FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran

i know that line rocked ..well a secret ...my hubby says that all the time ...that scene was a real life one...he always says that to me when i push him for a bath 😆

and yes now the fun has just started stay tuned

i know just for you all I update daily ...

stay tuned

loads of love

Sim

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Sim I love you ! I think it speaks more than thousand words I will do review badme rushing to school ! Once again thank you for giving me this !

Originally posted by: Meghapaim

Aap mujhe Megha bula sakti hair😃

Coming to update

Its really very emotional hats off to ur writing skills zains pain and suffering and aliyas misery are really well written wonder how u write dialogues but it will be full emotional👏👍🏼

Do continue soon🤓

Originally posted by: nashfa

Sim, Awesome chapter.
I don't know but I am liking Alisha
My poor zain
Hope aliya forgives him soon
I miss rhea
Continue soon
Take care




Riya

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Da...kaise reh rahi ho mujhse muh fer kar...ghutan nahi hoti tumhe ...

sab ke saath baat karti ho ...aur mujh se baat karna toh door ...ek nazar bhar kar dekhti bhi nahi ho...

chubti hai Da ...tumhari khamoshi...nazar ...ehsaas ...

khali sa lagta hai sab kuch ...dil karta hai ...zabardasti karu tumhare saath

Toh kar lo...uske alava tumne zindagi mai liya kya hai...her venom always hurt him ..

Hmm..dil todne aur raudne ka farak shayad bhool gayi ho ...mera pyaar nahi darega ...infact tum jitne koshish karogi yeh beintehaa utna hi junoon ban jayega ...

U knoe Sim... Once again... These lines touched me... Zain is soo innocent.. He just lets his heart out when it gets unbearable for him and that is just so nice... And again, the way u write, that connects me deeply and strikes at a chord deep inside my heart... I can't help it... I am just falling for ur story more n more everyday...

And obviously, in the end, Zain's convo with Abdul Chacha... That was again like... Ohh... I just had one face throughout that scene n it was like, Awww... I m soo sry zainu... U r soo cute... I started to actually get angry on Aaliya after this... It is so difficult to see him like this... I know this is just fiction and not reality but then... Its always like... I m seeing it happen in front of my eyes...

You are an amazing writer Sim... Hats off!!!