FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nashfa

It was wondeful sim

loved it
Jealous zaya
continue soon



riya

Riya
thank you so much
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Meghapaim

Sorry mai comment nahi kiya

All the updates are wonderfully written
Do continue soon
😛

let me know what can i call you
thank you so much
loads of love
Sim

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Amazing chapter by our Sim Sahiba the Great particularly Was the ijaazat maangne and how she taunted him about the Talaaq , you could feel how much Aaliya is actually hurt and the bonding between Gabbar Chachu and Zain is so cute loving it more continue soon !

Saleha
😃 that nickname
yes the request and taunt ...was just a last minute addition and worked well
and chachu and zain are in love😆
loads of love
sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Aww poor zain

feeling bad for him
lovely update

Maneesha
Thank you so much
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Da..mujhse aise kyu baat karti ho...for a fraction of second he looked down ...unable to face her ...

Zain's innocence in this line it just throbbed my heart louder than normal
It was so heart touching
Amazing update as always👍🏼
Continue soon

Kiran
as i said earlier ...you oicked the line that drenched my heart while writing
thank you
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manny136

Great update, lol aliya so didnt like alisha drooling over zain but im glad zain didnt use jealousy to bug her. But the other guy aliya using him in anger but im also glad zain doesnt like him lol wonder what zain is doing after school for money? Im glad zain had rehmans support n aliya is so confused but she is hurting as well. Next update looks interesting cant wait.

manny😃
yes zain refrained from jealousy ...n altaf wants to romance ...lets see where this enemity will lead to ...and zains second job well you all need to wait a bit to see what he is doing
thanks a ton
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvPreetikaRao

Nice update as always waiting to read more update soon 😊

My twitter handle is @NainaLolla

Naina
Thank you so much stay connected
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tom-and-Jerry

fab update sim..loved it😳..very beautiful and emotional...ek pal hasati ho aur dusre hi pal rula deti ho...u weave magic with words dear😛..zain got new nickname😉..Alisha she seems nice😊better than altaf🤢😆 ..plzz continue lavkar lavkar😛...thanks for pm😃

Ishita
since we already practiced our marathi😆
zara vela ne update karte ...vacha and gamat jamat ...bagha
loads of love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Amazing update SIM! *Whole croud stands up and applauds*

It is really lovely!
You know, there was everything in this chapter!
Yes, it was funny! But then it was emotional, too...

The part when Zain asked her why she talks like this to him... I really could connect with his innocence, his pain... Its an amazing feeling, you know, to connect with the feelings of a fictional character as though u r him...

And then... Aaah! Everything actually...
If i keep noting about the amaing scenes u have included... I think I would be able to write a chapter too... On your praise...

It ws really amazing!

Pls pls pls pls pls pls pls continue soon...

Riya
do read my reply ...on the earlier page
love
Sim
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainedil

I was just about to reply to everyone...and I see this ...
Riya ...these are special words ...and for an average writer like me it means the world...
I am so happy you all could feel Zain ...just like I had envisaged him ...
yes the update was funny ...and a bit emotional ...the lines that u r talking was the best in the chapter ..
I love the praises for these words its like my dream is fulfilled ...
I still happily look back at the day when i decided to go social with my story ...its not mine anymore its yours ...
thanks for these lovely words you just made my day
loads and loads of love
Sim



Okay... Sim, one last time...
YOU ARE NOT AN AVERAGE WRITER!!!!
Yes, these words are in capital cuz i really really want u to understand that! We don't do anything than just sit in a comfortable place n read what u have written with so much effort... So its completely ur story, okayy???


And yeah... It feels amazing to know that I could make someone's day... So thank you very much...

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