OSR SS- She hates me, she hates me not! Final pt6-Pg1 updated 21st Sep - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
You kept this lovely SS away from me😲 If not for Princess, I would not have found this thread for sure🥱😡 Aur kya bolu🥱
The SS is a beautiful one...Jallu is truly a Shahenshah quite commanding and not at all dumb 😉.. He doesn't give in so easily😉...Jo is beautiful as always...I loved the banters they exchanged😳... You have infused the action sequences because you long to see them na😆😆 But I loved it...Every chapter is beautifully written...Specially the last chapter (after the Jallu in chamber part where he was all alone looking restlessly at the peaceful moon😉)...Finally Jo won by wearing the blue outfit that he presented...For a minute I thought what if he doesn't observe her outfit, phir to pura popat hota Thankfully he made it on time😃...Honestly I was looking for the next chapter...Jallu was so eager to return Agra soon...His thoughts gave away a lot😉 I was eager for 'his return' and my Jo's reply tooo😳😳...Alas...You as usual did all kachra😡.😡😡🥱... Yeh SS wahi band hua🤢🥱😭...You know what I also checked Page 2 (despite reading that Part 6 was the last chapter)😭...😡
Lashy, if you have more such treasures locked up in your store, then release them fast😡...I want to read them, than reading Jo (she is the scapegoat always)/Jallu getting bashed threads in the forum😡
A big thanks to my Princess🤗 for letting me know about this SS.😛
Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant writing 👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was really good !! and u imagined it even before the tiger attack track,wow, brilliant !! 👏
Jalal's portrayal was best. it was felt more so perhaps because i reflexively compared it to the current track- wala-Jalal. Even your Jodha is sooo lovable,unlike the current one.
Wish you hadn't stopped where you did,which was at such an interesting juncture, am sure all readers must be dying to know what must have happened after Jalal's return.
Also thankful for small mercy like no MA-Ruk !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

You kept this lovely SS away from me😲 If not for Princess, I would not have found this thread for sure🥱😡 Aur kya bolu🥱

The SS is a beautiful one...Jallu is truly a Shahenshah quite commanding and not at all dumb 😉.. He doesn't give in so easily😉...Jo is beautiful as always...I loved the banters they exchanged😳... You have infused the action sequences because you long to see them na😆😆 But I loved it...Every chapter is beautifully written...Specially the last chapter (after the Jallu in chamber part where he was all alone looking restlessly at the peaceful moon😉)...Finally Jo won by wearing the blue outfit that he presented...For a minute I thought what if he doesn't observe her outfit, phir to pura popat hota Thankfully he made it on time😃...Honestly I was looking for the next chapter...Jallu was so eager to return Agra soon...His thoughts gave away a lot😉 I was eager for 'his return' and my Jo's reply tooo😳😳...Alas...You as usual did all kachra😡.😡😡🥱... Yeh SS wahi band hua🤢🥱😭...You know what I also checked Page 2 (despite reading that Part 6 was the last chapter)😭...😡
Lashy, if you have more such treasures locked up in your store, then release them fast😡...I want to read them, than reading Jo (she is the scapegoat always)/Jallu getting bashed threads in the forum😡
A big thanks to my Princess🤗 for letting me know about this SS.😛



Aww di 🤗

I still have to read 4 parts..😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



😆 Ahem... how times have changed...

Wow!!! I can hardly imagine myself commenting in one line wo bhi so formally!!😲😆 Kahan ye 1 line aur kahan mere abhi k essays! 🤣
So glad the times changed...❤️
Love you sooo very much di..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏

This story was so good. This is what Jodha-Akbar were supposed to be. Not the blithering mopping idiots they are being shown.

Hats off !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.. I'm a bit overwhelmed by the resurrections currently...
Lil Don a big big big hug to you for your comments here 🤗 you are the biggest darling reader a writer can ever have, you know that?

Hope you managed to see my three other OSes her...
Thanks so much Sam...
Thanks mdeshpande
Thanks Varsha 🤗
and biggest thanks to Choti for digging this up...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Wow.. I'm a bit overwhelmed by the resurrections currently...

Lil Don a big big big hug to you for your comments here 🤗 you are the biggest darling reader a writer can ever have, you know that?
Hope you managed to see my three other OSes her...
Don't want a big big hug, a tight hug is enough dear...Big hug ke andar koi aur bhi ghus sakta hai😉...Biggest darling reader😲😲😲...Natak tha... I knew it😎...I am touched dear😳😳
Three other OSes😲...Kaunse?...Please pass on the links dear...Me and many others would love to read that (I am pretty sure of that😃)

Thanks so much Sam...
Thanks mdeshpande
Thanks Varsha 🤗
and biggest thanks to Choti for digging this up...

Princess - Thank you once again😛😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
till part 6
last part
awesome...
excellent...
my God these 2 were at each others' neck...
and Jalal has truly found his equal...
and Jodha her feelings have started to change...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

till part 6
last part
awesome...
excellent...
my God these 2 were at each others' neck...
and Jalal has truly found his equal...
and Jodha her feelings have started to change...


Thanks so so so much 🤗 I see you've read all my OSes and my SS...

all thanks to choti for resurrecting everything...main tho bhool hi gayee thee..😳
LD did you manage to spot the other two OSes... but, they were on tracks at that time.. so, it might not make much sense now.. IYKWIM.. 😊
Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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