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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nashfa

Awesome chapter
Loved it
Omg so much of humiliation for zain
Continue is on aur ha take care



Riya

Riya
Thank you so much
ya he was humiliated without her knowing she was abusing him
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

OMG Aaliya have gone through so much

In one update I feel Zain's pain is more
But in other I feel Aaliya have gone through more miseries
I have become a shuttlecock between them
Every time when I read the story or comment it always makes my eyes moist You just cast a spell on us with your words
The way That woman was describing Aaliya's condition and what Zain was feeling...😭
Tremendous job SIM👏
Continue soon

Kiran
😆 shuttle cock
I love you for this
Thank you so much
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manny136

Lovely chapter. Another heartbreaking one for sure but i think it was important for zain to know all this. Poor guy his guilt is multiplying daily and hopefully his reaction to all this new information about what aliya went through and the things he reads in the diary will make him more determined and not break his resolve. What aliya has been through poor girl u can sympathize with her and her reaction to zain but she really needs to let it out she shouldnt bottle it up and cry alone she needs to talk to someone. The words in the end so beautiful. Cant wait for the next update hopefully a good convo btwn zaya.

Manny
yes Zain had to see her pain ...
lets see what his new resolve is ...but you are the only positive soul who said that
Thank you so much
yes a zaya convo on the way ...enjoy
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you so much
love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Rocking update can't wait to know what happens next

Naina
the letter was beautiful...and keep on showering love ...one day it comes back
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

So I have survived so far ..means I am still alive after hurting you all and our Zaya ...😆

Walk in to some more puzzles ...let see what Zain is upto..

Dedication: To my dearest Kiran (Zaya Fatima)...we are soul buddies you exactly pick the lines that are most closest to my heart, love you loads dear ...thank you for being a wonderful part of my journey ...loads and loads of love for every word that you type ...

SIM



Chapter 12

Ajeeb si baat...

As Rhea walked in, she saw she had broken a deep conversation, as Heena Khallas face looked tensed and Zains head had dropped down...she smiled ...

maybe hearing about the kids had opened up Zains insight about life...she felt happy that her purpose of getting him here was solved ...

Aree aap abhi baatein kar rahi hai ...humein jaana hoga ...nikaltle hai ...khalla khayal rakhyega, she hugged her tight as Khalla smiled and blessed her with happiness...

She started walking out only to realize Zain was not moving ...challe ...he looked up ...

and she saw a face that laid haunted ...and cursed ...disturbed, unknown to her that he had discovered some hidden wounds ...that were bleeding again ...

He slowly gave his silent sallam to the women who had cursed him so bitterly and walked out ...

As they walked out,he abruptly stopped in the corridor ...she turned around realizing he was not following her...

Ab kya hua ...

He pointed towards the restroom ...still not able to see in her eyes...

Oh ..jao ..mai bahar wait karti hu ...she walked ahead ...and stood waiting

Zain walked in ...and opened her diary ...the one that she had written when she had lost her memory ...

It was crunched at several places ...

He read ...to be revealed ...few lines that smashed his heart ...as tears fell down ...he realized ...

kya hua ...kaun hai ...maloom nahi ...bas dhundla chehra hai ...har roz aata hai ...bhoolta hi nahi ...

kaun hai who ...kisikoh nahi maloom ...par bahut dard hai ...jaise kisine dil mai kil chuboyi ho ...kaun hai who ...nazar bhi nahi aata ...

As Zain flipped pages ...soaking in all her pain ...he read ...and re-read ...

His identity was splashed on each page with no face or name ...her pain was beyond measures now ...

he hid the diary back in his bag ...and drenched his face with water ...the red eyes would give way his tears ...he wore his shades ...and looked at the image ...and silently walked out ...

As she looked irritated...

Ek toh yaha tak drive karo...aur janab apne speed mai aise washroom mai waqt guzarte hai ...jaise makeup kar rahe ho...

aur yeh chashma kyu style marne ke liye pehna hai ...andar kaunsi dhoop tumhare aankhon mai chub rahi hai ...utaro usse ...

He just looked up, took it out ...and then put his head down ...

She muttered a few more frustrating words as she reached the car ...

Taking a deep breath she realized ...maybe he was feeling low knowing about the kids ...

Ice-cream khane chalet hai...she asked as he stood silent ...the real suffocation was asphyxiating him ...

He didn't answer ...and looked down ...

Oh ...mai toh bhool gayi ...ab baat kar sakte ho ...

Nahi ghar chalet hai...as the first set of words made way in his dry mouth ...she looked surprised ...

As he sat down in the car ...she saw he had faded away in thoughts ...

Aaliya thought of cheering him up...maybe this was the right time to push him away ...a bit of love and push would work ...

She drove near a lake and stopped ...as she got down she realized he was still quiet ...

Kya hua apni pakar pakar nahi kar rahe ho...mood kharab ho gaya kya...orphanage jaa kar

He closed the door and walked ahead to stand next to her ...

