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taarey05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

same to you and update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Congratulations on the new thread ... But it is not a surprise for me... Such a nice creation would ofcourse have many more threads...

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Meena

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR
Happy Choti Diwali my Strippedeans...🤗

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Jignasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Okay, first, I need to give you a tearful virtual hug because I'll miss this story (and you, I guess 😆 ) while you're on vacation. 😭

But well. You're on vacation, so please, forget the story for those two weeks and have a kick butt time (Gah. This is so frustrating 😆 You can fill in what I usually use, okay? 😆)

The update:

1. LOLOL Arnav as a whiny, petulant child 😆 I legitimately laughed aloud when I read that, because the guy is whiny since he couldn't see his beloved girlfriend for two entire days. Poor guy 😆

2. Khushi's solution to solving the problem made me laugh even harder!

3. I really like the tense silence when Khushi tells him about Lavanya-NK engagement. I liked how you dropped a hint of what was to come there, and I like how Khushi notices that something is wrong.

4. Bwahahaha- Anjali and Payal! You already know how much I love to tease people, so I won't linger on this other than- YES! I approve.

5. Um. Can I get Arnav wrapping his arms around me and giving me a low, husky "Hi"? Thanks.

6. "I am never letting my Khushi go": *swoons*

7. The water works! Tell Arnav to send some of that water our way. After the last update, the flood will be gone in no time 😆

8. "It must be nice to not fend for yourself": Anjali, 👏 Choti is giggling. (you and your one liners!)

9. I LOVE how mature they are about things! They're not throwing knives at each other in the middle of Anjali's kitchen. I like how Arnav is like- "We can talk about this later" and Khushi doesn't push it right there.

10. Also, the fact that he always drops a kiss on her lips/cheek, hugs her, etc etc before leaving- even if he's mad at her. So sweet, and so... so there's a word I'm looking for and I can't remember what word it is but I'll assume you know what I mean.

11. HAHAHA Arnav and his innuendo! He's a man after my own heart. I love how he calls her out on being loud 😆

12. Their entire conversation. It's just- I love how they handle things, okay? I sound like a broken record, but I really, really do. It's just so honest, and so... sensible. No one's storming off, and they're talking about it like the adults that they are. For that, they deserve a

13. "Aren't you sleeping in here?": And petulant Arnav is back!

14. I think he's getting all the banging he wants to do out on the wall... 😆 Very mature of me, I know. And oh my god he comes into the room with her! Well done, Arnav, well played.

15. YES! Their challenge to each other- who's louder in bed? 😆 😆 😆 I love how Arnav just pulls her aside, locks the door, and... 😉 Other thing I love- how simply he compliments her. He isn't flowery about it, he just tells her she looks freaking awesome (oh, and you have really good taste. Just saying.).

16. I'm still giggling over Khushi's response, and how Arnav tells her they can test it right now if she wants.

17. YOU ENDED IT THERE?! *pouts* Hmph. I have too much water left over from that flood, and I need to use it. 😆

But I loved it. I really, really loved it. I love how mature they are about things, and that's what really stood out to me in this update. Sorry for this obnoxiously long comment and basically live updating my reactions.

Lots of love, hamesha

Edited by chotidesi - 10 years ago

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Heavens_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Celebration...

Let us celebrate Strippedeans, come

Let us celebrate

Let us celebrate this love

Let us celebrate this life

Let us celebrate Strippedeans, lets go

Let us celebrate a dreamy Arnav aglow

Let us celebrate his sulking for two nights

Let us celebrate his understanding his love's rights

Let us celebrate his jealousy of his cousin marrying

Let us celebrate him finding what he has been looking

Let us celebrate his conviction of never letting his Khushi go

Let us celebrate his promise of hamesha more

Let us celebrate Strippedeans, jalthi

Let us celebrate the beautiful Khushi

Let us celebrate her concern for her man

Let us celebrate her blushing and smiling span

Let us celebrate her crawling out of her shell

Let us celebrate her loudness during sessions as well

Let us celebrate her defeat to resist Arnav

Let us celebrate her promise of a reward

Let us celebrate Strippedeans, move

Let us celebrate Anjali's motherhood glowing

Let us celebrate the best gift for baby awaiting

Let us celebrate Payal and her cutest teasing

Let us celebrate the friendship that's blooming

Let us celebrate the three brothers bonding

Let us celebrate their tag teamed grumbling

Let us celebrate Anjali's Godh Bharai bashing

Let us celebrate Strippedeans, with joy

Let us celebrate a dear friend called Jigs

Let us celebrate her ability to move us with words

Let us celebrate her power to evoke our imagination

Let us celebrate her accomplishment of thread five

Let us celebrate her commitment to her readers strive

Let us celebrate her creativeness to tell this story longer

Let us celebrate not, her audacity to stop at a cliffhanger

Edited by Heavens_Flower - 10 years ago

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

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Our dear Choti and Re Re have said everything I want to say and more!

