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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: jduke

Now make your choice...dhyaan se...😉😆

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

Sorry about that... just realized I didn't update the title to include the page number yesterday. 😕

Dost mein no Sorry!! 🤗

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

Originally posted by: jduke

What is your choice writer ji?

Quickie / Lengthy?

Some like it long

Some like a quickie

Don't take the mickie

Cause nothing is wrong.

This poem sucks. 😆

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Jignasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

My name is Choti.

I dont' wear dhotis.

We waited

And Di updated.

Poetry wala res baby! (Note: You influence me. I have now started saying baby. Problem hai, boss. 😆)

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1. Her smile fades away, along with the color on her face, in shock with my cold tone directed at her.: This scene was described so well. I can just picture it, their expressions, the hurt on his face and the shock on hers.

2. They're angry at each other, but they're still so mature about it. You've done it so well!

3. I really liked the Akash-Arnav conversation. I like how you've built the relationships between the main characters and the other characters, and this is one fantastic case of it.

4. Arnav kissing Khushi's hand. Uff. You know, I've always liked how they show affection even when they're pissed- it softens it, and brings the fact that they're a team out.

5. Arnav correcting Sameer: 👏 👏 👏 👏 "It's Ms. Gupta"

6. I love the text Khushi sends telling Arnav to stay calm, and his response. I can just picture this scene going down.

7. KHUSHI! YOU KICKA**, AMAZING PERSON! I LOVE this part! I like how she stands up, tells him to sit the f*** down and listen to her because she's in charge, and she's not taken advantage of.

8. And the best part? Arnav watching quietly.

9. I really, really like this part- Arnav watching her do what's normal, but knowing that she's not. I like how well he knows her, and how he forces her to come out of it.

10. Their conversation: damn it, they really are a team. And you do that so well! They're always looking out for the other, and they back each other up.

11. The thanda thanda paani scene:

Subpoint A: Uff. Took a shower after this one (actually! 😆 😆)
Subpoint B: YOU WROTE IT FROM HIS POV! I am so proud of you on this! That takes skill. Especially since you...
Subpoint C: (cont) Since you... had so many, many emotions. This Arnav is my favorite because you show that he has those emotions, that everyone thinks men don't have. He shows them, whether in daily life or... 😉 Really, really well done here, Di.

12. Their handling of the background check: YES. No random MU- she knows he ordered one, she isn't angry about it. It happens, and I'm glad there was no need to make an MU out of it. 😆

13. They're a team.

Loved it, loved it, loved it! Another chapter from his perspective- you got into a guy's head, and you did it with class and awesomeness.

Love you,

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

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Yes!!! I made it!!!!!!🥳

Jigs, first and foremost I have to congratulate you and say that this indeed has been the best update given by you till date. A big standing ovation for you for giving us one of the best stories and the best update of this story!!! 👏 Today I really wish I can give you a big hug personally!!! Being a woman, I have seen discrimination against women based on the factor that they are women, and today when you made Khushi stand up for herself and lash out at Sam(hole), I felt like this was a slap not just on that jerk, but on the entire sect of men who feel women are inferior to them!!!! 👏

You wont believe how many times I read and re-read this update and I am still reliving all the moments in this update.

When Arnav asked Khushi why she hid this fact from him for past two weeks, the pain, the hurt and frustration in Arnav was felt by me too.

When Arnav walked out of his office leaving Khushi behind, I had a tear in my eye and thought that these two dont deserve this kind of suffering in their lives due to some moron.

When Akash and Arnav embraced each other to convey a message of being there for each other, I felt elated at their affection towards each other and towards the family.

When Arnav was reminiscing all the sweet memories they shared on the Bow bridge, I fondly thought how far they have come in this relationship.

When Arnav cut Sam off rudely, I was cheering Arnav to go ahead and give him some piece of his mind.

When Sam accused Khushi of leaking the product information, I wanted to slap Sam myself.😡

And when Khushi gave him shit on his face, I was literally jumping with joy.

Then when they made love, I totally understood Khushi's feelings and that it was not just love making, but it was her need to feel his love, her need to assure herself that they always belonged with each other, that their love will never decrease due to the rough patch they are going through.

When Khushi understood regarding the background check Arnav had done on her, I felt proud of the respect and trust she has on him.

Finally when Arnav said that he has found a solution the the problem and soon Khushi will be able to kick him out of AR and from their lives for ever, I was doing a happy dance after reading it.

Jigs, cant believe that this story is almost coming to an end. For now I want to enjoy this story to the maximum and think about how I am going to miss it later on.

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Jigs, my overriding emotion after reading this update is of admiration of the relationship they share. I'm left teary eyed at the depth of care, tenderness, passion, love, belief, respect they have for each other. The way in which they just know the other.

Arnav processing his feelings and being left with relief that Aakash was there for her, is yet another instance of that maturity. Yes he was disappointed she didn't tell him, but he was equally disappointed with himself for being the catalyst in bringing Sameer back into her life, and then not being by her side.

That kiss on her hand was so perfect - I'm there for you, with you. Kuch kaha nahin, phir bhi kitna kuch keh diya ...

And ASR is back! "Who are you?" Bliss ... I loved the little byplay in the boardroom where they just communicate with their eyes, delicious! It was an absolute treat to watch Khushi turning on Sameer. I'm so so so impressed with Arnav holding back and encouraging Khushi to do what she needed to do, and of being so proud of 'his girl'.

But the cost to her was so painful to see. Beautifully written Jigs. One could sense both of their tumult and agony so vividly. And then so tenderly dissipated. A physical expression of soothing that torment. Truly, "making love to the woman I love"

How perfectly you allayed all our fears about that envelope containing her background check! Neatly turning the tables - him being furious and her being matter of fact. Genius! 👏

And now rubbing my hands in glee. He's found a solution! Bring it on ...

And Jigs, baby, you rock! Bas kehdiya 😎

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago