Don't let me Go!! (Completed!!)

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The sun was cruel so was the wind... every thing in the universe suddenly turned against me! I know she's still mine amongst all the lime light n the fame surrounding her she'd fight to protect what belongs to me but the announcement in the news paper only was weakening my strength


THE MOST INFLUENTIAL FAMILIES TO UNITE...

GEET HANDA TO TIE A KNOT WITH RAHUL SHARMA !!


Flash Back...



Geet please... give me my phone back now ... Geet listen...

Their laughter echoed though my house along with the sound of payal... confused I entered my home to enquire about the sudden guest ... As I've never heard or watched anvesha being ao loud n cheerful... Not that she didn't laugh or something but I never witnessed this side of her.. Maybe coz she was mostly brought up in hostels... I missed watching her grow in front of me ...


Maa who is with Anvesha???


Umm it's Geet her childhood friend she's in the city for 2 days so I insisted her to stay here... she's a sweet girl...


Don't know if she would be able to attend Anu's wedding or not so i thought that they'll catch up now. ..


Hope you don't have any problem with it...


Aree.. no maa y would I have a problem it's Anu's friend...
Ok I'll go n freshen up n come... as I entered my room I felt some one run behind me ...


Maaa look at Anu she's troubling me...

I heard that cute complaint in a baby voice I tried to see her face but she already entered into the kitchen...


After having a relaxing bath I was feeling a bit fresh so I thought to sit in our balcony for a while..


Bhai u r here I was looking for u in ur room... I wanted to introduce you to my friend now where is she... Geet!


Coming! Maa I'll just be back ok..


I heard her saying to my mom n walking towards Anu's room wiping her hands with her dupatta...


Geet I'm here in the balcony...


What is it anu y r u shouting so much for... and she stopped her words after looking at me... as if trying to recognize me...
Wow she had such a beautiful eyes I couldn't break my gaze from her... it was as if I was hypnotized... deep as oceans


Bhai! Meet my friend Geet.. n Geet this is my brother Maan khurana!


Nice to meet you... She said in her soft voice


Thank you Babaji! anu didn't notice or else she would have caught me gaping at her brother what would she think about me...


N I was lost in her who was making cute faces looking at the ceiling... N Anu was telling me something about today's events. .. just then the the door bell rang...


Anu go n see who's at the door. .


Ji bhai!


She hurriedly left rushing down the stairs n we both could hear maa yelling from the kitchen asking her to be careful not to run n all ...

She chuckled n a smile crept on my face it I was about to say something but maa came up hurriedly asking me to bring some milk from the nearby supermarket ...

Maa can I get it, it's just round the corner right! U take care of the guests I'll get it quickly before we could say some thing she left hurriedly n me n maa kept staring at her...

It was all usual thing with anu's wedding nearby we always had relatives drop by us... so we all settled in the hall chatting n me n maa were getting worried that she wasn't back yet... maa quickly made some excuse n sent me out I was just few steps away from my house I saw her coming towards me ... she was walking with difficulty almost limping that's when I noticed her chudidar was slowly turning red!


God she was hurt!


As she noticed me she suddenly straightened herself n walked up normally...


The sight only pained me somewhere... I know she was hurt n was trying to hide it from me so I played along... I took the packets from her n asked her to come soon as the guests were waiting...


N walked ahead...


They insisted to visit the temple nearby while leaving so I sent maa n Anu with them...


As they left I walked into our kitchen to bring some warm water n the medical kit walking back to the hall I found her cribbing something looking at her wounded leg ... with eyes filled with water...


I deliberately made some noise to let her know I was coming...


She quickly placed her leg down n pretend to watch TV...


I quietly settled beside her with the first aid box n very carefully lifted her leg making sure not to hurt her not to hurt her n looked at her...

God she looked so innocent with her big brown eyes n pouting lips slight moisture in her eyes...

I was returning from supermarket when a bike skid in front of me n to save my self from the accident I moved a bit n fell down... I completed with a pout

Hmm...

Babaji just hmm... here I told him such a big incident of my life n just hmm... not fair

She was still complaining when I lifted her suddenly... before she could say something I took her to Anu's room n made her lie on the bed n left

After an hour or so I got up with the noise of anu... she helped her walk to the dining table n we all had our dinner maa was very much worried for her so was anu... I somehow convinced them I was fine n it was a small wound... but some ware I was more concerned about her...

We finally decided to retire for the night but sleep was far away from my eyes as the one who stole my sleep was in the very next room n was in pain...

Next day was a working day for me I was in a hurry to leave for work n all the ladies were busy in kitchen

When geet came out with my breakfast she placed it on the table n walked back I was so much restless to see her limping then she came back with water jug n softly whispered she was better n settled in one of the chairs...giving piece to my restless heart i finished my breakfast hurriedly steeling glances at her blushing form now n then n left to work...


For the whole day all I did at work was to think about her...N was back home only to find it locked! Oh how did I forget she might have left!


Dejected I walked to my room to find a small note attached to the door

Promise I'll take care of myself...

Only if u return the same...

-Geet



To Be Continued...




INDEX

Part #2 Page-4

Part #3 Page-16(Last Part)


My other works


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STORY OF MY LOST HEART!

BEYOND LOGICS!!

Tiny Surprises n Sweet Shocks!

Silly Little Heart!!

A Tempting Scotch Bottle!

You are My Home!!

KASH! mera OS :)

The Tough Nut!



Hay pep!

Now don't give me looks😛

This will only have 3 parts n will finish it today itself if anyone likes n asks for the next that is😕


-Spoorthi

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