OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: lashy

Advertisement kar lee... par khud product test bhi nahi kiyaa 😆

Yes...coz the Manufacturer of the product is undoubtedly THE BEST! Aankh band karke I can advertise...😃

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

@ Pals Di : IYKWIM = If You Know, What I mean 😉

@ All : here are the works of Shraddha di ..

Her first glimpses of Jalal in his war armour!

Because, you're you and I'm me!

COMEDY in 21st century-Mr.Jalal, Mrs.Ruqaiyya & Nanny Ma

HE opened his eyes and THERE SHE was, beside him!

She hates me, she hates me not!

Not just a passionate affair

OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered

Princess ---- Thank you for the line in bold...Yeh Short forms kissne banaya😡...I always feel dumb with short forms around🤢 Thanks for the list dearie...Lashy forwarded it too😃...Thanks Superstar😳

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Pals2411
Princess ---- Thank you for the line in bold...Yeh Short forms kissne banaya😡...I always feel dumb with short forms around🤢 Thanks for the list dearie...Lashy forwarded it too😃...Thanks Superstar😳

Hehe.. lol! Arrey these short forms get automatically created in the way... 😆😆

Mujhe to bohot maza aata hai inhe use karne mein...😛😛😆

Aww... Your welcome !~😃

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abhi

@abhi786

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Lashy wonderful OS especially part 6 was superb... You are such wonderful gifted writer. Keep writing more...

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Lashy this SS of urs is just awesome👏 👏👏
I read it in one go...cudnt stop...i m glad i didnt have to wait for each update 😃

I loved how their equation changed over the course of the trip...Jallu loves teasing Jo butbcares for her too!! It was sonsweet of him tonget veggie food prepared for her...
Jo fought bravely with the dacoits and saved Jallu too and so did he...their nok jhok on who shud thank who was also cute!!
Loved the way to described his care and concern while she was unconcious...him scolding the Hakim, his frustration, everything!!
I m glad found out everything from the maids that he was saying all those things to keep her mind off her treatment and paid her numerous visits the past 5 days and was genuinely worried for her!!
But Jallu is Jallu...doesnt wanna show his feelings...
It was so sweet of him to take her to the Mandir...he made her so happy but in their egos they went a bit far...
Loved how he pushed her for answer by saying he wudnt talk to her ever if she didnt answer, it was a great idea but he himself suffered whole night due to it 😆
The turmoil Jo was having becoz of this was described very well by u and m glad Moti made her realise that her hatred for Jalaal is gone now...
They both r tedha...she found an awesome way to give him his answer without saying a word...it was beautiful
The best part of this story was there was no MA and Ruqu etc to spoil the mood 😆

I think u shud continue this SS only and make it a FF...wud love to see how their relationship proceeds here after!! U really shud consider my suggestion...its my request to u! 😳

I truely enjoyed reading it, u r an awesome writer!!

Love
Preet

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rpeez

@rpeez

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Shraddha, this is glorious! 👏

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: rishbala3018
Lashy this SS of urs is just awesome👏 👏👏
I read it in one go...cudnt stop...i m glad i didnt have to wait for each update 😃

I loved how their equation changed over the course of the trip...Jallu loves teasing Jo butbcares for her too!! It was sonsweet of him tonget veggie food prepared for her...
Jo fought bravely with the dacoits and saved Jallu too and so did he...their nok jhok on who shud thank who was also cute!!
Loved the way to described his care and concern while she was unconcious...him scolding the Hakim, his frustration, everything!!
I m glad found out everything from the maids that he was saying all those things to keep her mind off her treatment and paid her numerous visits the past 5 days and was genuinely worried for her!!
But Jallu is Jallu...doesnt wanna show his feelings...
It was so sweet of him to take her to the Mandir...he made her so happy but in their egos they went a bit far...
Loved how he pushed her for answer by saying he wudnt talk to her ever if she didnt answer, it was a great idea but he himself suffered whole night due to it 😆
The turmoil Jo was having becoz of this was described very well by u and m glad Moti made her realise that her hatred for Jalaal is gone now...
They both r tedha...she found an awesome way to give him his answer without saying a word...it was beautiful
The best part of this story was there was no MA and Ruqu etc to spoil the mood 😆

I think u shud continue this SS only and make it a FF...wud love to see how their relationship proceeds here after!! U really shud consider my suggestion...its my request to u! 😳

I truely enjoyed reading it, u r an awesome writer!!

Love
Preet

@ bold: i had wanted her to continue too and hoped she would - i am still hoping she would when she is done with NJAPA.

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Thanks so much Preet for such wonderful words... 🤗

Thanks Raksha, Ashwini, Leksha and Ayesha for the encouragement 😳

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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Pooja

@Jais1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Lashy what a SS it was amazing.
I am glad i have not to wait for your update and read it continuously it was awesome. Lashy if you have written more SS or OS please pm me the link .

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cosmosandme

@cosmosandme

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

that is a masterpiece !!! sooo beautifully written !!! i'm now at loss of words now...

ur jalal is such a wise and witty person, his remarks, replies,attitude,grandeur makes him THE ROYAL EMPEROR,... who can make people to do what he wants. for an instance i loved it when jodha was expecting a thank you, he made her thank him instead. and his way of distracting her when hakim did stitching , his way of turning down her demands and then fulfilling them with giving witty reasons behind rejections, not letting out his inner feelings come out but make her speak her mind instead makes him THE KING. who never let anyone have an eye on his possession , makes sure of his wife's comfort... praise her and make it pun at the end... and the list is endless. but this jalal has got style i must say, even ur moti is very intelligent. and last but not the list the climax ... unmatchable !!! for an instance i thought jodha wouldn't pay heed, i knew that had the slightest chance, but she didn't appear till morning made me anxious , that the worst is gonna happen !!! but what an end !!! she spoke everything without any words, what a subtle way ! i never ever thought she would come up with such a brilliant idea of conveying her message , definitely saying it bluntly was not easy for her.but she found an ultimate solution and she proved her self the wise QUEEN.

and they both lived happily ever after... 😃

u r a born writer ⭐️ and with this the supply of os comes to a halt (can't call it an end ). please keep writing such os if ff is not convenient to u. it was indeed brilliant. varsha was so true about them... and i'm thankful to her, had she not told me, i would have never known about it.