FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 30

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

chapter 9

i dunno how you do it..or why you do it..but Sim,you make me..cry..i can't take this pain Sim..its breaking me..believe me..its rare..this feeling of almost reaching my breaking point after reading a chapter...its not everytime that i can connect to something and fall in love with it headlong..everytime Zain crumbles down in pain...everytime aaliya hides her tears..everytime they endure that pain which is clawing at their insides...every single time I wince in pain too..I cry.>Sim...and I have never cried for characters like this..I can't see my zaya in this misery...and your dialogues and words..just make the wounds a lil deeper than before..

Love

Ann

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

i need some time to gather my thoughts...

Originally posted by: arohi_

Amazing update...Waiting for Nxt

Originally posted by: Zloca

While reading ur story, one understands how far a person willing to go for love. What Zain is doing only demonstrates the power of his love. Being stubborn and tenacious sometimes is good.

Aaliyas fears were justified. No matter how strong she seemed before him, she still cares for his own good. If only she invited him to stay in the house. Maybe watching him from the balcony is enough for her. But touch a loved one and feel the warmth of his body after such a dream is the best feeling.

Love is not a sin. If God wanted it to be sin, people might have fled from it. But to love and be loved is the best feeling. The two of them know it and one day when they come back together (IF they come back together) they will appreciate love even more.

I went through so many Indian films and several series that I learned the language. This is actually the best way to learn a new language. Listening songs and watching films or series is the easiest way to learn it. I understand Hindi quite well. So I understand all dialogues. 😃

Can't wait for the next update.

Best of luck for ur future stories. I am sure u will rock it and we will definitely enjoy it.😊

Originally posted by: manny136

Man that was heavy but Aliya is totally feeling zains pain as well as her own. The whole dream was so heartbreaking and zains emotions came through to aliya that is why she saw all that and heard all that. Now she needs to see for real that zain is trying to redeem himself. She is still feeling the pain she felt a year ago but now she is also feeling zains pain. That dream was pretty scary and aliyas feelings for zain came out. Poor thing is so confused coz she is in pain, anger hurt and also feels guilty which clouding her feelings for zain. Cant wait for the next update and pls keep zian safe lol

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Amazing chapter Sim!!!

Loved it!

Zain trying to create humour even in tension was actually the part where I was laughing in between tears!

And the poem in the end... It was just fantastic!

Touched my heart completely!

I am just very eager to know what Zain does now...

Please please please please continue soon!!!!!!

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Zain.

A man who isn't flawless but yet most adored. The turning pages of a diary has each and every moment of Aaliya scribed in it. The fear is what Zain has heard and after he reads the diary, will he walk away?

Honestly, I'd like him to walk away and leave Aaliya on her own for sometime. Because time heals us all. As time will pass Aaliya will automatically realise what value Zain has in her life.

Yet Zain has comeback to suffering, Rhea or Aaliya has alot of people on her side to take care of her, support her. But Zain, of what he's going through no one can understand except those who have felt the pain and 'ghutan' in love.

This chapter very finely has put a spotlight back to a quick flashback, it's like a little flash or pop up reminder for Zain, reminding him what he's done.

As far as Heena khalla stands, what she said is right till where she knows. But not knowing the unconditional love Zain and Aaliya have for eachother, those words are just words. If curses were so easy to give and bear, I don't think she herself would have been standing there...

The crucial part in the characters are that everyone has seen Aaliya's pain because it was 'expressed' but no one can see Zain's because it's finely bottled up...abd if soon Aaliya dosent open this bottle let flow the pain and fill love, I'm afraid she might loose him- Forever. And this time there will be no way of bringing him back.

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

emotional chap...
superbly written
omg!! so much humiliation
nw wat will zain do
bt I can understand aaliya's pain also eagerly waiting 4 next chp
do cont soon !!

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Chapter 10

It was a dreadful dream

The way Zain was saying naam tw pata nahi lekin log mujhe choote nahi hain haram hun na. . .

And Aaliya was stoping him from talking furthe, Their pain is immense

It makes me cry bitterly.😭

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

This diary sum up perfectly Aaliya's state , she knows Zain's weakness let's see what he will do ?so excited for the coming chapters continue soon !