FF : HORROR MYSTERIES [ PART 24 UPDATED ]

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Antora

@andy1245

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

awesome n interesting update dear cont soon 😊

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Priyanka Saha

@StarBull

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

read all the parts in one go...

it's awsome...

but i have a confusion dr...

cant find the flashback starting part where ghost tell the past to sanyu and sarika arrived...

plzzz help me to find that updt...

and continue soon...

thanks for pm...

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Nitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Ye recap wala part kaha hai maine nai dekha and sarika kuan hai...but ye rd ne cheat kiya and vids bechari waooo seriously main accept nai kar paa rai :)))) sorry for late comment and thanks for pm dear...

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Manal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Hey awesome update read all parts in a go loved reading it you are an amazing writer continue soon eagerly waiting😊

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Sry guys thodi gadbad kar di.. Part 19a ko 17 likh diya.. I hv edited... Below is part 17... Due to mobile version, misles r happening always... Sry 4 dat... Soon I wl match wd uptodate post.. Uske baad koi gadbad nhi hogi..

PART 17 - PAGE 27]

PART 18

She fell down. Her knees touched floor. She was sobbing with all her wide teary eyes. Somehow she gained confidence and wiped her tears. She stood up and rushed towards that room. She opened the door. The lights were already on. She reached the bed and gazed it. A semi visible gloom of the ghost appeared at the other side of bed. She held the pillar of that side and pouted in her broken rocky voice.

V: yahi wo bed hai jahan tumhare pati ne mere saath. Haa haa haa haa. Yakin nahi ho raha. Jaa k dekho cupboard me.

Sanyu headed towards that cupboard and opened it with shaking hands.

V: ek blue shirt hai wahaan dekho.

She moved her hands and found that shirt. She was shocked to see that shirt. No buttons were there in the shirt and at many points blood marks were there. She was broken and emotionlessly sat on ground. Continuous tears were flowing from her eyes because she marked a lipstick mark on its color.

S: ye to wahi shirt hai...

She remembered a day of her past with rd.

Flashback..
One day sanyu was dressing her hairs infront of mirror and smiling thinking about rd. Suddenly she found her waist wrapped in a strong pair of arms. He gently caressingly wrapped his hands around her waist benith her top and placed his chin on her shoulder. She was shocked at the sudden sensation and gmcame into sense. When she moved her vision to mirror, it was none other than rd.

S: tum yahaan?
R: kyun main apne hone waali wife se milne nahi aa sakta.

She blushed.
R: waise mere hi baare me soch rahi ho na. Tabhi to tumhare cheeks bilkul strawberry ice-cream jaise lag rahe hein.

She hell shying and could not match her vision with him. He smiled and gently runned his nose on her neck. He shivered ran in her spines as his breath was touching her and her breaths got heavier. He moved his fingers on her belly raising goosebumps on her body. She turned around closing her eyes hell tight and dug her face in his chest. He bend down and placed a love bite on her shoulder. She clutched his shirt and he returned rubbing his nose on her cheek infront of her eyes. He cupped her face and she opened her eyes.

R: bas it claims you are mine aur baaki sab shaadi k baad.

He smiled and she blushed again with her sight down. Suddenly she found some lipstick mark on his color.

S: offo dekho kya ho gaya. Tumhari shirt kharab ho gayi.

She tried hard but of no use.

R: sache pyar ki gehraai hai. Itni aasani se nahi jaayega.
S: rd. Tum bhi na.
R: are rehne do. Main is shirt ko nahi dhounga. Ye hamesha mujhe humari mini kiss ki yaad dilayega.
S: par tum sabke saamne kaise jaaoge ise pehen k?
R: baby tum bhul rahi ho. I am rss. Nothing is impossible for me.

Flashback ends..

She came out of her trance once again hearing the rough voice of ghost.

V: yahi wo shirt hai jise pehen kar tumhare pati ne mere saath ye bed share kiya aur mera murder bhi.

Sanyu gazed her with blank expression and said.
S: ye sach nahi hai. Ek word nahi mere rd k against. I believe him aur wo kabhi mujhe cheat nahi karega.

V: isi corridor se usne mujhe dhakka diya tha. Sunna chahti ho kaise? To suno.

She explained her everything and sanyu was blindly listening to her words. As it ended the ghost shouted in her scary voice.

V: khooni hai tumhara pati. Khooni.Yaahhh. Main use uski har gunah ki sazaa dungi. Main chahti to use usi waqt maar sakti thi par nahi main usi tarah use tadpa tadpa k marungi jaisa usne kiya mere saath aur tum dekh k bhi kuch nahi kar paogi. Nahi bacha paogi tum use. Haa haa haa haa... Haa haa haa haa..

All the lights of the room started being up and down and finally the room was dark when the lights of the room brusted.

V: dekhna tum.. Ha haa haa haa haa haa haa haa..

A spot light fell on her and it also disappeared soon. Now in that room only there was sanyu and her sobbings. She hugged the shirt tightly.

S: nahi kar sakta rd mere saath aisa. Nahi bharosa karti main is pe. Nahi kari.

And she cried a lot. After few minutes she dozzed off clutching that shirt.

Morning 9am..
Sanyu opened her eyes. Tears were still wet in her eyes. It was really tuff to open up her eyes as she cried whole night. She stared here and there and found sarika caressing her hairs.

S: sarika tu kab aayi. Mujhe pata hi nahi chala.
Sa: bhabhi puri roye ho na. Dikh raha hai.

Sanyu quickly hugged her and dug her face on her chest. Sarika again hugged her back and caressed her hairs. She again started sobbing chanting rd's name.

S: mera rd aisa nahi hai. Wo mere saath aisa nahi kare. Jhut bol rahi hai wo. Ahaaa ahaaa nnn...
Sa: kya hua bhabhi kya bole ja rahe ho. Kya nahi kar sakte bhai. Bologe kya hua.

At that time laxmi and jiggy came.
J: bhabhi ap yahaan ho. Pure ghar me dhund liya apko. Ap thik to ho na.
L: aiyoo amma. Babu khho phhulice leke ghhayaa. Khhya hui? Heek bhhar mili mhhayin babu se. Babu ithhna simphhal hayi. Whho khhuch bhhura nahhi khharegi.

Sa: bhabhi bolo na kya kiya bhai ne.
J: kuch hua hai kya bhabhi.
S: jiggy wo aurat aayi thi.
J: kaun aurat bhabhi.
S: vidushi.
J: bhabhi wo to mar chuki hai.
S: haa. Jiggy wo yahin hai. Issi ghar me soul banke.
Sa: par bhabhi aisa kya keh diya usne.
S: uska kehna hai rd ne uske saath.. Ahaaa ahaaa

And she brusted into tears.

J: batao bhabhi kya bola usne.
S: usne kiya rd aur wo ek hi bed pe.. Aur aur.. Rd ne uska murder kiya us corridor se dhakka de k..

And again she said sobbing...

[Guys this is the 1st fb acc to the ghost. With this 1st phase of mystery will be half completed. Abse hoga real confusion start k kaun acha hai kaun bura]

Flashback 1

Rd came to bangalore for opening a new company Ranyukta Enterprises. This was the idea of rd's dad in the name of sandhir. They had to pair up with Bharadwaj group of companies. Vidushi Bharadwaj who was the wife of owner Nishant Bharadwaj and managing director of compan as well as business partner of rd.

The day when rd met vidushi, rd's eyes were stuck on vid's personality. Equally vid was attracted towards rd.
(dont kill me guys because this is only acc to vid. Ane more part acc to rd is left)
They met at the conference hall.

V: hello mr. shekhawat.
R: hello ms. kumar.

V: sooo. What about the deal mr..
She was really seductive.
R: randhir.. Our company will have profits if joined together ms...
V: vidushi.. I agree mr. rd.

[guys I have no idea about business so really sorry]

R: so where are you staying ms. vid.
V: hotel blue lagoon.

R: why dont you stay with your assistant in my farm house.
V: umm really?
R: hmm.. I assure. You will find fun.
V: okey.

[fir se bol rahi hun, this is acc to vid]

They started living and days passed. Every passing days made them closer and comfortable with each other. They started loving each others company (lol sabko pata hai. Jhuti shakal dekhi hai apni haha )

One day rd was in his room. Vid came and clutched him from back.

V: rd.
R: hmm.
V: You want me?
R: do you really want you to be mine?

She turned towards him facing him.
V: ek bar try to karo mujhe.
R: I think I am more hot than you.

He said with a smirk and was leaving. Suddenly she clutched his wrist and they stared each other.

V: dont challenge me.
R: I do.

She opened the jacket of her thie length nighty. She was actually looking very hot. (guys ye ho sakta hai vid is really hot. No offense its my personal view). Her hairs were half wet. She pulled rd closed and kissed him to a long smooch.

[Guys ye vid aur rd ki night main describe nahi kar sakti. Sandhir hote to isse bhi hot tarike describe karti ... Khud imagine kar do ki usi me rd k shirt k saare buttons tooth gaye]

It was happening everyday between them.

[Now this is the day when incident happened and rd was wearing that blue shirt...]

One day they were lying on bed nude under a blanket after doing all their hot stuffs. Rd was in half sleep and vid chipped something.

V: rd..
R: hmmm.. (quite unconcious)

V: I think I have started falling for you.

To be continued...

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Thriller123
Hey awesome update read all parts in a go loved reading it you are an amazing writer continue soon eagerly waiting😊

thnx.. N sry 4 mistake... I hv updated nw.. Pleasure is mine dat u ppl admire so much..'

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Nain5000

@Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: aarushi04
Amazing part...hope rd comes out wid clean chit...
Waiting for next...update soon 😊

everything gonna b f9 dear... dont worry... B updated.. Thnx

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: newmoon18
It was awsme yr

Luved it to the core
Feeling bad for sanyu she's so broken

Update next wtng 😊

yeah.. Her conditn is quite pathetic nw... Bt she wl b f9 soon...

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Nidhivsharms
Omg yr it was superb luvd it , pls update asap

thnk u yar... 2moro I wl update next...

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: pritha072angel
Supperrrb dear loved it ghosh wo flashback I can guess rd was not the father of that child
But still rd betrayed her nooo
Hkw ca he dothat
Precap ek aur entryghosh is it good or bad h
Hey but story is somewhat like faaz
But whatever I liked it
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