FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

845

Views

71k

Users

36

Likes

1k

Frequent Posters

Zainedil thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Its weird ...my every chapter is getting divided in two after seeing its length😆, again a sad update ...this is just the start ...

Dedication: This ones to Saleha (Kitkit_MKB)..she has been reading this from day one...never misses to comment ..and to top of it is a very good writer herself. Its a beauty of the inner soul that speaks ...and the innocence in her reviews tells me a story ...unadulterated purity. This ones for you dear, for your patience love and being an ardent fan of BI ...my BI ...loads of love

Sim



Chapter 6

Ghoomi Ghoomi...

The next three days their routine was fixed ...Zain waking her up, they going togthere to School and she waiting till 7:00... Everything made her sound as though they were a normal husband wife ...leading a every day life ...

except her ignorance ...a constant reminder to him that he had no place in her life anymore

He did everything to talk to her,kissing her good morning without her knowledge was his only respite.

Her hatred didn't melt even a bit ..infact as days went by it just grew stronger .Several nights he just starred hard at her balcony with the hope that she would peek towards him, but the door forever shut after she saw him sleeping ...his loneliness was increasing. She didn't even care from where he got the money, for her it was just a challenge.

Rehmaan played his first trick...on the Saturday, when Zain accidently spoke that Aaliasha had invited him to see the city, Rehman took up the offer ...

Mana kiya ...accha kiya ...tumhe seher Aaliya dikhayegi...tumhari Aaliya ..

Aree rehne dijiye Chachu ..bahut naraz hai ...

kamokha ..aap par bhi ghussa karegi ...

Zain ...jao tayaar ho jaoo...

Zain left reluctantly...

Rehman walked in to Aaliyas room...

Aaliya ...Zain jabse yaha aaya hai kahi nahi gaya ...aaj usse bahar ghooma laao...Jaipur dikhao ...She started to say no when he spoke again ...a bit more angrily ...Mere khwaish poora karogi na ...Rhea ...her old name still sounded more comfortable for her ...

Theek hai dad ...kahiye usse tayar ho jaaye...

Theek hai bol dunga...aur suno mai raat koh aaunga ...please berukhi mat karna uske saath ...akela hai woh ...

When Zain got the news ..he took out his best clothes ..his wardrobe had changed drastically ...simple shirts and trousers ...and an even simpler shoes ...simplicity was the new mantra ...

As he waited out near the car in his chirpy mood he saw Aaliya walking out, she looked ravishing ..a long skirt with jaipuri work of mirrors ...a matching top and her hair curly at the bottom swayed with her hips ...Zains eyes couldn't stop starring at her ...

Ahmmm...Da ...bahut hi zyada bombastic lag rahi ho ...

She looked up blank and came near him when he opened the passenger side of the door ...

He heard a gigle on his back ...Aliahsa was standing ...

aree cutie Rhea koh kitna royal treatment dete ho...kaash iske jagah mai hoti...

Zain felt bad ...Aaliya again had escaped ...in front of Alisha he would never be able to talk ...he smiled at her ...she had kept Rehmaans words ...but still deprvied him of her company ...something that Zain wanted desperately...

Rhea took the keys from him and asked Aliasha to sit next to her ...aree cutie koh baithne do na aage...

Nahi who peeche baith leaga ...tum baitho...she was irritated with zains new name " Cutie" ...ahh she wanted to tear Alishas hair ...stop it Aaliya ...her inner demon cooled her off

Zain sat at the backseat ...still starring at her via the rear view mirror ...Alisha chatted with Rhea non stop ...and with Zain too...who tried his best to be a part of the conversation...but everytime he directed a question towards Rhea ...she kept quiet ...

It was weird ...she never let anyone know that he was being ignored ...even Aalisha ...no one knew Zain and Rhea never spoke ...it was a mirage that she created, and Zain was being trapped in it now. The only person was Rehman who knew the pain that he could see in Zains eyes ...for the rest they were just cousins staying together ...friends ...

Zain starred out, Jaipur ..the pink city ...dense crowded ...he was looking out at the old city walls...art adorned every nook and corner of the city ...as they moved in the inner part ...the crowd density intensified ..and the chatter of the city encompassed the silence between them ...

