Things I have to say right this minute.
1. I love you, and I know I've told you a million times, but you are the best for indulging me all the time, and for giving me this. I've wanted to see you write this scene since you started this story, and thank you, thank you, thank you for writing it and for extending your update. You killed it, you kicked ass, and you made me melt with how HOT that was.
And what's better, is that you dedicated it to me.
You rock.
2. You suck. I hate you. You CAN'T end on that. How could you do this?! Hmph. You suck. Now I have to wait. And I hate waiting! Gah. And you're probably laughing behind your phone right now. đĄ
Okay. That's all for now. I'll be back, I promise.
R.*********
I'm back! Okay I'll try not to repeat what I've said to you ten million times but I just have to tell you again and again because it's so true damnit.
Anyway.
Onwards.
3. I really like how you build the corporate aspect of this. You make it easy to understand, and it's not just blah blah blah. đ It's something you excel at, and it's fun to read. I love seeing Khushi and Arnav in their business avatars- it's a nice contrast. Plus, Khushi is just so in control and confident.
4. And that confidence translates into how much I liked seeing her deal with Sam. You've shown her growth so well- she's such a different person, and I like how he notices that in every aspect of who she is. She's more confident, she dresses well, and she knows who she is. Really well done.
5. In a weird way, I like Sameer. I like that he's arrogant, I like that he hasn't changed one bit and is still the same prick. It's such a difference from Arnav- such a difference, and having him be this way really shows how much better Arnav is for her.
6. The sex scene. Uff, the sex. You're so good at this Di. It was sensual, seductive, and I love how they just took it. I really liked the way they take time to build up anticipation- so hot. And the windows! And him telling her how he sees her, how he wants her, and the way you describe his voice... I need ice cubes.
7. I like seeing how Arnav and Khushi are apart too. I like that despite how much they miss each other, they're not curled up in a blanket whining. I love their little phone and text conversations a lot- so cute!
8. HAHAHAHAHAAH Arnav giving kisses to Anjali over the phone- so priceless. đ đ đ
9. The cliff. đĄ
Re Re, I love your poem! I think it describes all of us right now, thanks to this woman over here.
I love you so much for this chapter! Even though I miss my Arnav, I think it's a testament to you as a writer that I didn't feel his loss. I just missed him because Arnav- plus, I mean... đł
You're awesome.
Love hamesha,
R.
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