**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29 - Page 5

haha great part! i must say it was HOT! 😆 😆
poor guys always getting into trouble 😆
plzz cont soon 😃

amazing really loved it cute and amusing at the samme and the fact u describe every couples romance accordinglys magnificent

Originally posted by: Numera*

So now begins the persuasion and begging for the girls to come with them. It takes the boys until the afternoon to get the girls to agree. As soon as the girls hear the word cruise, it became just that easy to forget their anger. The boys silently cursed at themselves for not telling the girls about the dinner cruise sooner, rather than wasting hours to persuade.

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Angad exclaims in a fraustrated sigh, "UGH!!! How the hell was I suppose to know that wasn't Krips!!" Neev says dreadfully, "I never saw that kind of look on Prachi's face!! I don't want to go home!! She is going to eat me alive!" Kavya looks at Neev like he wants to kill him yelling, "Prachi?! Are you crazy Prachi won't kill you she won't even kill a fly! Anjali is going to slaughter me and I have seen her kill flies!!".

These 2 paragraph got me laughing, i was sad all day but whn i read this i was laughing and my mum's like "What happend to her? She's been upset all day and now......???"

lol ur awesome!👏

Trying to get the girls to agree but whn they told them where they're going the girls agree😆

hey
i just finished reading you whole ff it was great hope to read more i really like it 👏
pia.

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

😆 such an awesome part 😆 😆 😆 haha the boys get so drunk they're unable 2 recognise their wives...man those girls gave in easily....if i was them i wud have made the guys sleep out in the living room 😆 😆 😆 but another great part, will b waiting 4 the next 👏

lol thanks hun!! yea they did lol but can u blame them knowing who they are married to lol!!

Originally posted by: angel_tia

luvvly numera
a vv hot n sexy part i must say!!!!!

thanks a lot!!!

Originally posted by: eijaz_lover

Neev says dreadfully, "I never saw that kind of look on Prachi's face!! I don't want to go home!! She is going to eat me alive!" Kavya looks at Neev like he wants to kill him yelling, "Prachi?! Are you crazy Prachi won't kill you she won't even kill a fly! Anjali is going to slaughter me and I have seen her kill flies!!" Soon the taxi comes to a halt and the boys look towards the house gulping in pure terror.

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LMAO kavya is too funny 🤣

overall it was once again a fanastic part👏

look like the boys once again persuaded the ladies in their own ways😆

cant wait 4 the next part😃😃😃

thanks a lot!! glad u liked it!😊

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

lol why are they so mean 2 eachother????
o well girl power were better than d boyzzzz lol
see da boys alwayz get punished haha 😛

lol these girls a bit more annoyed when they are in packs, it just so happens that the boys are the cause lol! thanks huN!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part
ufff boys and their pranks 😆


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sana

lol thanks 😊

Originally posted by: ami_princess

hey great part...cant wait to read more of ur ff..continue soon

thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great part. that was really funny. cont soon.

thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

amzing as always

neev is hilarious

it was really cute i loved the ak combo very cute the way he persuaded her

cont. soooooooon

ishuu?

ol thanks soo much! the ak thing was totally from chalte chalte lol I LOVED THAT SCENE and srk's expressions were freaking hilarious!

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great aprt 👏
continue soon

thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part very funny and cute

thanks a bunch! 😊

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

very cute...plz update soon cant wait...naughty naughty boys...man why do girls gotta spill so fast... 😕 😆

lol yes they are naughty and have one track minds lol! the girls apparently can be easily persuaded! its probably not a good thing being best friends with ur husbands since they know exactly what buttons to press LMAO!

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

loved the part very much. its so cute that girls always gets angry and guys have to make the plan to seduce them. all of that girls always fall for the plan 😆 😆 😆

continue soon

mittal

lol thanks soo much!! yea the girls just can't resist lol!

Originally posted by: subhag

haha great part! i must say it was HOT! 😆 😆
poor guys always getting into trouble 😆
plzz cont soon 😃

lol thanks hun! 😳 lol

Originally posted by: armaghan0

amazing really loved it cute and amusing at the samme and the fact u describe every couples romance accordinglys magnificent

thanks soo much!! i try to make it diff since there are always different scenarios with everything, i like thinking up different ways with one situation! 😉

Originally posted by: popgirl

Gr8t Part

thanks so much!

Originally posted by: pmrockz

These 2 paragraph got me laughing, i was sad all day but whn i read this i was laughing and my mum's like "What happend to her? She's been upset all day and now......???"

lol ur awesome!👏

Trying to get the girls to agree but whn they told them where they're going the girls agree😆

LMAO thanks soo much!! glad you liked it! and glad i could make you smile!

Originally posted by: pia.

hey
i just finished reading you whole ff it was great hope to read more i really like it 👏
pia.

thanks soo much!! hope u liked it!!

So the next day the girls wake up only to see their husbands staring at them and the worst part is that they are actually SMIRKING!!! That's right those bafoons are gloating in triumph. The scenes of last night come rushing back as they see the look on their husbands' faces, smirking because they had their way with their wives last night. The girls glare at the boys while their grins seem to only be getting wider even while dodging every item flying their way. The girls are gravely cursing themselves for falling for their boyish charms last night when they should have put up a stronger front. Who knew the honeymooning atmosphere was enough to make the girls melt in their arms even after witnessing their dim-witted behavior on the cruise? The girls eventually stomp their way into the bathroom to get ready.

The boys are waiting downstairs while the girls enter the room, gracing them with their presence. The boys notice the girls aren't too happy with them right now and silently curse themselves for gloating, well in their faces at least. The boys start whispering, while the girls look at them quite suspiciously until Kavya breaks the silence saying, "How about we take you girls shopping!" The girls reply angrily, "Why so you can flirt with the sales reps?!" Then Angad makes them an offer they can't refuse, "We will hand over our credit cards to you girls for a week!" Kavya and Neev's mouths drop open, while the girls don't bother to consult each other and scream, "DEAL!!" The boys sigh and then slightly grin thinking about getting some more alone time. The girls quickly get ready and get into their husbands' cars and take off, not noticing at first that the three cars go in different directions.

Neev drives for a good ten minutes until Prachi notices that she can't see Angad and Kavya's car anywhere. She turns to Neev asking, "Neev…" He glances at her and then back at the road, "Yea Prachi…" She asks, "Umm Angad aur Kavya kahan hain?" Neev smiles, "Shopping kar rahe honge!" Prachi looks puzzled and asks, "Toh phir hum kaha ja rahe hain?" Neev grins, "Shopping karne!" Prachi asks still not satisfied, "Magar woh log kaha gaye?" Neev sighs, "Prachi woh hamare saath nahin aa rahe, kyunki yeh hamara honeymoon hain aur main tumhe baatna nahin chaata!" Prachi pouts and then smiles, "Hmm!" After going to some stores and walking around hand in hand, they decide to drive back towards the beach house.

While in the car, Prachi feels water droplets falling on her face. The light drizzle soon turns into a storm with thunder and lighting. Prachi lays her head on top of Neev's shoulder to feel more protected. She sees the heavy rain pouring on their windshield making the road practically invisible. Neev looks over at Prachi and feels her tightening her hold on him. He decides he doesn't want to risk driving in such hazardous weather with Prachi in the car. If he was alone he would have driven home, but he now is responsible for the well being of Prachi as well so he just couldn't take a risk. Neev spots a hotel nearby and decides to park the car there. Prachi notices the lights from the hotel and looks at Neev wondering where they were. Neev whispers, "Prachi I can't drive in this weather so how about we stay the night and go back in the morning?" Prachi nods and loosens her hold on Neev. Neev slowly counts, "1… 2… 3…. Go!" They both dart towards the enterance and stand there soaking wet. Neev holds Prachi's hand as they walk to the reception to get a room. Lucky enough for them there was a cancellation so they make their way towards the room.

Prachi enters the room gasping as she sees the beautifully furnished room. There are drapes hanging around the bed, making it look all the more romantic. Neev comes up behind and rests his head on her shoulder saying, "Nice room na?" Prachi just murmurs, "Hmmm" Neev pushes Prachi into the shower saying, "Prachi your going to catch a cold, go change…" Neev is outside grinning as he realizes Prachi can't change her clothes because she has none. When Prachi gets out of the shower, she realizes her deliemma… she doesn't have a change of clothes. Prachi then hesitantly calls, "Neev umm mere paas kapde nahin hain … they are all in the car…" Neev laughs, "Prachi you expect me to go down in the rain to get clothes… aise hi aajao! Sirf main hi toh hoon!" Prachi yells, "YES!!" Neev says, "Fine!"

Neev sighs and goes down stairs get her clothes, while Prachi comes out in a bathrobe. She sits on the bed lost in her thoughts as Neev strodes in the room looking at her siting in a bathrobe looking irresistible. The bags drop from Neev's hands, which cause Prachi to look up at Neev. She feels shy and begins tugging at her bathrobe in efforts to cover herself. Neev stops her hand on her robe and whispers, "You look beautiful!" Prachi looks away, but Neev turns her face towards him and gently kisses her lips. Prachi mumbles, "You will catch a cold, go change in the bathroom!" Neev murmurs, "Trust me I won't need to go to the bathroom to change!" Prachi looks into his eyes as she sees his naughty intentions and feels him tugging her robe. Prachi shrieks and runs around the room teasing him, then finally caving in his arms.

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While Kavya is driving, Anjali asks, "Kavya where are we going?" Kavya simply says, "Shopping, but not with the others." Anjali shouts, "WHAT?! WHY NOT!" Kavya freaks out by her outburst and parks the car on the side. He turns to her and looks into her eyes, which seems to settle her down. He says softly, "Anju I know you want to hang out with Kripa and Prachi, but babe this is our honeymoon… and I'd like to think you actually like spending time with me apart from the occasional little fights of ours!" Anjali smiles, "I guess you're right! And for the record, I love spending time with you Kavya! Tell you what today I'm all yours okay?" Kavya pecks her cheek and begins to drive again. Anjali goes wild in the shops trying on necklaces, rings, earrings, not to mention clothes. Kavya smiles at her hyperactive nature when she is surrounded by stores. Kavya enjoys helping her try on the jewelery since he gets to whisper comments into her ear. Clothes shopping however isn't as much fun since Kavya is forced outside the changing room even after barging in on several occasions.

Soon enough they notice the turn in the weather, the dark clouds seem to be rolling in. He is on the verge of yelling at her because of her stubborn nature and refusal to leave. Kavya eventually persuades Anjali to head home and away from the clothes and accessories she so dearly wants. Anjali sits in the car examining every piece of item she bought, wanting to wear it so badly. Kavya laughs as he sees her looking at her clothes and accessories longingly, which comes to the attention of Anjali. She snaps, "God Kavya it's not even raining! You made us leave for noth…" Just then the first drops of rain hit the windshield while Kavya grins, "Ahem you were saying?" Anjali smacks Kavya's arm defeatedly, "Shut up." Kavya laughs as he pulls over by their beach house.

They both enter the house right when the rain is still drizzling. They come inside screaming, "Angad…Neev… where are you gu… what?" Anjali smacks Kavya and points towards the window, "Kavya there are no cars outside so how can anyone be home!" Kavya flushes, "Oh yea… oops my bad!" Anjali shakes her head and goes up the stairs with her shopping bags. Kavya grins to himself, "Hmm empty house… I like the sound of that!" He runs upstairs to catch up with his wife. Anjali is upstairs putting away her things, forgetting about her wet hair from the rain. Kavya comes in the room tossing a towel towards Anjali which lands right on top of Anjali's head. Anjali yanks the towel away and glares at him angrily. Kavya looks at her hair and can't keep back the snort. He starts laughing at her hair, which is sticking up making her look like a wild child. Kavya comes towards her and takes the towel from her hands. He smoothes out her hair and gently gets rid of the excess water dripping with the towel. He whispers, "I don't want you getting sick." Anjali looks at Kavya and smiles, "You worry too much!"

Kavya presses his forehead against hers and whispers, "It's because I love you too much Anju!" Anjali smiles, "Are you trying to butter me up?" Kavya grins, "Butter? That's not a bad idea! Perhaps we should try that! I'll go get the butter!" Anjali yanks at his arm shrieking, "Ewwwww! Kavya you're sick!! You're not going to go get BUTTER!! Eww get away!!" Kavya walks towards her saying, "No butter? Jam…no? Ok how bout chocolate?" She just runs out the room yelling, "Yea right! You'll have to catch me first!" Kavya laughs and chases her around the house, finally cornering her into…well a corner. Anjali presses herself further against the wall, trying to distance herself from him. She sees the chocolate syrup in his hands and squels, "Kavya get that thing away from me!" Kavya laughs and puts down the syrup saying, "Hmm okay!" Anjali relaxes a bit and then finds herself being thrown over his shoulder and taken up the stairs to their bedroom.

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As Angad drives the car, Kripa continues to admire the scenic beauty that is Hawaii. She leans over and gently brushes her lips against his cheek. Kripa asks, "Angad I think we are lost. Where are the others… maybe you should call" Angad simply replies, "We aren't lost, I know where we are going!" Kripa asks, "So they got lost? Shouldn't you tell them the way?" Angad replies, "They aren't lost either, we are all going to different places" Kripa replies absentmindedly, "Ohhh… wait why? Are we not going shopping? Are these cards fake?" Kripa frowns looking at the credit card Angad gave her while he laughs at her cute expression saying, "Well to answer your first question- because it's our honeymoon, to answer your second question- yes we are going shopping, and to answer your last question- no Krips they aren't fake." Kripa looks at him and grins looking at the card, satisfied with his answers. Kripa shrugs, "Hmm alright!" Angad brushes his lips against her check whispering, "Thanks!" They thoroughly enjoy walking in and out of store, buying a few things in the process. Angad makes Kripa buy a bunch of dresses and jewelery to his liking.

They soon head back towards the car. Angad at first has some problems with starting the car, but after a few times it finally starts. They then set out towards their beach house. Kripa notices the light drizzle and opens her window. Kripa throws her arm outside the car to feel the water droplets falling on her arm. She laughs innocently feeling the tickling sensation as the drops run down her hand. Angad smiles, but soon notices the car jerking forward, then eventually coming to a complete stop on a deserted road. Kripa turns to Angad as she realizes the car has stopped moving and asks, "What happened with the car?" Angad shrugs says, "I'll check, Thank God it's only a light drizzle. Krips pop the hood!" Kripa begins to look around the secluded area until she sees a light at a distance. She then turns her attention back to Angad, who exclaims loudly, "CRAP!" Kripa notices that it has really begun to pour. Angad gets in the car quickly, while Kripa points in the direction of the light saying, "How about we go there! It looks like a cottage!" Angad agrees and they both run out the car laughing along the way.

The both enter the abandoned cottage and find it decent enough to spend the night. Kripa and Angad make their way inside and sit down next to each other. Kripa is slightly uncomfortable with how her clothes are hugging her every curve, making her feel a bit exposed. Kripa looks towards Angad who is wearing a shirt with half the buttons open, exposing his bare chest. His hair is slightly wet from the rain, making Kripa all the more attracted. She suddenly feels his stare and looks towards him, locking her eyes with his. He slowly moves towards her, brushing her hair away from her face so he could get a better view. Kripa didn't understand why she is feeling so nervous because she never felt like this before, but perhaps it is his piercing gaze.

When Kripa turns away she feels lips on her neck, slowly kissing her which leaves her breathless. She turns towards him, taking his face in her hands and softly kisses his lips. Their hands begin to roam around each other's bodies as Angad lowers Kripa onto the stacks of hay. Kripa looks into Angad's passion arisen eyes one last time before she surrenders herself for the taking as they become one, once again.

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Ok guys that was the next part! there are possibly two more honeymoon parts and then about 10 additional parts! Hope you like this part!

By the way I posted my new fanfiction which is called Sweet Revenge, so check it out: Sweet Revenge

Awesome Part very cute and romantic and yeah I read the prologue to ur new fanfic its awesome

romantic part!!!!!
so this ff has only 12 parts left?????????//
heeyyyyyyyyyyy
ill miss it!

hahaha totallly loved this part!!!! all 3 going teir own ways n endied up gettin soaked in the rain n sharing sum cute romantic moments!!! soooo awesome!!! n woah this ff ending in 12 parts 😭 a shame but it has 2 happen one day, ive commented in sweet revenge n will b looking 4ward 2 the next part of this1 👏

hayeeee i just loved this part 😳
prachis so innocent lol i love her well atleast they got a room in the hotel
luckyyy kavya n anjali had their beach house all to themselves lol....but i got abit confused coz if kavya n anjali cud get home den y cudnt da othas????:S n kavya knew they were alone n didnt bother to phone the others to ask if theyre ok? silly boy all he cares about is romancing 😛 😆 😆
kripa n angad found a cottage lol but when they were on the desserted road i woz thinking they could have just slept in the car till the rain stopped lol like in humko deewana kar gaye that was soooo romantic hehe
i cant wait 2 find out what happens next so plzzz do cont soon this was like the 2nd wedding night for all of them haha bet it was better than the 1st naa 😉
and i saw ur new fanfic **Sweet Revenge** cnt wait 2 read it...im lovin d title!! 😃

xx hin xx 😛