Rhea stopped at a popular eatery Laxmi Mistahna Bhandar ...popularly known as LMB ...ordering the tikkiya and chaat ...a Jaipur specialty ...

The place was filled to its capacity ...so they decided to stand and eat ...Rhea walked in to get all their orders as Zian remembered ..Juhu beach ...and Bangalore trip...memories that Rhea had lost and he had gained ...

She walked towards them ...and for a split second he remembered how his mom had ignored serving him on the dinning table ...he looked at Aalisha intently who was busy admiring him...she had no clue what was haunting Zain ...

Rhea handed over his plate and she caught his eyes ...and she saw something that hurt her ...his eyes she thought were red ...maybe a glimpse of tear...not fully understanding her simple gesture of passing a plate made him relax ...atleast for a bit

Thank you ...he spoke firmly taking the plate away ...

Alisha made him feel extra special as usual ...

Aree Zain apni Da ke bare mai toh kuch batao...

Rhea became tensed ...as she growled towards Zain ...

Aree rehne do na Alisha ..kis chudail ka naam le liya ...Rhea bit her tongue in anger ...

Cutie bolo na ...bahut khoobsurat thi ...

Hmm...his smile ...and blush matched perfectly ...

Lucky girl...tumhare girl friend banne ka mauka mila...mera number kab aayega ...she spoke softly...

Waise mujhse rishta jodna ...ghate ka sauda hai ...

Kyu...

Aree ...mai layak nahi hu ...dad ne bhi kai saal tak kaha tha mujhse nalayak hu...ab sach mai lagne laga hai ...his tone spoke his current status ...he couldn't hide his pain ...

Aree dad kaha hai ...she inquired

He kept quiet ...

Rhea spoke ...Mamu ab is duniya mai nahi rahe ...

Oh am sorry ...Aree cutie ...koi baat nahi ...hum hai na ..aise udaas mat ho...

Nahi ..Mai nahi hota udaas ...

Sab chodkar jaate hai ...who bhi gaye...his eyes pointed in her direction

Aaliya saw his face had fallen ..the zeal missing ...for the past few days he was getting more sad and tensed ...

accha ...is tikkhe tikiya ke baad ...ice cream ho jaaye ...

Tumhare haat se who bhi melt ho jayega, Alisha giggled ..

Ek baat batao...tum yeh lines sab par use karto ho ya sirf mere liye hai ...

Oye tumhare liye hai ...khaas ...she smiled and held his hand ...he withdrew it seeing Aaliya was eyeing him with anger ...

Accha ...jyotshi madam ...chale ice cream khane...meri treat

He walked in to the shop to get three ice-creams ...a double scoop chochlate one for Aaliya ...

As he gave one to Aalisha ...Rhea stepped back ...

Zain moved closer ...and slowly spoke ...so that Aalisha who was busy eating her cone didn't hear ...

Da..please kha lo..please mujhe pata hai tumhe bahut pasand hai ...she turned her face ...

Aree ...Rhea kha lo...dekho cutie ke hotness ke vajah se melt ho rahi hai ...

Aree nahi mera gala kharab hai ...she starred back

Toh pehle kehna chaiye tha na ...uske paise waste kyu kiye ...she looked angrily at her ..

Sorry she told Alisha ...

Zain went and dumped her ice cream ...and started eating his...

Aree wah yeh chochlate flavor bhi kya flavor hai ...sab flavor ka sartaaj ...Aaliya looked hungrily at him as he licked his cone ...slurping and winking at her ...

Accha hai ...aur time waste karta to meri bhi gal jaati ...Alisha looked up...

Ice-cream ...he laughed as Aaliya smirked ...

Alisha ...mai tumhe La bula sakta hoo... Aaliyas anger had peaked now...

La...who kya hota hai ...

Aree Da..toh purana hia na ...La ...accha hai ...jiase Lai La ....

she smiled ...Oh sure ...she blushed ...Cutie ki La...Zain ki Laila ...she held his hand ...and didn't let it go

Aaliyas face turned red ...how dare he ...

Chale ...he dragged her ...if she was ignoring him ...he wanted to ignore her too...

They entered johri bazaar ...a stone market ...Zain was looking at a beautiful set ...and saw the price 2500 Rs...baapre ...kitni mehngi cheeze bechte hai...

