FF : HORROR MYSTERIES [ PART 24 UPDATED ]

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hello guys... ds is SMITI... i wd like 2 inform u ppl dat ds is a dark n mature FF.. no need 2 worry mch bcoz only some parts r mature n I wl try my level best nt 2 make it vulgr... sry if any1 thinks it more mature.. bt i m really shameless coz i wl post it till end.. lol😆


CHARACTER SKETCH:


Sanyukta Agarwal (sanyu)- professionally a business lady. High interest in photography. She is independent, modern, smart beautiful as well as hot. Randhir's fiance.


Randhir Singh Shekhawat (ranny) - hot, charming, attractive dude. Sincere and efficient to his work still kiddish. He is counted between the best businessmen in not only india but also many other countries. Sanyukta's fiance



Anju Agarwal - Sanyukta's mother. Simple, lovable and caring housewife.


Prakash Agarwal -Sanyukta's father. Businessman. He loves his daughter a lot.


Harsh Singh Shekhawat -Randhir's father. Businessman. Always supportive to his son. With his son he is a kid.


Renuka Shekhawat -Randhir's,mother. House wife. Lovable nut quite strict to randhir and harsh.


Sarika Shekhawat -Randhir younger sister always supportive to randhir like their dad. She is a college student.


Jignesh(Jiggy)- Randhir best friend and business partner.


Kaustuki(kaustu) - Sanyukta's best friend and model.



Other characters will be introduced at the required point. By the timing, there is no negative character.



PROLOGUE :


Story's original plot is Banalore but for the timing it will be Delhi and Mumbai.

Sandhir's fathers are bff so they both knew each other. Randhir's family had also been living in delhi but due to some personal problem they had to shift from delhi to mumb
ai. Still they both loved each other since childhood.

In small and big family functions they used to meet and their love grew. One day Randhir's younger sister came to know all these and secretly planned their marriage. As a result it was their mehndi and sangeet ceremony.

Story will be narratinwise viz

My narration

Sanyu's narration

Ranny's narration...

PART 1 :

Agarwal Niwas.. Sanyukta's house.. Its decorated like bride with lots of lights, flowers, garlands and thousands of guests. Want to know why? Come...


Oh its sanyu's mehndi and sangeet ceremony. But where is sanyu? Yes, there she is sitting on the couch spreading both her palms for mehndi and enjoying the music.

O god! I am damn stupid. I should have introduced myself. Ok koi baat nahi der aaye durust aaye. I am kaustuki. Kaustuki Singh.



My narration:


Sanyu was sitting and someone footed towards her from back. Tak tak tak tak footsteps sound. That person came and shouted "hooow" in sanyu's ears.

Sanyu screamed, suddenly she stood and spinned back. It was our very own randhir. Their eyes met. A curve took place in her lips whereas he was with a huge smile wrapping his arms around his waist. She could not control her excitement.


She hugged him and he hugged her back.


They broke their hug and sanyu raised her voice in excitement.


S: randhir, tum yahan kaise? I mean tumhara bhi to sangeet hai na.
R: offo sanyu. Tumhe parcel milne se matlab hai ya kaise tum tak pahuncha usse?
S: kya matlab.
R: matlab ye ki tumhare bina mazaa nahi aa raha tha to socha apna sangeet tumhare saath hi celebrate kar lun.


Meanwhile kaustuki enters.
K: bilkul correct. Mere bina bhi kahan mazaa aata na.
S: kaustu! Aa gayi maharani. Kitni jaldi aayi hai. Hunn..(she said turning her head in proud)
K: sorry na. Ek urgent show tha. Le kaan pakadti hun. Sorry(holding her ears making a puppy face)
R: chalo na sanyu maaf kardo.
S: chal kiya.
K: waah maine kaha. Teri best friend ne par ranny ne bola to ek bar me. Haan ab hum apke hein kaun.
S: zyada chhedne ki zarurat nahi hai ja ready hoja maa se lehenga le lena. Tere liye select karke rakha hua hai. Warna firse gussa ho jaungi tab ye bhi mana nahi paayega.


She nodded with a naughty smile and left.


R: chalo
S: kahan?
R: stage pe.
S: meri mehndi puri nahi hui hai. Tum jao.
R: achha. Ye baat hai. Tum dekhti reh jaogi aur main tumhe uthha k le jaunga.
S: dekhte hein.


A red spy was observing them from the top. Rd disappeared from sanyu's vision and acquired the stage. "Music", his voice loud and he started dancing.


Tere ghar aaya Main aaya tujhko lene
Dil k badle mein Dil ka nazrana lene
Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai sun sun


Jiggy and kaustuki joined when he called them signalling his arms.

