - Ok all the best to all of u bye

Cabir aliya manik - thank u so much

Manik - I love u

Nandini - I love u 2

Cabir - ho gaya chalo abhi

Then all of them leaves from hotel

Cabir - oh shit

Navya - kya hua cabir

Cabir - oh no yaar ye company ke owner ke PA ka msg hai ki performance aaj karni hai

Manik - what...tu usse baat kar main mukti ko call karta hu

Cabir - OK

Manik call mukti n cabir call the PA

Cabir - Abe yaar ye owner bhul gaya tha ki uski marriage anniversary aaj nahi ek hafte baad hai aur usse kal raat jab hum yaha pohoche tab yaad aya

Manik - dekhte hai kya hota hai...owner se baat karne ke baad hi pata chalenga

Then fab5 n navya reached the place n navya went to a shopping mall next to office fab5 met the owner

Owner - sry guys but u have to perform today 9 pm

Manik - we can perform thats not a problem...what say guys...but we don't know about the setup n how many ppl r gona come

Owner - pls don't worry about that every thing has been set up...invitation have been given n its a concert so as usual it will be crowded...banners have been put up n u guys r on front page of the news paper

Then the owner went to show them the whole setup n media was waiting for the interview
Then cabir called navya n informed her everything n told her to Join when she's done with her shopping...then after finishing all the meeting n media interactions they were practicing n navya was shopping for everybody as all of them were busy
Navya bought some cute outfits for kavya n she also bought T-shirt for cabir manik dhruv abhi n for rishab also n then she also got lot of western dresses for aliya mukti n nandini n then she went to an accessory department in mall n got pretty earing n lockets for cabirs mom n her amma chachi amms n also for herself

After finishing practice manik called nandini

Manik - hey nandini what's up

Nandini - so how was ur meeting

Manik - it was tiring...bas abhi practice khatam ki

Then manik was about to tell her that they r performing tonight but stopped n thought that he should surprise her by meeting her tomorrow

Nandini - kya hua manik kya soch rahe ho

Manik - kuch nahi bas thak gaya hu

Nandini - acha aaj na main rishab aur abhi r taking kavya to pitbull nice na

Manik - wow sounds interesting...but sambhal ke Jana ok

Nandini - manik tum kavya ko bolne ke liye bol rahe ho ya mujhe

Manik - tumhe bol raha hu my baby

Nandini - oh really...manik main tumhe bachi dikh rahi hu kya...(angrily) I can handle myself OK

Manik - OK baba I m sry ghussa kyu kar rahi ho main to mazak kar raha th

Nandini - OK bye now mujhe padhai karna hai

Manik - are itni choti si baat ko lekar kyu ghussa kar rahi ho

Nandini angrily - main ghussa nahi kar rahi hu tum mujhe disturb kar rahe ho

Manik - nandini fight karne ke bahane dhund rahi ho kya

Nandini - bye manik

Manik - shit yaar ghussa ho gayi ...manik tu to gaya...but no problem kal mujhe dekhte hi wo khush ho jayengi

Then manik called navya as he knew that nandini would call her as she has to take permission to take kavya out with her

Manik - hello navya

Navya - ha manik bolo

Manik - nandini ka call aya kya tumhe
Navya - nahi kyu kya hua

Manik - nahi kuch nahi but agar uska call aye to usse mat batana ki hum sab kal aa rahe hai...actually main usse surprise dena chahta hu

Navya - OK manik don't worry main usse nahi bataungi...aur kuch

Manik - aur ha tum jaldi aa jao waise bhi concert chalu hone me zyada thoda hi time bacha hai

Navya - ha main bas ati hu

Then navya got nandini call

Navya - wow not bad manik nandini ko kitne ache se janta hai

Navya picks up nandini call

Navya - ha bolo nandini

Nandini - kya navya kitne der se call kar rahi thi tumhara phone kyu itna busy bata raha tha...cabir to tumhare hi saath me hai to fir itne der tak kisse baat kar rahi thi

Navya - kuch nahi bas amma se baat kar rahi thi

Nandini - acha lo kavya se baat karo

Kavya - hello mumma aap kab aa rahe ho...dadi aur mujhe apki aur daddy ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai

Navya - ha mera bacha main jaldi tumhare pass aa rahi hu...n guess what mumma ne apke aur dadi ke liye bohot sare gifts liye hai

Kavya - really mumma...I love u

Navya - I love u 2 my bacha...acha dadi ko phone do

Kavya - OK...dadi ye lo mumma ko apse baat karna hai

Cabirs mom - ha beta navya bolo

Navya - mummy ji wo kavya apko pareshan to nahi kar rahi hai na...aap tension mat lena hum kal subah aa rahe hai...