Aaliya heard him ...and walked away from the set...

Zain looked at her ...and checked his purse ...his salary was still not in ...and every day the extra job was for giving her share ...he didn't make any extra money...so far he was surviving only on his last cash ...

He smiled ...as they all walked away from the shop...

That night when he came to give her medicine ...he stood there for a long time intently starring at her ...

She avoided his gaze and looked away ...

Da...poore chae din ho gaye hai ...tum ne mera muh tak nahi dekha hai ..yaad hai tum jab 24 ghante mujhse baat nahi kar rahi thi tab mujh pe kya beeti thi...she starred out ...the images of him holding her ...hugging her ...in the garden ...his breath touching her ...made her feel conscious again ...

Da...kaise reh rahi ho mujhse muh fer kar...ghutan nahi hoti tumhe ...

sab ke saath baat karti ho ...aur mujh se baat karna toh door ...ek nazar bhar kar dekhti bhi nahi ho...

chubti hai Da ...tumhari khamoshi...nazar ...ehsaas ...

khali sa lagta hai sab kuch ...dil karta hai ...zabardasti karu tumhare saath

Toh kar lo...uske alava tumne zindagi mai liya kya hai...her venom always hurt him ..

Hmm..dil todne aur raudne ka farak shayad bhool gayi ho ...mera pyaar nahi darega ...infact tum jitne koshish karogi yeh beintehaa utna hi junoon ban jayega ...

Her silence ...was echoing the room...

Thanks ...aaj mujhe seher dikhaya tumne ...accha tumhare liye ice-cream rakhi hai fridge mai ...agar man kare toh kha lena ...aur daro mat maine nahi laaya hai ...chachu lekar aaye the ...unke haath koh toh logi na ...pata hai mere haath lagne se tumhari cheeze kharab hoti hai ..hai na ...Aaliya looked away

Pata hai ...aaj lagata hai ...paise kamana kitna zaroori hai ...zindagi ka nazariya badal raha hai ...

Chalo chalta hu ...aur haa davai kha lena ...I love you ...

He walked out picking his discarded rose from the trash can ...as Aaliya closed her eyes ...he would not walk away so easily ...

Abdul chacha asked him once...he came to sleep on his bed

Beta ..tum itne bade ghar se ho...aise rehne mai takleef nahi hoti ...he smiled ...

Hoti hai ...par chacha ...karna padta hai...kabhi kabhi ...gusthaki itni badi hoti hai ...ki allah kisi na kisi koh bhej hi dete hai sabak sikhane ke liye ...

Aaliya heard his talk ...still intently listening ...hidden in the darkness of her balcony

Beta ...khuda kisko aise nahi tadpate...

Karte hai chacha ...kuch logo ko toh reham hi nahi bakshte ...

Tum galat ho Zain beta ...aisa mat socho ...

He laughed ...aap pehle insaan nahi ho jisne mujhe galat kaha hai ...sab kehte hai ...who bhi yehi kehti hai ..har roz ...his eyes were lost in some thought ...pata nahi kab samjhegi ...

Pata hai chacha ...aapne kisi koh jel ke bahar sazaa kaate dekha hai ..

He noded in a no...Zain laughed ...mujhe dekh lijiye... wahi bhugat rah ahu ...the intensity of his words made Abdul cry ...beta ...sar par haat fer kar dua maang sakta hu tumhare liye ...

He bowed ...and was blessed ...he smiled again ...chaliye sote hai ...waise bhi aapke kharaton ke bina meri neednd adhuri hai ...

Aaliya ...walked back...his words had dented her soul...she knew she couldn't continue to be harsh towards him for long ...yet when she sat down with her Quran that night to seek her answers ...she felt she was right ...there was no turning back now ...

Sisak sisak kar ek aah ...meri dil se nikalti hai ..

Beparvaah si teri nazar ...mujhe ek pal mai hi zinda dafan kar deti hai ...

SIM

Pre-cap: Zaroon aur Zain 😆...Zain aur Aaliya ...😭

Zainedil thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya5666



Okay... Sim, one last time...
YOU ARE NOT AN AVERAGE WRITER!!!!
Yes, these words are in capital cuz i really really want u to understand that! We don't do anything than just sit in a comfortable place n read what u have written with so much effort... So its completely ur story, okayy???


And yeah... It feels amazing to know that I could make someone's day... So thank you very much...

Point taken 😳
its my story and you all are mine too😆
and you did make my day
stay blessed
love
Sim
KitkitMkb thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Sim I love you ! I think it speaks more than thousand words I will do review badme rushing to school ! Once again thank you for giving me this !
Amazeballs thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Aap mujhe Megha bula sakti hair😃
Coming to update
Its really very emotional hats off to ur writing skills zains pain and suffering and aliyas misery are really well written wonder how u write dialogues but it will be full emotional👏👍🏼
Do continue soon🤓
nashfa thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Sim, Awesome chapter.
I don't know but I am liking Alisha
My poor zain
Hope aliya forgives him soon
I miss rhea
Continue soon
Take care




Riya
Riya5666 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Da...kaise reh rahi ho mujhse muh fer kar...ghutan nahi hoti tumhe ...

sab ke saath baat karti ho ...aur mujh se baat karna toh door ...ek nazar bhar kar dekhti bhi nahi ho...

chubti hai Da ...tumhari khamoshi...nazar ...ehsaas ...

khali sa lagta hai sab kuch ...dil karta hai ...zabardasti karu tumhare saath

Toh kar lo...uske alava tumne zindagi mai liya kya hai...her venom always hurt him ..

Hmm..dil todne aur raudne ka farak shayad bhool gayi ho ...mera pyaar nahi darega ...infact tum jitne koshish karogi yeh beintehaa utna hi junoon ban jayega ...







U knoe Sim... Once again... These lines touched me... Zain is soo innocent.. He just lets his heart out when it gets unbearable for him and that is just so nice... And again, the way u write, that connects me deeply and strikes at a chord deep inside my heart... I can't help it... I am just falling for ur story more n more everyday...


And obviously, in the end, Zain's convo with Abdul Chacha... That was again like... Ohh... I just had one face throughout that scene n it was like, Awww... I m soo sry zainu... U r soo cute... I started to actually get angry on Aaliya after this... It is so difficult to see him like this... I know this is just fiction and not reality but then... Its always like... I m seeing it happen in front of my eyes...



You are an amazing writer Sim... Hats off!!!

manny136 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Aww poor zain so much pain but he pushes through. Aliyas hurt and anger is not letting zain in n hopefully soon she will realize letting them win over her feelings will only not hurt zain but her also. Aliya is crazy she gets so jealous yet she bring alisha with them lol Slowly everyone is gonna start supporting zain but when will aliya let go of her pain? Cant wait for the next update zain n the kid lol poor zaya how much more pain?
Zloca thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Once again great updates, amazing job.
I really don't like Aaliya's friend. Why did she call Zain ' cutie '? He is only Aaliya's cutie.
My Zain is big boy. He can melt Aaliya's heart for sure. It may take some time, but I really hope u will let them come back together. I love his honesty and that pure love he have for his Mallika.
Aaliya is crazy. She really is. Like seriously, she could spent some great time with Zain alone but she took that girl with them? Really? But I understand her. Her pain is blinding her and she sees only past. I hope she will see love that Zain feels for her.
I hope next update will be soon.
Keep it up, Sim.
😊
KitkitMkb thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
So many thins to say about this chapter , that few words like "amazing" or "beautifully written " won't do justice to it . there are so many lines that touched the depth of my heart like BI did . Parts i loved were the taunts she throw at him , knowing it full that hurting him means hurting herself . The ice cream part he bought it for fully aware that she won't take it from him , his profond love vs her hatred that seems fading in a moment and the next one grows deeper . The part where my heart really hurt for Zain was the convo with Abdul Chacha , Zain has gone through so much that he believes that Allah is punishing him , i just wanted to come in the story and tell him to keep the faith , Allah is always with us and he will bring him his Aaliya back !
Sim , frankly speaking , my writing is nothing in front of this master piece i am lucky that i got the chance to read this !

Love you and so excited for the Precap , !
Take care Sim Sahiba the Great !
LuvPreetikaRao thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Very emotional chapter felt bad for Zain hope Aliyah melts a little bit
How many chapters is this I want this ff to continue for a very long time 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".