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Arshisarunfan

@Arshisarunfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Congrats on the new thread 👏 This is one of the most amazing Arshi stories I've embarked on 😊 You are such a wonderful writer/ storyteller Jignasa! Have you written any other Arshi FF prior to this? I'll be stalking you to read the subsequent chapters 😛

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: A_BA

ReRe - you are too good👏

Jigs, I have the same reaction!!!!

...but I was only trying to tell Jigs how wonderful it is that we are getting a longer chapter... 😉

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

...but I was only trying to tell Jigs how wonderful it is that we are getting a longer chapter... 😉

And I loved the way you told it...simply superb ...👏

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 12 years ago

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swetha30

@swetha30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

okay im first...👏👏👏

ya im a new reader... ur story is really nice.. i just loved it from the start... waiting for ur update... PLZ Pm me... 😊😊😊😊

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

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Lagi Shart?! And how!!!

An advancing Arnav, flexting, in the beginning of the update, telling Khushi to not let her boss give her a hard time, is restraining himself to a chaste kiss on the cheek by the end! Just to make their first one special. Haaye can he even get any more perfect and besotted? Our Khushi is responding rather deliciously as well... Undoing his tie, plonking herself right near him...

Re Re beautiful banner !!!!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

I am going to give you my honest opinion, okay?

I liked this chapter and it was certainly a great deal better than the last one but somewhere Arnav's POV doesnt seem written as refined as Khushi's. Maybe its just me but I found the Khushi POV chapters to be more of a lucid read while Arnav's kind of read like a diary entry but not quite. When you are writing Khushi's POV, it seems like you are seeing the world through her eyes as it is going on but Arnav's just seems a bit jaded...

Please dont mind, just giving my honest opinion because I am liking this story a lot and I believe in constructive criticism :)

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Yay!!! Me on first page.
abt update-
What have you done to us jigs???
i eagerly wait 4 ur update..
Arnav is patient for khushi to say yes.
loved their text conversations and flirting.
their 'never have i done' statements were fun especially arnv never on shopping.
of course khushi will have to take d shot.they opened up wid each other abt their childhood. That's progrees.
waiting 4 their mind blowing kiss.
thanx 4 pm.

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