FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 20

Originally posted by: manny136

Aww poor zain so much pain but he pushes through. Aliyas hurt and anger is not letting zain in n hopefully soon she will realize letting them win over her feelings will only not hurt zain but her also. Aliya is crazy she gets so jealous yet she bring alisha with them lol Slowly everyone is gonna start supporting zain but when will aliya let go of her pain? Cant wait for the next update zain n the kid lol poor zaya how much more pain?

Originally posted by: Zloca

Once again great updates, amazing job.

I really don't like Aaliya's friend. Why did she call Zain ' cutie '? He is only Aaliya's cutie.

My Zain is big boy. He can melt Aaliya's heart for sure. It may take some time, but I really hope u will let them come back together. I love his honesty and that pure love he have for his Mallika.

Aaliya is crazy. She really is. Like seriously, she could spent some great time with Zain alone but she took that girl with them? Really? But I understand her. Her pain is blinding her and she sees only past. I hope she will see love that Zain feels for her.

I hope next update will be soon.

Keep it up, Sim.

😊

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

So many thins to say about this chapter , that few words like "amazing" or "beautifully written " won't do justice to it . there are so many lines that touched the depth of my heart like BI did . Parts i loved were the taunts she throw at him , knowing it full that hurting him means hurting herself . The ice cream part he bought it for fully aware that she won't take it from him , his profond love vs her hatred that seems fading in a moment and the next one grows deeper . The part where my heart really hurt for Zain was the convo with Abdul Chacha , Zain has gone through so much that he believes that Allah is punishing him , i just wanted to come in the story and tell him to keep the faith , Allah is always with us and he will bring him his Aaliya back !

Sim , frankly speaking , my writing is nothing in front of this master piece i am lucky that i got the chance to read this !

Love you and so excited for the Precap , !

Take care Sim Sahiba the Great !

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Very emotional chapter felt bad for Zain hope Aliyah melts a little bit

How many chapters is this I want this ff to continue for a very long time 😊

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

The pain hidden in Zain's words when he was in conversation with Abdul chacha,

It was Heart touching Sim

His lines when he said jail k baher kisi ko saza kattay dekha hai. . . . . . .Iit was breath taking moment and the way Abdul chacha blessed him every person can see his pain except his Aaliya but her behaviour on her place is also justified

And in the last the moment when Zain was frightened that Aaliya will not serve him Ice cream just like his Mom haven't served him, His child like fear brought a tear in my eye😭

Awesome Job Sim lots of love🤗

Continue soon😊

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

LOL 😆

May God bless u with all the happiness in your life!

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

I just couldn't stop myself from comment again 😳

I'm eagerly waiting to see Jealous ZaYa either Zain bcz of Altaf and zaroon or aaliya due to Aalisha sory now La of her cutie 😆

If that track is waiting for us in Beintehaa Ishq. . . .

But what ever you will write I'll surely love that 😊

Btw I'm liking aalisha's over sweet behaviour with Zain & Aaliya's frustration😉

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

Fab update as always !!!!!!😳...cutie zain and Alisha jalaofying aliya😛😆...loved last scene between zaya😊 .. so beautifully depicted👍🏼 ..hope abdul chacha ki dua rang laye...zain ,zaroon..hmm...interesting😉 ...thanks for pm😃..plzz update lavkar lavkar...waiting..

Originally posted by: Crazy4HarshIka

At The End I Cried.I'm damn attached With This Story. I love it each Chapter is my favorite.

Love Sim Hats Off.

Jaya.

Weekend Dhamaka...

Two chapters ...😳

I am trying to add humor but i fail miserably ..but will try to make something light too..basically I write so much emotional stuff that I forget you need to smile too

Well all your words are priceless for me...love you all.

Chapter 7

Nazar andaz...

The next day, Sunday ...she got up pretty late ...he was missing ...she had grown up to see his face starring back at her ...she walked out ...Rehman looked up...

Beta ...uth gayi...

Salaam Dad...

Walakeum Aslam ..beta ...

She looked around ...and Rehman waited for her to ask...

Nahi hai ...ghar par ...bahar gaya hai ...kaam par ...

Par aaj toh Sunday hai ...she acted innocent ...

Haa..par tumhe toh roz paise chukane padte hai na usse ...

aur keh raha tha ...who jagah band nahi hoti...na hi waha chutti hoti hai ...

subhah che baje se gaya hua hai..bolkar gaya hai ...aakar mere saath kapde kharidne jayega ...tum nahi jaaogi, usse pata tha ..iskeliye ...

Aaliya was lost...Rehmans words and his anger was justified ...she drifted in her mind which was the place that had no holidays ...when Rehman interfered again ...

Aaliya ...jab tum uske ghar par rahi thi mere saath ...tab palko par bitha kar rakha tha usne tumhe ...tumhari har utt patang zidd poori karta ...aur tum ...he folded the paper and stood up...

Bahar servents room mai rehta hai...lawn mai sota hai ...tumhare school mai padata hai...ghar par khana banana seektha hai ...har roz subhah shaam bas Aaliya Aaliya kehta rehta hai ...chai se lekar raat ki davai tak ka khayal rakhta hai ...

bas ek baar dekhlo ..baat karlo...iske liye tarasta rehta hai, mujhse se bhi poori baat nahi batata ..

kai baar poocha ...par kaha kaam karata hai ...yeh bhi nahi bolta ..

Aaliya ...tum kyu kar rahi ho aisa ...usse dard mai dekhkar tumhe bhi dard hota hai ...phir bhi ...

