OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep - Page 18

Originally posted by: lashy

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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

@ Pals Di : IYKWIM = If You Know, What I mean 😉

@ All : here are the works of Shraddha di ..

Her first glimpses of Jalal in his war armour!

Because, you're you and I'm me!

COMEDY in 21st century-Mr.Jalal, Mrs.Ruqaiyya & Nanny Ma

HE opened his eyes and THERE SHE was, beside him!

She hates me, she hates me not!

Not just a passionate affair

OS- 'I have something IMPORTANT to tell you, Jodha Begum' he whispered

Princess ---- Thank you for the line in bold...Yeh Short forms kissne banaya😡...I always feel dumb with short forms around🤢 Thanks for the list dearie...Lashy forwarded it too😃...Thanks Superstar😳

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Princess ---- Thank you for the line in bold...Yeh Short forms kissne banaya😡...I always feel dumb with short forms around🤢 Thanks for the list dearie...Lashy forwarded it too😃...Thanks Superstar😳

Lashy this SS of urs is just awesome👏 👏👏
I read it in one go...cudnt stop...i m glad i didnt have to wait for each update 😃

I loved how their equation changed over the course of the trip...Jallu loves teasing Jo butbcares for her too!! It was sonsweet of him tonget veggie food prepared for her...
Jo fought bravely with the dacoits and saved Jallu too and so did he...their nok jhok on who shud thank who was also cute!!
Loved the way to described his care and concern while she was unconcious...him scolding the Hakim, his frustration, everything!!
I m glad found out everything from the maids that he was saying all those things to keep her mind off her treatment and paid her numerous visits the past 5 days and was genuinely worried for her!!
But Jallu is Jallu...doesnt wanna show his feelings...
It was so sweet of him to take her to the Mandir...he made her so happy but in their egos they went a bit far...
Loved how he pushed her for answer by saying he wudnt talk to her ever if she didnt answer, it was a great idea but he himself suffered whole night due to it 😆
The turmoil Jo was having becoz of this was described very well by u and m glad Moti made her realise that her hatred for Jalaal is gone now...
They both r tedha...she found an awesome way to give him his answer without saying a word...it was beautiful
The best part of this story was there was no MA and Ruqu etc to spoil the mood 😆

I think u shud continue this SS only and make it a FF...wud love to see how their relationship proceeds here after!! U really shud consider my suggestion...its my request to u! 😳

I truely enjoyed reading it, u r an awesome writer!!

Love
Preet

Shraddha, this is glorious! 👏

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Lashy this SS of urs is just awesome👏 👏👏
I read it in one go...cudnt stop...i m glad i didnt have to wait for each update 😃

I loved how their equation changed over the course of the trip...Jallu loves teasing Jo butbcares for her too!! It was sonsweet of him tonget veggie food prepared for her...
Jo fought bravely with the dacoits and saved Jallu too and so did he...their nok jhok on who shud thank who was also cute!!
Loved the way to described his care and concern while she was unconcious...him scolding the Hakim, his frustration, everything!!
I m glad found out everything from the maids that he was saying all those things to keep her mind off her treatment and paid her numerous visits the past 5 days and was genuinely worried for her!!
But Jallu is Jallu...doesnt wanna show his feelings...
It was so sweet of him to take her to the Mandir...he made her so happy but in their egos they went a bit far...
Loved how he pushed her for answer by saying he wudnt talk to her ever if she didnt answer, it was a great idea but he himself suffered whole night due to it 😆
The turmoil Jo was having becoz of this was described very well by u and m glad Moti made her realise that her hatred for Jalaal is gone now...
They both r tedha...she found an awesome way to give him his answer without saying a word...it was beautiful
The best part of this story was there was no MA and Ruqu etc to spoil the mood 😆

I think u shud continue this SS only and make it a FF...wud love to see how their relationship proceeds here after!! U really shud consider my suggestion...its my request to u! 😳

I truely enjoyed reading it, u r an awesome writer!!

Love
Preet

Thanks so much Preet for such wonderful words... 🤗

Lashy what a SS it was amazing.
I am glad i have not to wait for your update and read it continuously it was awesome. Lashy if you have written more SS or OS please pm me the link .

that is a masterpiece !!! sooo beautifully written !!! i'm now at loss of words now...