Yeh lo ...she extended something as he looked up ...it was an ice cream packet ...

Car par rakh do ...le lunga ...

She was surprised ..kya hua ...haat mai de rahi hu ...le lo ...kal toh itna tamasha kiya ...ab kya hua

Nahi ...mat do ...haath mai ...mat choona mujhe ...

She kept it on the hot cars bonnet ...her eyebrows settling in a question mode

Sukoon milta hai waha mujhe ...bahut madad karte hai dad un bcaaho ki ...sab ke paas nahi hoti aise zindagi ...yehi samjhana chahti thi ...

Sorry ...

Tumhare sorry ke liye nahi ...nadani ke liye ...le gay thi waha ...aainda marne ki baat mat karna ...

khuda sabko itni lambi zindagi nahi deta ...tumhare paas mami hai bhai hai ..itna pyaara parivaar hai ...

sab chahte hai tumhe ...unke liye aise batein phir mat karna ...

Baat samaj mai aayi...aainda aise nahi bolunga ...

Are pigal rahi hai ...ice cream kha lo ...she pointed towards the fast melting mound ...

He picked it ...wiping the car ...and threw the ice cream in the nearby dustbin ...

Pigal gayi thi ...sorry...

Kya hua tumhe ..aise ukhde se kyu lag rahe ho...na lad rahe ho ..na zidd kar rahe ho ...she came close

Haar gaye kya ...wapas chale jaaoge na ...ab toh...jaoge na

As she moved ahead ..he stepped back ...

Maine kaha na ...door raho ...mujhse ...

Kyu ..

Mat choona ...mat kareeb aao ...

Kal ke mere lines kyu bol rahe ho ...chor kahin ke...

Kyunki yehi sach hai ...gunaah hai ...mat bano ...gunhegaar

Toh tum wapas jaoge ...she wanted to hear a yes ...her heart still wanted a no ...

He smiled at her ...nahi ...bilkul nahi ...akele nahi jaunga ...

She starred back in shock...he would never give up come what may ...

He took a step back away maintaining a distance now ...jayej hai ghussa tumhara ...sach mai mujhe choona gunaah hai ...aainda aisa gunaah mat karna ...mai toh hu hi gunhegaar ...tumhe bhi rang dunga ...jaise holi mai ranga tha ...

She looked puzzled...she couldn't understand what he was trying to say ...the visit was to open his eyes towards life ...but it seemed he had shut himself up ...

Toh tum nahi jaaoge ...

Nahi ...Abhi agar jaao...toh tumhare zakhm bhar jayenge ...shayad kisi ek din tum wapas bhi aa jao...par mere ...he stopped ...

Soch lo ...waise bhi dozak mai rehta ho...aur satungi ...roz tadpaungi...jeena dushvar kardungi tumhara

Tadpa lo...Sata lo ...yeh nafrat ye nazar andajgi ...barkara rakho ...ab kisika asar nahi hoga mujhpar ..

Allah ka paigam mil gaya mujhe ...ab jab tak is rishte koh uski manzil aur apne kismet ka faisla nahi sun lu, tumhare muh se ...tab tak ...is chehre par sirf muskurahat hogi ...aur haa mai wapis nahi jaunga

Haa ...par choona nahi mujhe ...ab nahi bardhast kar paunga ...tumhe apne gunaah mai nahi shamil kar sakta ...he starred back as she looked at him weirdly ...

Toh tum roz ek nayi takleef ke liye tayar ho...

Malika e Zain ...tum kuch bhi karlo main ahi jaunga ...

Theek hai ...toh tayar ho jao ...

Tayar hu...Chale ...la ...aa rahi hai shaam koh ...tumhare saath ghoomne ke liye ...par maine confirm kiya tha , ki mai bhi kabab mai haddi banuga ...

waise asli kabab mai haddi toh tum ho ...hum dono ke beech ..kabhi hume akele bhi ghoomne diya karo

Toh ab tume izazzat nahi chaiye bahar jaane ke liye ...khatam hogaya natak ...

He laughed ...haa ...par ab tak maine usse poocha nahi hai ...ab poochunga ...ek baar tum haa bolo toh ...

Kyu ...mai kaun lagti hu tumhari

Aree tumhe nahi pata...biwi ho tum meri...biwi...

Mai nahi hu...she stopped ...tum jaise insaan se koi rishta rakhega bhi kyu ...

Sach kaha ...mujh jaise log kam hi hote hai...aur itne gire haue to bas lakho mai ek ...he laughed ...

Aur waise bhi ab toh adat hogi baccho ki tarah ...izzazat mang kar gunaah karne ki ...his tone sounded cold ...

Theek hai bula lo usse...varna phir koi ghtaiya sa dialogue bologe ...

He smiled ...bas itna hi ...aur bolo na ...aaj accha lag raha hai ...bolo ...mujhse seekhna chaiye tha ...mai kaise sunata tha tumhe ...yaad hai ...kaise thokar maarta tha ...kuch yaad aaya ...hotel ka room...office ka cabin ...ghar par kiye huae bezati...yaad hai na ...