I love this miffed Arnav as he is pines away for his Khushi. It's so adorable. Makes me want to kidnap Khushi and take her to him right now. But she knows which buttons to press! One pout and he melts. I really like how she goes up to him, always, whether he's angry or sulking. She always looks beyond that and understands why he's behaving that way. She's so attuned to the nuances in his tone. The way they communicate is one of the best things about their character.

It's lovely the way Khushi is already so well ensconced in his family. The genuine care and affection between all of them comes off in waves in their conversations. I'm glad Anjali finally knows about them though.

Jigs, I loved the way you wrote the whole part from the moment Arnav surprises her in the kitchen to when she agrees to speak to Nani and the family the following week. The progression of their views, the manner in which its aired to each other, the way they respect what the other is feeling, the acceptance of it, the moving on, was wonderfully put forward. It's a joy to read something so maturely and well thought out.

Poor Arnav can't sleep without his Khushi! If the mountain won't come to Mohammad ... loved the little touch of her then reaching out for him first thing and feeling grumpy when he wasn't there.

She's wearing such a beautiful lehenga! Loved how she wants Arnav to see her in it. After all, jab tak na pade aashiq ki nazar shringaar adhoora rehta hain ;)

And then this, coming from him, made me go totally thud, "It always is with you."

I'm waiting for this 'not loud' experiment 😉

And Jigs, I'm going to find a way to fix the autocorrect on your laptop. Every time you type 'simple' 😡'superb' 👏 will come up!

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

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Jigs superb update 👏 👏

Loved the way Arnav sulked because he couldn't see Khushi for two days and loved Arnav and Khushi messages and phone convo. Loved how she felt something is bothering him.

Loved how Anjali and Payal teased Khushi.

Glad Anjali finally got to know about Arnav and Khushi and how she was very happy for them.

Loved whole part from Arnav surprising Khushi in Kitchen to the part where Khushi agrees to talk to Nani and her parents about them.

Loved how Arnav always keeps Khushi's feelings first and respect them and loved how they both always communicate with each other and handle things by expressing their views to each other and they way they respect each other views and feelings and accepts them ... it so great and the way you penned it is very beautiful 👏 👏

Aww... Arnav couldn't sleep without Khushi and loved the way Khushi's hand reach out for Arnav in the morning and irritated on not finding him.

Loved her beautiful lehenga. Loved their convo in study and the way flowers falling on both of them.

Loved these lines so much 👏 🤗

"You think you are so clever, Ms. Gupta."😉

"What can I say? I learned from the best, Mr. Raizada. Still upset with me? I am missing you very much if that is any consolation. We both are suffering."😉

"Yes Di, I finally found what I have been looking for and I am never letting myKhushi go."

"You better not, otherwise you will have to deal with me. She deserves all the happiness and more that I have been seeing on her face recently. You both look perfect together. Nazar na lagey tum dono ko."👏

"This isn't an appropriate place to have this discussion. We both know how I feel about this; I am tired of sneaking around. I want to share this with our families, they have the right to know. But I know this isn't something you are ready for, so not much left for me to say. I only came here tonight because I needed to see you. Now that I have, I am going to go get some work done."😃

"That's my girl, smart move locking the door. Remind me to thank Di for giving us this private section."😉

"It's a good thing you pulled away. Guess it wouldn't it be right for us to get carried away here, especially with Nani's room right below mine. And, you do get pretty loud, so we can't have the whole house wake up... can we?"😉 😳 😆

I never thought there would be a day where I would be jealous of NK... but today when you told me he is getting married; I was envious of him. I was frustrated that here I can't even tell anyone about us, and they are already planning on getting married. That too, within the month according to Nani. I have to sneak around like we are committing a crime. Do you know how ridiculous that is?"😃

"No, Khushi, I get that you need time and I respect you enough to give you that. But, when I say forever' I mean that in every sense of the word. I want a future where we are married, damn even have kids one day. I don't want us to have to hop from your place to mine depending on what day it is, I want us under one roof. Do you doubt my love for you that it's stopping you from telling our families? Please make me understand..."

"That's because I am afraid of losing you, Arnav.

"I promise to always be by your side, hamesha sweetheart."

"Patience Arnav... wait till tonight and I promise it will be rewarding." 😉😳

"It always is with you."

Edited by sudhareddy - 10 years ago

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Jay

@jduke

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Thx to Re Re

Sorry for procrastinating reading stripped update and my late comment. I attribute three reasons for this and they are my son's birthday, Diwali and SF update ka Jhatka 😊. Enough of my blabbering and coming to update, it is simply superb and cute. It is sizzling hot without stripping 😉

My love for this sweet heart Arnav is growing exponentially with every update. He wants marriage, kids and everything with Kushi ASAP damn it. He is so much in love with her and getting jealous of others getting married before him. But at the same time gives space to Kushi to decide the pace of their relationship without pouncing on her. As usual enjoyed their texting. Now Anjali is aware of her Chotey and Kushi's relationship and waiting for others to know and cheer for them.

Kushi is simply scared due to her past experience and I am sure she will come out of it soon and embrace Arnav and his family wholeheartedly without any insecurities. I am waiting for the NIGHT to see who is louder 😉.

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