Cabirs mom - are beta navya itne dino ke baad to tumhe time mila hai thoda enjoy karo itne jaldi kyu aa rahe ho...kavya ko main sambhal lungi

Navya - are nahi mummy ji aap ki health already kharab hai aur fir pure time kavya idhar udhar bhagati hai

Cabirs mom - acha theek hai beta tum log aao sab yahi ghar par ana main tumlogo ke liye breakfast bana ke rakhungi OK

Navya - ji mummy ji hum sidha ghar hi ayenge sab ko leke...acha main apko kal milti hu abhi event par bhi Jana hai so bye

Cabirs mom - bye beta...ye lo nandini ho gayi meri baat

Nandini - acha aunty main kavya ko lekar jati hu n don't worry main usse time par ghar drop kardungi

Cabirs mom - OK beta sambhal kar Jana


Then nandini n kavya left for juhu beach n abhi n rishab also joined themn then they were playing with kavya n having pani puri n ice cream ...in between manik called nandini many times but she was not picking it up intentionally...then rishab was asking her in his gesture to pick it up but she didn't listen to him

Abhi - kya hua nandini itne ghusse me kyu ho...dekho kitni achi jagah par hai hum ab to ghussa thuk do

Nandini - main ghussa hu

Abhi - to kya manik ghusse me tha

Nandini - nahi

Abhi - to fir kya hua

Nandini - woh manik kehta hai ki main fight karne ke bahane dhundti hu

Abhi - sach hi to kaha usne aur tum ho ke hamesha chid chid karti ho

Nandini angrily - main child chid karti hu ?

Abhi sarcastically - nahi main karta hu...aur Agar ghussa nahi hai to baat kar usse abhi

Nandini - fine karti hu

Then nandini calls back manik n he was standing at the backstage praying to ayyapa just like nandini

Manik - yess nandini called me...thank god

Nandini - kaha ho

Manik - tumhare dil me

Nandini blushed - acha to mere samne kyu nahi ho fir

Manik - kyuki tumne mujhe apne dil se nikala hi nahi

Nandini laughed n manik felt good listening to her laugh then kavya came to nandini n asked to give her phone

Nandini - manik tum bhi na...acha ye lo kavya se baat karo

Kavya - hello manik Chachu aap kab aa rahe ho...apne promise kiya tha ki aap aur nandu massi mujhe ghumne le jaonge

Manik - are mera baby nandu massi ne to apna promise pura kar diya but jab massi ke exams khatam ho jayenge na tab main aap dono ko achi so trip pe le jaunga

Kavya - OK Chachu bye

Nandini - ha manik bolo

Manik - nandini tum to sham me Jane wali thi ghumne but abhi kyu chali gayi

Nandini - coz u made me angry n I wanted to distract myself

Manik - I m sry nandini next time I won't tease u OK

Nandini - hmm that's like my cute hubby

Manik - OK nandini I have some work over here right now so I won't be able to speak to u later I'll talk to u tomorrow

Nandini - OK bye manik I love u

Manik - I love u 2 bye have fun

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Posted: 10 years ago
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your story is one of the best i ever read ob if really awesome dear hats off👏👏plz dear try to post early its request
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sooo cute
It's like m watching the show itself
It's sooo real and I was going then the chapter won't end
Nw I want u to upload all the parts so I don't stop reading
Great...amazing... Superb work
Plz
Plz
Plzzz continue real sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice chapter
regarding nandu's project...
poor nandu!
something similar happened with my bestie back in the school days

so i can imagine nandu's reaction pretty well

manik is planning an awesome surprise for her

what's up with nandu's health that he is so worried?

loved the chapter

continue soon

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