Dad..kya aap the jab usne mujhe logon ke beech jalil kiya ...talaqh diya...ghar se nikala ...rishta toda ...teen mahine ...mai uske samne giddati rahi ...aur ussne meri ek baat nahi suni ...jab mujhe sazaa sunayi tab kitna tanha thi mai ...aur phir rhea ke saath joh khel khela ...

Boliya dad ...kiska gham bada hai ...

Rehman shook his head ...Aaliya ...dard dard hota hai...na uskka na tumhara ...mujhe darr hai ...jis tarah tum usse door kar rahi ho ...woh toote nahi ...

Aaliya saw his eyes...kyunki jis din who tootega ...tum uski gunehgaar ban jaogi ...aur shayad khuda tumhe phir kabhi naa maaf kar paaye ...

The conversation ended as Aaliya walked away ...

Zain had grown up in luxury and letting everything go was proving difficult...from sleeping to eating to taking care of his own clothes ...it was relearning life ..

But Aaliya didn't budge ...even after seeing his struggle she kept quiet ...gulping down her tears mixed with frustration ...as if his Da ka silence was not enough to torture him ...Zain had to bear few more atrocious antics...Zaroons, Aaliya fav students wrath ...

Everytime Aaliya was around Zaroon was dreaming and his small blissful thinking was haunted by Zains presence ...Rhea Miss didn't like Zain sir, looking at her disappearing smile on Zains arrival each time confirmed Zarrons doubts...

Once when Zain was walking towards the staff room , he heard a sound he turned around but didn't find anyone and his next step was on a banana peel, which had magically appeared from nowhere ...

Zain was on his back ...when the whole of Aaliyas class was giggling ...Thankfully, Aaliya gave him a hand and showed concern for the first time since he was back ...his mood did lighten up, ignoring the bad back ache he had received...He had smiled and walked away ...

Zaroon hiding near the window inside Aaliyas class was still not happy ...

The next incident happened when Zain was in the washroom, someone locked it ...it took almost half an hour for him to climb out of the window...he was fed up with this daily pranks that someone was playing on him ...

Till one day, he saw Zaroon hiding and giggling behind the door after making Zain sit in a chair smeared with ink...Zain was furious.

He marched towards Aaliyas class, all the children were laughing ...Miss Rhea ...he was angry, she turned around and suddenly his face softened ...

Kya hua, she asked ...

kuch nahi he slowly nodded and walked off, her face and her smirk revealed he had crossed his lines again ...cursing Zaroon under his breath...

The whole class including Aaliya burst out laughing to see back of Zains blue stained pants ...like mickeys large ears ...splattered on his cream trousers ...and his awkward walk ...

Zain reached the door and peeked in again smiling at her image, he loved to see her smiling ...from the time he had come he had not seen her smile at all...everytime she saw his face the peace faded and a tensed hatred wrapped her ...

Aaliya saw Zain peeking in and controlled her smile ...she had understood that naughty Zaroon had stricked Zain ...and he didn't go unpunished ...she made him stand out of the class ...fuelling more hatred in his heart towards Zain ...

At home Aaliya stayed aloof ...Zain had attempted to talk to her ...

Till one night post dinner after he gave his money ...he pleaded gently after Rehman walked away

Da...please aaj paanch minute ke liye mere saath baithoge ...dil bahut baichain sa hai ...

Kyu ...naukri chali gayi kya tumhari ...her taunts never stopped

Nahi chod sakta ...par aaj aise hi waha kuch dekha ...bahut bura laga ...

Akela lag raha hai ...sirf paanch minute baith jao ...please

Nahi..

Da please ...tum chaho to mai tumse baat bhi nahi karunga ...choounga bhi nahi ...promise ...sirf tumhare paas baithna chahta hu ...

Nahi ... she walked back to her room not looking back...as he walked out sad

She called Fahad ...and asked him to call Zain ...

Fahad Bhai ...usse bahut akela lag raha hai aaj ...please baat kar lijiye usse

Seeing him talking on the phone with Fahad...Aaliya smiled ...he needed someone to talk ..but she couldn't be his partner any more ...she felt bad that she had not even budged at his small request ...but she had to be strong ...

Zains cooking had improved a lot ...and most of the dinner Aaliya was forced to eat his experiments ...

Once she looked closely ...to a brown mound kept on the table ...it had a big A written on it ...

Dad ..yeh kya hai ...

Cake ...

Aisa ...it looked weird ...Abdul chacha khana banana bhool gaye kya ...itna ganda hai..

Aaliya ...Zain ne banaya hai ...

She looked up , he was smiling ...

Ek kaam kijiye kisi zarooratmand ko bhi mat dijiye ...isse khane se to behtar who bhooke rahna pasand karega ...she pushed the plate away ...

Zain hid the pain those words had caused with a smile ...taking a bite of his cake...

She was right ...it was horrible...but he saw Rehman eating it and even taking more ...

That night ...she did crawl up the kitchen to see if it was left ...a plate with a note sticking was kept for her ...

Accha nahi bana hai ...sahi thi tum ...

bahar ke kutte ne bhi khane se mana kar diya ...

mai jaanta hu tum yeh zaroor padoge ...

chocolate rakhi hai ...khaa lena ...

...tumhara pyaara shohar/naukar ...Zain ..

She kept the plate back not touching the chocolate and walked back ...

Lafz hi nahi milte aaj kal ...kuch likhne le liye ...

Ashqo ki kashtiyon mai kuch joh beh gaye ...tumse milne ke liye ...

SIM

Pre-cap: Zain and his frustration are increasing ...what happens with his ghutan ...😭