FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Thank you so much SIM for every single word I'm feeling honoured

Yes we are soul buddies and lots of love from my side to my amazing buddy😳

Thanks for the dedication I cant stop smiling after reading that you have dedicated this chapter to me it was a surprise for me and your wonderful words too😊

And yes you are surviving & always will be.

And we all love you May God bless you.

Coming to chapter the following line was perfectly describing the fight between Aaliya's brain and heart

she wanted to hear a yes ...her heart still wanted a no ...

I found zain's behaviour mysterious here😕

But the line when he said chuo ga chomo keh do apne khuda say jalae mujhe dozakh ki aag mai uff these were power pack words wonderful👏

Continue soon

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priya arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

wow !! Awesome chap...loved it...bt zain's behavior is confusing me ...wat is he upto?...aww..he kissed aaliya...nw aaliya will surely do smtng hehe...bt nw m relieved that he is nt leaving... eager to knw wat will happen nxt...do cont soon

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran

I know that was heartbreaking ...but i guess was very powerful
loads of love
Sim

Yeah definitely it was

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Kiran Fatima

@zaya.fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran
😆 shuttle cock
I love you for this
Thank you so much
loads of love
Sim

Love you too😃

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deepika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Wow just awesome update...
U write it so beautifully...
But wat is zain upto..luking forward to it..
Pls update ASAP...
THANKS FOR D PM...

Edited by Deepika_Zaya - 10 years ago

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry
<font color="#990066">super fab updtes sim!!! aliyas nightmare,their orphanage visit..so well described ..outstanding work as always👏..u r right dear ..life is very precious and uncertain ..kabhi kabhi hum samaj nhi paatein uski value jab tak kisiko uske liye jaghadta hua na dekhe ...poor zain..humiliation and amount of guilt which is inceresing everyday ...seems like he got affected dis time very badly by khalas curse nd all d pain rhea hd gone through😭...but y he is doing la la all of sudden😆..super excited to read further😛... btw loved all shayries by u❤️.. ...really sorry for commenting late😭..exams and uparse ye fever ..thanks for pm😃...plzz continue soon ..waiting...😳</font>

Ishita
Get well soon buddy
Lavkar lavkar ani barobar aushad ghe
Me waat bhagnar tujhi
Love you
Sim

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sanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

sim
i m a silent reader of ur story bt ur beautiful words compelled me to cmnt
ssly u r an amazing writer
every chapter i loved it frm heart
ur touching words
i jst wanna say u r dng a fab job cont soon the next chp

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Im glad zain didnt break and go away and now either he seems resolved to bring aliya back or at least have the big confrontation with her. Him pushing her buttons was funny coz she thinks he was moved by what he saw at the orphanage while zain was moved by hearing about aliyas condition n reading her diary. They both seem to be having two diff convos lol lets see how aliya react once she figures out why zain is behaving this way. Uff la is back lol lets see how aliya deals with her even though they r pals. canr wait for the next update. Great update

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#319

''Never give up!''

I say hats off to Zain! That guy is some lover! Some husband! Some amazing Romeo! He's what girls term as 'Prince Charming! His unlimited love mskes me wonder, If Allah still makes those kind of guys these days...

I really admire Zain for him not being flawless also for being a passionate lover...he has the ability to love despite of getting nothing in return..

His love and pain is recognized by unidentified eyes, which haven't gone unnoticed by him but he chooses to use his 'utpataang' style to convey his love. Each character is right on it's place but again their perspective stands to where they only view Aaliyas pain! They forget that someone is still baring pain that is undeserved to any human being.

''Love is Pain'' personal experience that's right, but here Zain has gone on to proving that this pain is the cure to itself- pyaar ke dard ko pyaar hi mitata hein...

Also what Aaliya did, 'ice cream' she knows him, she enjoys fulfilling his small demands...she loves him! But fire takes time to cool when one puts water...her wounds will take time to heal but as Zain continuously pours his love...,they are sure to heal! And maybe his love will get them to heal faster...

Sim... these characters these emotions are all made up- but the meaning behind them the feelings behind them are true! Which makes every word have a soul have reality! This makes this story real...I don't know you but one thing I do know...is you not knowing me, know me to the core!

And I'd like to give you a flying hug- If I make sense, for being such a touching, fan fiction yet realistic writer!