Saajanji ghar aaye Saajanji ghar aaye (raising his collar thrice)
Dulhan kyun sharmaye Saajanji ghar aaye (again danced)

He signalled her from his eyes and she raised her eye brows. She joined him on the stage.

Hat re nigode Neem k pakode
Peechha kyun na choode
Ghume daayen baayen
Tujhko sudharun Juti main utarun
Sar pe de maaru tere
Dhhaayen Dhayen
Romeo bina permit ho gaya
Tu to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi lut gaya


He struggled again.

Tere liye hi to signal tod taad k aaya

Delhi waali girlfriend chjod chhad k

She replied

Teri ankh da ishara mujhe fraud lage

Tu to manu awara bi god lage...



In spite of answering he looked straight into her eyes and he gawked straight into her eyes and his eye shed a drop of tear.



Maine khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera hoon tera
Kaate na kate Leta hai ye karwatein
Din mera Din mera
Aa tujhme bitaun ratiyaan
Dil Dil ko sunayen batiyaan
Tu mujhme kahin pe bas ja...



By this she put her palms on his mouth and smiled.

Sehra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna
Ye dil ki baat apne dil me babaa k rakhna



He removed her palm and again his smile appeared on his face. A last joyful enegeous dance from him.


Le jayenge Le jayenge
Dilwale dulhaniya le layenge..


He was dancing at the middle of the hall just under the jhumar. The red spy again focused and the jhumar fell. Everyone stood numb there.😲

To be continued...


INDEX :


PART 1 : PART 1

PART 2 : PART 2

PART 3 : PART 3

PART 4 : PART 4

PART 5 : PART 5

PART 6 : PART 6

PART 7 : PART 7

PART 8 : PART 8

PART 9 : PART 9

PART 10 : PART 10

PART 11 : PART 11

PART 12 : PART 12

PART 13 : PART 13

PART 14 : PART 14

PART 15 : PART 15

PART 16 : PART 16

PART 17 : PART 17

PART 18 : PART 18


PART 19 ( A ) : PART 19 ( A )

PART 19 ( B ) : PART 19 ( B )

PART 19 ( C ) : PART 19 ( C )

PART 20 ( A ) : PART 20 ( A )

PART 20 ( B ) : PART 20 ( B )

PART 20 ( C ) : PART 20 ( C )

PART 21 ( A ) : PART 21 ( A )

PART 21 ( B ) : PART 21 ( B )

PART 22 : PART 22

PART 23 : PART 23

PART 24 : PART 24


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg omg omg...

I m super excited for this one...wow


Tum yaha update karogi...just awesome

1 st partis just awesome


Ek pal ke liye koi spirit sanyu ke taraf badh raha hai...

But mera popat ho gaya...its rd..


But sandhir is super duper hit...lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nain5000

PROLOGUE

Sanyukta Agarwal (sanyu)- professionally a business lady. High interest in photography. She is independent, modern, smart beautiful as well as hot. Randhir's fiance.

Randhir Singh Shekhawat (ranny) - hot, charming, attractive dude. Sincere and efficient to his work still kiddish. He is counted between the best businessmen in not only india but also many other countries. Sanyukta's fiance

Anju Agarwal - Sanyukta's mother. Simple, lovable and caring housewife.

Prakash Agarwal - Sanyukta's father. Businessman. He loves his daughter a lot.

Harsh Singh Shekhawat - Randhir's father. Businessman. Always supportive to his son. With his son he is a kid.

Renuka Shekhawat - Randhir's,mother. House wife. Lovable nut quite strict to randhir and harsh.

Sarika Shekhawat - Randhir younger sister always supportive to randhir like their dad. She is a college student.

Jignesh(Jiggy) - Randhir best friend and business partner.

Kaustuki(kaustu) - Sanyukta's best friend and model.

Other characters will be introduced at the required point. By the timing, there is no negative character.

Story's original plot is Banalore but for the timing it will be Delhi and Mumbai.

Sandhir's fathers are bff so they both knew each other. Randhir's family had also been living in delhi but due to some personal problem they had to shift from delhi to mumbai. Still they both loved each other since childhood. In small and big family functions they used to meet and their love grew. One day Randhir's younger sister came to know all these and secretly planned their marriage. As a result it was their mehndi and sangeet ceremony.

Story will be narratinwise viz
My narration
Sanyu's narration
Ranny's narration...


PART 1

Agarwal Niwas.. Sanyukta's house.. Its decorated like bride with lots of lights, flowers, garlands and thousands of guests. Want to know why? Come...