Her anger rejenuvated ...Tumhara dimaag kharab ho gaya hai ...kya yaad dilanae ki firaak mai ho

Haa ...ho gaya hai ...ab thikane laga hai

chalo ..chalo ...aur haa ..ice cream ke liye ...thanks ...meri baat rakhi tumne ...joh mai nahi karta tha ...tum toh bahut reham dil ho yaar, mujh jaise toh nah ho...

She came close to him ...he stepped back...

kya kar rahi ho ...

check kar rahi thi ...tum who choone ki baat sach keh rahe the ya jhooth ...

He held her hand ...and giggled ....jhooth tha ...bilkul meri tarah ...tumhe kareeb lane ka ek ghatiya chaal ...Da ...mujh jaise ghatiya insaan se aise ghatiya baatein hi niklegi ...

Aur haa he held her face close to his lips ...and kissed her cheeks ...so fast that she couldn't react ...pulling her strongly in his arms ...ab mai aur bhi kiss karne wala hu...he came close to touch her lips with his hands ...she pushed him back with anger ...almost hitting his chest

Tumhe thappad khana hai ... as she pushed him away ...

Maro na ...he extended his cheeks ...she moved back ...

I hate you Zain Abdullah ...aur yeh harkat tumhe bahut mehngi padegi ...agar is gustakhi ka harzana nahi bharvaya tumse ...toh tyaad rakhna ...

Ahhh ...sahi kaha ...mai bhi nafrat karta hu ...kaisa aadmi hai ...itni khoobsurat ladki paas mai hai aur itna suhana mauka choda raha hai ...kareeb aane ka ...badzaat kahi ka ...hai na ...

aur uspar jhoot bolta hai ..dhoka se kiss deta hai ...logo koh rota hua chodta hai ...aise gunhgaar se to tum door hi rehna ...Aaliya ...bach ke rehna iss mamu ke bhanje se ...

Kya ho gaya hai tume...

Pyaar ...tumse ...aur ab wahi karunga ...aur haa ..mai choonga tumhe, chumunga bhi ...

bolna apne khuda se ...dozak mai mujhe jalaye ...haat aur muh toh mere hai na ...tumhe nahi ... aur haa ...he held her around her waist ...tight ...mujhe jalana hai toh who tumhe istamal kar sakta hai ...choote hi aag lagti hai ..

She pushed him hard ...Zain ...mujhe laga tum yaha laakar mei tumse peecha chuda paungi ...aur tum aise ajeeb baatein kar rahe ho ...aur aaj tumne apni had paar kar di ...

Galat socha ...ab toh mai aur pagal ho gay ahu ...chipku ...kuch bhi kar lo nahi jaaunga ...

Tum wakai sathya gaye ho ...aur aaj ki harkat tumhe bahut mehngi padegi...who hashar karungi ki rote rote Mumbai bhaag jaaoge ...

Haa shayad ...sahi kaha rote hi jaogi ...apne mayeke se joh jaugi ...hai na

Chalo mujhe tayaar hona ..blue shirt layaa hai ...hot lagunga ...meri la ke liye ...la la la la la

Aaliya shook her head ...nothing will ever affect him as she walked towards the car ...and Zain turned back ...

Wiping his tears ...he knew what he had to do ...his khudas message was loud and clear ...

Aree is jungle mai chod kar mat jaana ...aa rah ahu ...as he ran behind her car

Kuch toh Dil na aaj faisal kiya hai ...

ek raaj aaj is zubaan ne apne andar see joh liya hai ...

Pre-cap: La and Da ...Ta Da Ta Da... 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just awesome... I was new here and my 1st fanfiction was yours sim.. I have been a silent reader since like the start of your ff...i got busy in mid way but i am back now...i am jus like everyone else... crazy for zaya and harshika...your ff is lik one of my favorites... I can jus feel them doing that...u describe it so well...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter Sim!
But i m very confused right now...
What has Zain decided to do...?
His behaviour is confusing me...
You have brought in humour perfectly... In the whole chapter! Loved it...


Please continue asap!
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Posted: 10 years ago
super fab updtes sim!!! aliyas nightmare,their orphanage visit..so well described ..outstanding work as always👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..u r right dear ..life is very precious and uncertain ..kabhi kabhi hum samaj nhi paatein uski value jab tak kisiko uske liye jaghadta hua na dekhe ...poor zain..humiliation and amount of guilt which is inceresing everyday ...seems like he got affected dis time very badly by khalas curse nd all d pain rhea hd gone through😭...but y he is doing la la all of sudden😆..super excited to read further😛... btw loved all shayries by u❤️.. ...really sorry for commenting late😭..exams and uparse ye fever ..thanks for pm😃...plzz continue soon ..waiting...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter sim,
Loved it
Zain's behavior is confusing me
continue soon
Take care

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