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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Hey! Smiti

Sorry for being late dear

Lovely, nicely and beautifully written

love it to the core

Very emotional update

Story is going interesting very interesting

Keep it up

Update soon

Eagerly waiting

Thanks for pm

Lol Bushra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: aarushi04
NYC part...n cute sandhir scenes...
Eagerly waiting for next plz continue soon...

thnx dear.. 4 Ur support.. Hope I cd entertain u u more.. Lv u..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: andy1245
superb cont asap dear 😊 n omg kaji ye vids ka bhoot toh nhi 😉

yes vid h ghost.. Many more to cm.. Thnk u..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: MDKRM
Whatt tht that ghost is vidushi oh god ab woh sanyu ke sath kya karegi waise it was awersome nd plzz nxt thoda jaldi dena

bht kuch karegi.. Bht kuch baaki h dear.. B supportive.. Thnx..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: archakan
Awesome update dear.. I really feel bad for RD... So vidhushi is dead ,ha ha dil ko sukun mila... Eagerly waiting for next part...pls update asap yaara

yes, rd is in a very bad conditn.. Yes, vid is dead.. Lol.. Thnk u so mch lv u...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani
OMG! Parth is a police inspector! Great!
And now Randhir is arrested in the crime of killing vidushi? Huh!
That's so bad! now sanyukta's condition is worst then ever!
I am very curious for the upcoming mysteries!
And the precap, MY GOSH! Sanyukta will be speaking to that lady! That's gonna be very terrific yet interesting!
Thanks for pm'ing! I know am very late, sorry! :)
Continue asap!
Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

so many doubts.. K I wl clr it one by one..

yup dear.. Inspector parth kashyap sounds really cool..
Wat cand b done, situation demands ds.. I equally lv him like u..
Of course.. Beind separated 4m ur loved 1s itself a hazard..
Yes she will speak to her.. N ya in upcoming updates c wl challenge her too.. Its gonna b more interesting..
Thnk u so much.. Keep lvmg n supporting..
Lv u a lot..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: pari1995
ohho,so the mystery is unfolding
omg dear,pls update soonis,waiting eagerly
thanx for the pm
love
pari

yes.. Gradually it wl open.. Many more mysteries waiting 4 u all..
Thnk u lv u..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Param_love
Hey! Smiti
Sorry for being late dear
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written
love it to the core
Very emotional update
Story is going interesting very interesting
Keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Lol Bushra

its perfectly f9 dear.. Its enough dat u rplied.. Thnk u so much 4 it.. Lv u so much...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PART 17

She was sobbing, broken on her knees on ground shouting rd's name in continuation. He eyes were closed and a chain of tears were rolling down from her eyes.

Sanyukta's narration.

Main andar se toot chuki thi. Samajh nahi aa raha tha main kya karun. Main kab tak wahaan baithi rahi main khud bhi nahi jaanti. Jab maine apni aankhen kholi to maine dekha ki ek chinti apne se kai guna wazandaar aur bade kide ko khinchte hue le jaa rahi hai. Wo bar bar ruk rahi thi, thak rahi thi par dusre hi pal fir se use khinchne ki koshish me jut jaati. Wo use zyada hila nahi paa rahi thi, wo kuch kat par haar nahi maan rahi thi. Use dekh kar mere man k kise me himmat jaagi. Rd k kahe hue words mere kaan me eco hone lage. Use mujhe bahut bharosa hai, main use tuthne nahi de sakti thi. Kaha usne jab bhi wo problem me hota hai, main use himmat deti hun. Aj bhi wahi ho raha tha.

My Narration..
She stood up and wiped out her tears.

S: nahi aise nahi haar maan sakti main. Rd wo sab nahi bhugtega jo usne nahi kiya. Wo trust karta hai mujhpe. Main uske trust ko itni aasani se tutne nahi dungi. Main haar nahi maanungi. Tum kehte ho na rd main fighter hoon, main fight karungi. Tumhare liye, humare future k liye.

She took her way inside the house and picked up her cell. She quickly dialled jiggy's number and rushed towards her car. She drove the car towards police station having covnversation with jiggy.

S: hello jiggy.
J: kya hua bhabhi itni raat ko phone kiya. Sab thik to hai na.
S: kuch thik nahi hai jiggy. Rd ko cops le gaye hein.
J: what? Par kyun?
S: wo sab tumhe baad me bataungi. Tum ready raho hume police station jaana hai abhi. Main raste main tumhe pick karungi.
J: ok bhabhi. Ap tension mat lo. Rd ko kuch nahi hoga.
S: hmmm

And she hung up the phone. She once again dialled sarika's number.

Sa: aaa..bhabhi itni raat ko. Hello haan bhabhi koi problem?
S: sarika meri baat dhyaan se suno. Rd to cops le gaye hein kisi vidushi k murder k murder k crime me.
Sa: kya? Par kaise?
S: suno sarika relax. Ghar me ye baat kisiko mat batana bas kuch bahana banaa k chali aao yahaan.
Sa: ok bhabhi main subah ki sabse pehli flight leke aati hun. Abhi mom dad mujhe dher saare questions karenge aur jaane bhi nahi denge.
S: okey.

She reached hotel, where jiggy was already waiting outside. Jiggy got into the car and sanyu described everything.

They reached the police station. There rd was planted into a cell. She put a glance at him and a tear drop escaped from her eyes. She ran towards the bar and thry both caught each others hands.

R: maine use nahi maara sanyu. Main sach keh raha hoon.
S: main jaanti hun mera rd kabhi kuch galat nahi kar sakta. Main tumhari fighter hun na. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga.

There another voice came. It was none other than nishant.
N: kitni bhi koshish kar lo. Tum bacha nahi paaogi apne is kaatil pati ko.
S: mera rd kaatil nahi hai. Aur ye baat main prove kar k rahungi.

N: aisa kabhi nahi hoga. Jaanti ho kyun. Kyunki yahi sach hai.
S: ye aapke dimaag ki soch hai sach nahi aur ye baat main prove kar k rahungi. Dekh lena ap. Main chalti hun rd. Chal k tumhe yahaan se nikaalne ki preparations karni hai. Bas itna confidence rakho ki tumhari sanyu tumhe kabhi kuch nahi hone degi. Aur ap dekhna sache pyar ki taaqat. Chal jiggy.

They went out of the police station.
J: ye sab meri wajah se hua hai.
S: kya bol rahe ho jiggy?
J: bhabhi us din rd room me behosh pada tha aur main phone pe baat kar raha tha. Aur baat karte karte main niche garden ne pahuncha. Jab dekha tab wahaan ek dead body padi hui thi. Jab paas jaa k dekha to vidushi thi. Aur wo rd k room k niche padi hui thi. Maine ghabra kar rd se sab sab sach chhupane ko kaha apse. Par mujhe nahi pata hua kya tha aur uska result ye hoga.

Sanyu fumed now.
S: tumhare ek jhoot ka kya anjaam hua hai dekh rahe ho jiggy. Rd jail me hai. In sab k pichhe wahi aurat hai. Mujhe answer chahiye usse kyun kiya usne ye sab.
J: bhabhi I am really sorry. Jis dar se hum dono ne ye sab chhupaya aj wahi sab ho raha hai. Par jab tak rd waapis nahi aa jaata ap meri responsibility me hai. Ap hotel Mujhe ghar jaana hi hoga.
J: par bhabhi ap akele.
S: shup up jiggy. She shouted. Maine keh diya mujhe ghar hi jaana hai.

She left jiggy on hotel and rushed towards her home. She was fuming in anger.

Night 2pm.
She jolted the car and rushed to the main gate. She dashed the door and started shouting.

S: problem kya hai tumhari. Chahti kya ho tum. Tumhi ne kiya hai na ye sab? Kis dushmani ka badla le rahi ho. Usi sazaa ki baat kar rahi thi na tum. Kyun kiya tumne ye sab kyun? Ho kaun tum? Jawaab kyun nahi deti tum. Bahaar aao saamna karo ek wife ka jo tumhare intensions kabhi pure hone nahi degi.

Suddenly the lady appeared at the stairs. Sanyu ran towards her but she disappeared. She was as usual laughing in her as usual tough voice. She appeared many on many places like near couch, near cupboard, near stars, sometimes few metres away.

Suddenly the turned off once again but sanyu was not afraid. She gazed here and there and finally she was standing behind her laughing in her crutial voice. A spot light fell on her and she was looking awful and dangerous In a black loose fully covered over gown. She started shouting in her rough, broken voice.

L: janna chahti ho main kaun hun? Kya naam hai mera? Kya dushmani hai meri tumse? Kyun kar rahi hun main ye sab? Haa haa haa haa. To suno. VIDUSHI naam hai mera, wahi jiske murder k ilzaam me tumhara pati jail me hai. Janna chahti ho kya kiya usne mere saath? Dhoka diya mujhe. Jab mere saath ek hi kamre me ek hi bistar me wo sab kuch kiya mere saath aur fir baad me mujhe chhod diya.

S: nahi mera rd mujhe kabhi dhoka nahi de sakta. Aisa kabhi nahi karega wo.
V: yakin nahi aa raha ki tumhara pati bholi bhali shakal k pichhe ek wolf ko chhupake baith hai. To jao is ghar k sabse bade room main tumhe sab sach pataa chal jaayega. Haa haa haa haa.

Sanyu's eyes was flooding with tears. She was shattered and vidushi left. The light were on and sanyu was again on floor sobbing badly.

To be continued...

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago