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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Phewww... I made it... I will be posting in 30 minutes... but I will mostly likely will need two post if IF doesn't let me post it in one.😛</font>

Haye!

It's looong 😉

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR
Phewww... I made it... I will be posting in 30 minutes... but I will mostly likely will need two post if IF doesn't let me post it in one.😛

Yay!!!!

An update

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: canapoem

Yep, Geeta, Jigs has disappeared. 😕

Going to bed now hoping to read an update tomorrow morning.

She is missing again? What trouble we went to find her??? 😡 Where could she be? Did Dr. Raizada in consultation with her???

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Originally posted by: canapoem

Yep, Geeta, Jigs has disappeared. 😕

Going to bed now hoping to read an update tomorrow morning.

Me too going to bed. Happy reserving and enjoy the update friends. I will read tomorrow.

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#815

Originally posted by: jduke

Me too going to bed. Happy reserving and enjoy the update friends. I will read tomorrow.

I just woke up. Maybe i will get a spot. 😉

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#818

1. It's taken me a ridiculously long time to unres, and I'm so sorry. I promise I read it though 😉

2. You owe us all a steady supply of water.

3. Besides how incredibly hot that was, the tenderness. It wasn't just hot, but Arnav was so tender and sweet, and he took care to check that she was okay with this. I love that he ran her a bath afterwards.

4. Khushi's boldness- I like how she didn't play the shy virgin all the time, and was curious and eager. She genuinely wanted this, and she showed him that.

5. Their one liners. You're SO good at these! It's one of my favorite parts of your writing. "Don't you think you're overdressed?"

6. How comfortable they were with each other after- it wasn't just the act itself, but everything surrounding it. So much love, so much tenderness- and the strength of their relationship really showed in this one.

7. I am so damn proud of you!

Lots and lots of love for you,

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#819

Jigs, that dress may have puddled around Khushi's feet, but I've melted in a total puddle here!

A beautiful, aesthetic, sensually written update. I loved loved loved the way you showed the care and tenderness and love and regard they have for each other. That has been the hallmark of their relationship. It's apparent in every action, and in the way he says, "This isn't just sex for me; I want to make love to you". He wants her to be sure she's doing it because it's what she wants. I really like the way they meet as equals. Both giving freely and lovingly. And so sexplosively! The Ts brains are lying in fragments in the Hamptons after that 😉 Just as well the location allows for instant access to a large body of cold water!

And then a perfect day after the night before! Dining table being put to far more appropriate use! And now waiting to see how he collects his before and after. Will Arnav feel he needs to go to Anjali's early to help with the meetha ... for the Godh Bharai, of course?!

Super update 👏 Dil instantly maange more!

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#820

Taking a res to have thanda thand paani...

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So I had my thand thanda paani so that...

...my throat muscles that were closed up started working,

...my lungs started getting the much needed oxygen as I forgot to breathe,

...my heart beat slow down to a steady space,

...my brain started functioning,

...my eyes went back into their socket and

...my body heat regulated back to normal

...and now I am ready to put down my take on this update...

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She said "I love you Arnav"

He said "I love you more"

We say "We love you both much more, dammit!"

She moans "Arnav..."

He whispers "You are so beautiful, Khushi"

We groan "Oh, please do get on with it already"

He says "I need you to feel me"

She says but of course' without saying anything

We say "where the devil is that thanda thanda paani?"

He whispers "Tum theek ho?"

She sighs "Arnav" - guess that is all the speech she is capable of

We say "Hum theek nahi hi"

He promises "You are now mine in every way"

She promises "hamesha, my love..."

We promise "We are the witness to this, always!"

He asks "Are you OK, Khushi?"

She replies "Arnav, I am fine"

We wonder "Are we ever going to be OK or fine?"

He worries "Do you feel better now?"

She assures "It was perfect"

We marvel "Won't it be better if Arnav was in the tub too?"

He says "I am starving"

She says "Let's go and eat"

We scream "Surely not food!!!"

He says "I can't seem to keep my hands off of you"

She says "Then don't hold back..."

We exclaim "Go for the next round guys!"

She says "Surprise me, Mr. Raizada."

He says everything by action

We say "that was out of the world for us too"

He moans "Khushi!"

She moans "Arnav!!"

We moan "OMG!!!"

She asks "Can we go for a walk on the beach"

He agrees ""Sure, anything you want."

We accelerate "let's go behind them"

She declares "I love you, baby."

He declares "I love you too, sweetheart."

We declare "We love you very much, Jigsy"

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