Oh its sanyu's mehndi and sangeet ceremony. But where is sanyu? Yes, there she is sitting on the couch spreading both her palms for mehndi and enjoying the music.

O god! I am damn stupid. I should have introduced myself. Ok koi baat nahi der aaye durust aaye. I am kaustuki. Kaustuki Singh.

My narration:-
Sanyu was sitting and someone footed towards her from back. Tak tak tak tak footsteps sound. That person came and shouted "hooow" in sanyu's ears.

Sanyu screamed, suddenly she stood and spinned back. It was our very own randhir. Their eyes met. A curve took place in her lips whereas he was with a huge smile wrapping his arms around his waist. She could not control her excitement. She hugged him and he hugged her back.

They broke their hug and sanyu raised her voice in excitement.
S: randhir, tum yahan kaise? I mean tumhara bhi to sangeet hai na.
R: offo sanyu. Tumhe parcel milne se matlab hai ya kaise tum tak pahuncha usse?
S: kya matlab.
R: matlab ye ki tumhare bina mazaa nahi aa raha tha to socha apna sangeet tumhare saath hi celebrate kar lun.

Meanwhile kaustuki enters.
K: bilkul correct. Mere bina bhi kahan mazaa aata na.
S: kaustu! Aa gayi maharani. Kitni jaldi aayi hai. Hunn..(she said turning her head in proud)
K: sorry na. Ek urgent show tha. Le kaan pakadti hun. Sorry(holding her ears making a puppy face)
R: chalo na sanyu maaf kardo.
S: chal kiya.
K: waah maine kaha. Teri best friend ne par ranny ne bola to ek bar me. Haan ab hum apke hein kaun.
S: zyada chhedne ki zarurat nahi hai ja ready hoja maa se lehenga le lena. Tere liye select karke rakha hua hai. Warna firse gussa ho jaungi tab ye bhi mana nahi paayega.

She nodded with a naughty smile and left.

R: chalo
S: kahan?
R: stage pe.
S: meri mehndi puri nahi hui hai. Tum jao.
R: achha. Ye baat hai. Tum dekhti reh jaogi aur main tumhe uthha k le jaunga.
S: dekhte hein.

A red spy was observing them from the top. Rd disappeared from sanyu's vision and acquired the stage. "Music", his voice loud and he started dancing.

Tere ghar aaya Main aaya tujhko lene
Dil k badle mein Dil ka nazrana lene
Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai sun sun

Jiggy and kaustuki joined when he called them signalling his arms.

Saajanji ghar aaye Saajanji ghar aaye(raising his collar thrice)
Dulhan kyun sharmaye Saajanji ghar aaye(again danced)

He signalled her from his eyes and she raised her eye brows. She joined him on the stage.

Hat re nigode Neem k pakode
Peechha kyun na choode
Ghume daayen baayen
Tujhko sudharun Juti main utarun
Sar pe de maaru tere
Dhhaayen Dhayen
Romeo bina permit ho gaya
Tu to ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi ainvayi lut gaya

He struggled again.
Tere liye hi to signal tod taad k aaya
Delhi waali girlfriend chjod chhad k

She replied
Teri ankh da ishara mujhe fraud lage
Tu to manu awara bi god lage...

In spite of answering he looked straight into her eyes and he gawked straight into her eyes and his eye shed a drop of tear.

Maine khud ko de diya hai tujhko
Main tera hoon tera
Kaate na kate Leta hai ye karwatein
Din mera Din mera
Aa tujhme bitaun ratiyaan
Dil Dil ko sunayen batiyaan
Tu mujhme kahin pe bas ja...

By this she put her palms on his mouth and smiled.
Sehra sajake rakhna
Chehra chhupake rakhna
Ye dil ki baat apne dil me babaa k rakhna

He removed her palm and again his smile appeared on his face. A last joyful enegeous dance from him.

Le jayenge Le jayenge
Dilwale dulhaniya le layenge..

He was dancing at the middle of the hall just under the jhumar. The red spy again focused and the jhumar fell. Everyone stood numb there.😲

To be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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jaldi update karo; wanna know that red guy!!!!
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Hey! Dear
Awesome written👏
love it😳
update fast
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOG ND PART 1 IS CUTE

W8ING FOR NEXT UPDATE

THANKS FOR PM ME😊

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ye kya hua yaar randhir pe gir gayaa...plzzz nxt jaldi...
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PART 2

Recap: in the mehndi and sangeet ceremony of sanyu, randhir entered and they spent a musical time. At last dance, the chandelier fell on randhir. NEXT...

The chandelier fell but before it could touch rd sanyu ransomed him. She dragged him from there and they both fell down. The extreme sound of chandelier falling gathered the attention of everyone present there.

Sa(sarika): bhai, ap thik ho?
R: I am fine. Sanyu are you ok.
S: haan main thik hun. Tumhe chot to nahi lagi.

A(anju): are sanyu teri mehndi. Ye to kharab ho gayi. Ye achha shagun nahi hai.
She took a look on her palms. Noticing her tensed sandhir got up and stood infront of her.

S: maa ap ye to dekho ye randhir thik hai aur isse achha shagun kya ho sakta hai.
A: lekin beta dulhan ki mehndi kharab hona achha nahi hota.
R: oh come on sweetheart. Ye mere liye hi to hua hai. Ab agar main hi tapak jaata to ye mehndi reh kar bhi useless thi.

He grinned and usually calls anju sweetheart teasingly..

Re(renuka): chup kar aisa nahi bolte.
R: oho mom ab ap mat shuru ho jao.
A: beta mujhe bas tum dono ki fikr hai.
R: awww my sweetheart.

He pulled and kissed her cheeks grabing her shoulders. Sandhir hug her and she tapped both their cheeks with a tear drop. Sanyu removed her head and wiped her tears.

S: ok ap ro mat main apse promise karti hun ki main hum dono ka khayaal rakhungi.

Everyone was happy that rd was fine except a single person. She was sarika. She was continuously observing the chandelier and the rope. She discovered the rope to be burnt at the breakage point. She observed at the roof, which was also burnt at a small area.

Sa: bhai, look this rope and the area where it was hung both are burnt.
R: chhutki look there is a wire and it is also burnt. May be due to short circuit. You dont worry I am fine.(he said pointing the roof)

But sarika faked a smile and was still disturbed from insides that if it was short circuit, then the whole wire would have burnt and bulbs may be fused. But there was nothing like that. Something was there which was unusual.

At night in sanyu's room near her window..
She was busy admiring the moon and her mehndi chating with herself.

"ye bigdi hui mehndi bhi kitni khubsurat lag rahi hai. Tumhari khusboo hai isme randhir. Teda medha hi sahi par rishta to main nibhaungi marte dam tak aur kisi bhi had tak jaungi main, promise jo kiya hai maine maa se. Waise itna hot and happening husband jo mil raha hai"

During her convo with herself the red approached spying her and suddenly she sensed something. Taking a deep wheeze she circled back but found no one. She narrowed her eye brows and again faced towards window. She got a huge shock finding randhir. She was about to shout but he placed his palms over her mouth.

R: chillana mat ok.
As she nodded in a no he left her.
S: randhir maar laloge daraa k.
R: kya karoon raha hi nahi gaya. Jab tum mere baare me itna soch sakti ho to maine docha ki main ye dekh lun ki jab mere baare me sochti ho tum dikhti kaisi ho.

He said stroking her nose with his forefinger. She blushed and dug her head down.
R: omg. Kisika make up zyada ho gaya hai aj. Tabhi to gaal itne blush kar rahe hein.

She hit his chest playfully and he clutched her from her waist pulling her closer.
R: waise aj tum itna dar kyun rahi ho? Ab aisi naubat aa gayi hai ki tum mujhse daro. He bhagwaan kya hoga ab mera.
S: itna taunt karne ki zarurat nahi hai. Tumhe pata hai main kitna dar gayi thi jab maine wo jhumar tumhare upar girte hue dekha.

She shed a tear drop and wiped it from half of her cheek through her little finger.

R: heyy, my baby. Look at me I am fine aur waise bura to mujhe is baar ka lag raha hai ki meri wajah se tumhari mehndi kharab ho gayi.
S: nahi hui.
R: kaise?
S: apna haath dikhao.

She took his arm and shown his lower elbow to him.

S: dekho. Jo mehndi mujhe lagni thi hum dono me barabar lag gayi to design ka xerox ho gaya. Agar ek me tumhara naam nahi dikha to dusre me dhund lungi. Aur sabse imp tum mere saath ho.
R: sanyu, I am so lucky to have you.

He looked deep into her eyes cupping her face. He kissed her forehead and again stared her.

S: bas bas tumhe ye senti look suit nahi karta. I love my lover boy. Haha

They hugged each other. All these was observed the red spy and someone interupted at their conversation.

To be continued...

Precap - another disaster

Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
ures moi 1st 🥳
hawww its so cute yaar
sanyu saves rd
nd cam?
thankks for pm me
next part soon dear
Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Lovely written dear👏
Love it😳
update soon
😃

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