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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: chotidesi
Teaser?

How about a full update????? 😉

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Jignasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

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Jignasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Hamesha, baby 😆

For this update, you truly, truly deserve this, Di.

I could not be more thrilled to see you write like this, because damnit, you're f***ing good at it.

In this update, you proved that you don't need Arnav (I mean, he is pretty great to have around 😆) to make a chapter stand out. You don't need Arnav and Khushi, or meetha, or beach houses, or two people who love each other truly madly deeply.

Apparently, all you need to be freaking awesome is your fingers. 😆 And a laptop.

This update stood out on its own- Khushi is such a strong character, and I loved getting to see her backstory. She went through hell (and trust me, the snide remarks of aunties are hell), and she came out of it stronger.

She didn't lose all of her hope- she was wary, but she's willing to try and love again, despite this backstory.

And I love her for it. (but I still love Arnav more because... *swoons*)

You killed it, kicked a**- and while you always do that, this one is special because it didn't include one of the protagonists, and perhaps the most er... well loved character. It takes a damn good writer to be able to do that.

Well done, Di. Really well done.

Hamesha,

P.S.: I vote for this to Sameer's face sometime soon

(WHO EVEN SAYS THAT TO SOMEONE?! Forget that she's his fiancee, even just as a friend, he's a *censored*)

(Not you you, but him you. What a *censored*)

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

And me ;)

Such a contrast between the proud joy Khushi's parents felt at her achievement and the resentment felt by Sameer.

Why do some men feel that their masculinity is threatened if their wives or partners are doing better than them? Why can't they appreciate her achievements and be happy for them as a couple. Why does it have to be seen as a comparison and reflection of where they are.

I can now see why Khushi felt it so important to deal with Sheetal herself. Her self confidence was constantly undermined and her ability questioned and derided by Sameer. It's made her very sensitive to any perceived slight. It's bound to take time for her to accept that that's not what Arnav is doing. She may know it, but that embracing of it will be a slow process.

There are so many reasons as to why we just drift into a relationship and then continue in its stultifying confines. Even though we are aware of the niggling feelings of doubt.

You can see how she was always giving in and making excuses for him and appeasing him. Khushi was always hoping that things will get better. And the fact that she felt this was what her parents wanted was what kept her persevering to make a go of things. Wishful thinking as it turned out to be.

It was painful reading Khushi questioning herself after catching Sameer in flagrante delicto. Very well put across Jigs. 👏

Sameer means early morning fragrance. Such a misnomer. Stench of the sewer more like 😡

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

How about a full update????? 😉

Really Jigs!!! Yay!!!!

Neki aur pooch pooch, bring it on Jigs.

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

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Did I tell how much I love your fingers?. Thanks for the surprise and early update 🤗.

Sameer is one egocentric fellow and can't accept a person with higher caliber than him. Kushi worked on this relationship sincerely but Sameer took her for granted and taunted her at every given opportunity.

I am proud of Kushi's achievement and how she stood up against so called wedding with Sameer 👏. Love Kuhi's parents for their support and understanding Kushi's priorities. I suppose this interlude is Kushi sharing her past with Arnav?. Are we going to see Sameer again or is it end of his character?

Sameer's facebook profile picture...

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canapoem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

I cant believe that Sameer was a jerk totally and completely to the core.

Its a shame that such people exist in our society even today. Why does he think that man should be superior compared to a woman? Is he living in the 15th century or what.

Even in our vedas and puranas, women are always given equal status compared to men. Then why small human beings like Sameer feel that man is above woman?? Disgusting!!!!!

For once I am happy that Khushi did not have sex with Sameer. He never deserved her.

Just because she wanted to wait till marriage to have sex, he sleeps around with many women. Why cant he control his hormones, and is sex the only reason to get married???

No wonder everytime Arnav commented and praised her on her work, she always felt surprised that all men are not Sameer.

I think Khushi never loved Sameer. She had only convinced herself that she loves him and can stay happy with him after their marriage. I hope now she knows with whom her real happiness lies.

And Arnav even being physically close to Khushi, never took advantage of the situation and left the ultimate choice of love making to Khushi.

Will Khushi tell this entire story to Arnav?? How will he react?

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago