**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29

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yay!! can't wait!! 😳 😳 love this fanfic..plzz update sooon. 👏 👏
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yayyy u got to 150 pages
amazing ff!!
love it♥
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awww, congratulations on finishing 150 pgs & 50 prts!!! i will read the
prt ASAP!!! 😛
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Chapter 51

All the couples wake up to start a fresh new day in paradise. The couples get dressed in casual jeans and T-shirts… yes even Prachi, but only because she had no other option since Neev replaced all of her traditional clothing with newly bought modern clothes in their suitcases when Prachi had fallen asleep after packing. The girls quickly go to the kitchen and conjure up some breakfast for everyone. Soon after breakfast they all take off towards the beach for a little stroll.

Kripa spots some little shops on the street and drags everyone with her. She looks at all the souveniers and starts begging for Angad to buy her some. He sighs and yanks out his wallet. He shakes his head as he sees Neev and Kavya doing the same for Prachi and Anjali. The boys all mutter, "Women…" Anjali turns to the owner of the shop and asks, "Umm by chance is there a shopping mall in Honolulu?" The man nods and begins to give directions, while the boys have horrified looks on their faces. Angad whispers to Kavya, "Crap now we have to spend our honeymoon shopping! Can't you control your own wife's mouth!" Kripa then turns to Angad after listening to the directions to the mall and sweetly asks, "Angad can we go to the mall? Pleaseeeeee…" Angad sighs replying, "Of course Krips anything for you" This causes the girls to jump up screaming while Kavya and Neev smack Angad over the head. Kavya loudly whispers, "So much for controlling your wife… idiot now we all have to go!"

So the couples all set off for the mall upon the girls' request and they are all surprised to see that is an actual mall, with name brand stores. The girls go wild throwing on a bunch of clothes while the boys stand outside the dressing rooms to pass opinions in a rather bored tone. Angad starts smirking as he gets a great idea. He drags Neev and Kavya away from the dressing rooms and says, "Look you know I love you guys and all, but…" Kavya and Neev interrupt, "But this is our freaking honeymoon not some family outing!" Angad grins and says, "Right so I got a plan!" Angad tells the boys the plan, while a smirk spreads on Kavya and Neev's face as well. Soon the girls come out of the dressing rooms with wide smiles and dump piles of clothing on top of the guys' heads, pulling them to the checkout lane. The only thing left for the girls to do is hang their purses around their husbands' neck in order for them to be seen as completely whipped.

After having some dinner at a restaurant in the mall, they eventually they drive back home, with the girls chatting away about how cute the clothing looked on each other and the boys just smirk thinking, "Talk to them while you can girls because there wont be any chatting when we get home… MUAHAHAHAH… anyways…!" So when they girls get home, the boys grab the do not disturb signs which were casually lieing around as an inside jokes from their fathers… now it was actually time to use them. The girls go up to their rooms and put their shopping bags down.

While Kripa and Prachi are busy putting their clothes in their suitcases and closets, Angad and Neev close the door with the signs already hooked onto the door knobs of their two doors. Anjali comes out the room trying to go into Kripa's room moving her hand to knock on the door, when Kavya comes from behind and says, "Anju look at the door knob, sweety they are busy, bug them later." Anjali sighs and turns to go to Prachi's room when she notices the same 'do not disturb' sign on the closed door and looks at it shocked. Kavya comes from behind and says seductively, "They are all busy, come let's go back to our room… its more fun there anyways." Anjali shrugs, but then grins as she sees the passion arising in his eyes. She grabs hold of his shirt dragging him to their door and gets the 'do not disturb' sign from Kavya and hangs it. She puts her arms around Kavya's neck pulling him into a passionate kiss. Kavya turns the door knob as Anjali's lips brush over his own and then he locks the door grinning widely at how smart the boys are. Anjali continues to drag Kavya around the room finally stopping a foot away from the bed. She drapes her arms around his neck asking in a delicate whisper, "So what did you have in mind?" Kavya looks into Anjali's darkened eyes, lined with with passion and replies, "I want to add you and me, subtract our clothes, divide your legs, and multiply" Kavya and Anjali break into laughter, falling on the bed trying to gasp for a breath of air. Anjali asks, "What the heck was that? That was by far the worst and dirtiest pick up line I have ever heard!" Kavya laughs, "I saw it in a movie once, thought I should use it some time!" Anjali laughs, "Who was the actor?" Kavya shrugs, "Some fob…" Kavya watches as Anjali starts laughing again, he grins and gently rubs his lips over hers making Anjali's laughter recede and turn into soft moans as they celebrate their first real honeymoon night together.

As soon as Kavya and Anjali's door had closed, Prachi emerges out of her room trying to run away from Neev, who is in a rather playful mood. Prachi exclaims, "Neev stop chasing me! I have to go meet Anju and Kripa." Prachi runs into the hall and looks at the door to Anjali and Kripa's room noticing they are both closed. Neev comes up behind her whispering, "Lagta hain woh dono busy hain, woh sign dekho. Chalo room mein wapas chalte hain!" Prachi hesitantly replies, "Aise kaise? Un dono ne toh kaha tha ke hum baatein karenge poori raat…" Neev smiles at her contemplating expressions and just kisses her cheek to bring her back to reality. Prachi blushes holding her cheek and Neev pulls his hand out in a gentlemanly manner asking, "Chale?" Prachi nods linking her arm with Neev as they walk back to their room, with her leaning her head against his broad shoulders. When they enter the room, Neev mumbles, "Tum kitni khoobsurat ho!" Prachi blushes looking away. Neev smiles and hugs her closer, pressing kisses along her face. As Neev leaves kisses all over her face, Prachi turns red from the heat of his lips. Neev kisses her nose and starts laughing, "You're so cute Prachi! Abhi bhi sharmari ho! My Rudolf the Red Nose Reindeer!" Prachi smacks Neev's arm. Neev gets disbalanced ::cough:: on purpose ::cought:: and falls on the bed clinging to Prachi. He looks into her eyes before letting his emotions overtake him. She gives him a reassuring smile and presses her lips lightly against his own. Neev gives her the love and care she deserves all throughout the night.

When Neev had guided Prachi to their room, he had quickly locked Angad and Kavya's door from the outside not wanting anyone to disturb him. Inside the room, Kripa finally finishes putting all the clothes away, rearranging them to her liking. She realizes that neither Anjali nor Prachi have shown up in her room yet, which seems to stir her curiousity. Kripa gets up to go outside to check on the girls, but soon gets captured in a pair of strong arms. Angad begins dragging his lips down the side of Kripa's neck. When he feels Kripa is drowning in his passion, he unexpectantly finds Kripa pulling away from him to head out the door. Kripa turns the knob which causes Angad to panic a bit, hoping his romantic plans don't get ruined. Kripa soon finds that the door refuses to cooperate and open. Angad looks at Kripa amused and makes a mental note to thank whoever is responsible for the locking of the door from the outside. She opens her mouth to shout obsenities to the idiots responsible for this prank, when she feels herself being turned away from the door and looking into a pair of intense eyes. Before she can say anything, Angad presses his lips hard against hers silencing her completely. Kripa begins to lose herself in his tight grasp, well that is until she is slammed against the door. Kripa suddenly remembers that the door is locked and begins mumbling against his lips, "Angad… the door… its locked…" Angad lightly kisses Kripa's lips and then backs away replying, "Who cares…" Kripa looks at him suspiciously pushing him away shouting, "ANGAD DID YOU DO THIS ON PURPOSE!" Angad grins, "Kripa I can honestly say I haven't done anything" Kripa looks apologetically at Angad, while he silently thanks the boys for their last minute move, which makes him completely innocent. Angad scoops her up in his arms as he carries her onto the bed fulfilling both their desires to be loved.

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Hey guys! hmm so here is the next part! hope you guys like it! just if u were wondering the movie reference was to dude where's the party- really funny movie kal penn movie! anyways before i digress again thanks guys for all ur support with well u know, you guys rock! too much drama lol ohh man good laugh LMAO! arite have an awesome summer, ill continue soon!

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Wow! Congrats on making it past 150 pages and going past 50 part!!
Can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox


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amazing part
haha...."I want to add you and me, subtract our clothes, divide your legs, and multiply"--wow i saw that on facebook it was in a group worse desi pick-up lines

lol-do not disturb signs

cont. soon
ishuu?


lol it probably was on facebook! oh man i love that line, soo freaking hilarious!! i love that movie, especially when kal says on the loud speaker in front of a bunch of men and fobs who are trying to get in the club- Mr. Patel ... Mr. Patel your toyota camry's lights are on and all the men leave to the parking lot lol soo awesome!!

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

hey dear, its really good and lovely and romantic and too funny parts. i am sure that girls will make the plan for them to doing this. 😆 😆 😆

cant; wait to see what will happen next.

continue soon.

mittal


thanks a lot!! glad you like it!!

Originally posted by: subhag

haha too funny...especially kavya's dirty pick up line 😆 😆
plzz cont soon 😃


lol oh man i love that line!! its totally hilarious!! awesome movie too!

Originally posted by: zeenat_786

yay!! can't wait!! 😳 😳 love this fanfic..plzz update sooon. 👏 👏


thanks hun! hopefully soon!!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

yayyy u got to 150 pages
amazing ff!!
love it?


thanks a lot sweetie!!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

awww, congratulations on finishing 150 pgs & 50 prts!!! i will read the
prt ASAP!!! 😛


thank you soooo much!!

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

Wow! Congrats on making it past 150 pages and going past 50 part!!
Can't wait for the next part


thanks a lot!!! hopefully soon k!

Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey 1st one to comment...very good part 😛 ....cant wait to read more......i must say ANDAG-NEEV-KAVYA are really smart..wat a trick..DO NOT DISTURB... 😆 plz continue soon....
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thanks hun!! glad you like!

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey 1st one to comment...very good part 😛 ....cant wait to read more......i must say ANDAG-NEEV-KAVYA are really smart..wat a trick..DO NOT DISTURB... 😆 plz continue soon....


thanks soo much!! glad you like!! yup well they arent just good to look at, they got brains ... granted they dont use them often but they are there lol!
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