**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome Numerah. congrats for completing 150 pages.
I love ur fanfic and in this part Kavya's line was lovely 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part
lolz the boys r smart
specially angad


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sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hopefully the part will be up today! let's hope i get time to finish it! my relatives are coming over so i might not post/ finish writing until really late at night! sorry bout delay!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol aww it ok my cousins r comin overr BUT i hope u finish soon lol cant wait to raed the nxt [part
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awsome really cute wow the boys had some brains loved ur fic always fun to read
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow congratz on completing 150 pages! Kavya's line was awesome.... 😛
cont soon! 😳
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Chapter 52

The following morning, the girls wake up bright and early. They quickly take a shower and change into flowly skirts, heading out the door to start breakfast before they wake up their undressed husbands. As soon as Kripa and Anjali turn the door knob they realize it's still locked, well Anjali is more so shocked because it wasn't locked last night. Anyways the two girls start banging on the door and howling for someone to open it. Angad and Kavya wake up due to that incessent screaming from their wives. Kripa and Anjali turn to their husbands annoyed saying, "The door is locked from outside!" Angad grins, meanwhile Kavya is shocked. They both say to their wives, "Ehh let's just go back to bed!" Kripa and Anjali fold their arms when suddenly the doors fling open. Prachi stands outside between both doors while the two agitated girls come outside the room breathing a sigh of relief. The boys sigh and get ready.

The girls go down the steps discussing why on earth the doors were locked and why they didn't get to talk last night. After the three girls discuss their stories, it is pretty evident whose fault this was… the boys. Kripa saracastically says, "Big shocker there! Those twerps! They are so going hungry, I'm not feeding Angad!" Anjali grins, "I like the sound of that!" Prachi agrees, "I don't like to be made out a fool!"

Soon the boys come skipping down the steps looking all chirpy because of last night. Angad, Kavya, and Neev come into the kitchen and kiss their wives on the cheek asking, "What's for breakfast babe?" The girls give the boys deathly glares, while the boys start stepping away with their hands up in the air. Kavya asks, "What is up with the mean looks?" The girls shrug and step out the kitchen. Neev whispers to Angad, "You think they found out about last night?" Angad and Kavya's eyes grow wide in shock as all three boys loudly whisper, "CRAP! Now what?" They all shrug their shoulders not knowing what to do. Kavya suddenly yells, "I GOT IT!! IT'S PERFECT!!" He gathers the boys around whispering, "Let's take them on a romantic dinner cruise!" Angad and Neev grin and practically jump on Kavya exclaiming, "THANK YOU!!! Idiot you saved our honeymoon!"

So now begins the persuasion and begging for the girls to come with them. It takes the boys until the afternoon to get the girls to agree. As soon as the girls hear the word cruise, it became just that easy to forget their anger. The boys silently cursed at themselves for not telling the girls about the dinner cruise sooner, rather than wasting hours to persuade. The girls quickly head upstairs to get dressed, while the boys lounge around in the living room just thanking their stars that the girls got out of their foul moods. Kripa dresses in a black and white dress, with a deep back which makes her look elegant yet sexy. Angad wears a black transperant shirt, with a few buttons left undone along with black dress pants. Anjali wears a royal blue dress making her look quite sophisticated and classy. Kavya wears a royal blue button up shirt with black dress pants. Prachi wears a pure white dress, making her look like an angel. Neev wears a white button up shirt with black dress pants. They perfectly coordinate with each other, but no surprise there since they all have great taste in clothing.

They girls walk out the house, leaving the boys in a daze because the girls completely ignoring their presence. The actual case is that the girls feel quite attracted to the boys however to suppress their intmate desires they walk straight out the house as if they are blind as bats. The girls gasp as they see three hot convertibles parked outside. The boys slowly walk up behind and then past the girls walking to their cars. Angad stands at the red convertible, Kavya the black convertible, and Neev the blue convertible. The girls ask, "Wait I thought we had one huge car… where did it go?" The boys smile suggestively and sit in the car, revving it up. The girls sigh knowing its just another excuse for alone time and sit in the cars, but hating to be separated from from each other.

They soon arrive on the cruise, where the girls just can't seem to get over the environment. It's just amazing because it happens to be filled with desi people. There is an area where honeymoon couples are spending a romantic candle light dinner. There is also a clubbing atmosphere, deep within the cruiseship, where the couples get close and personal. The boys first take the girls for a romantic candlelight dinner on the deck of the cruise ship. The boys being the gentlemen they are, they pull out the chairs for the girls, while the girls sit down enjoying the view of the ocean. Prachi downcasts her eyes as Neev gently holds her hands resting in the middle of the table. Anjali can't help, but play footsie under the table with Kavya, who seems to enjoy it as well. Kripa keeps moving her chair closer to Angad whispering compliments in his ear, while he does the same.

After finishing their romantic meal, they all head towards the club for some real fun. As soon as they enter the club, the song changes pace from super slow to super fast. The tunes of from the movie The Train has the boys ready to get onto the dance floor

They all head towards the bar to get a little refreshments.
The boys order some alcohol, ignoring the girls protests, while the girls
go with juice… well someone has to drive the boys sorry butts back home.
Teri Tamanna
Teri Tamanna Aa Aa Aa
Teri Tamanna
Teri Tamanna Aa Aa Aa
The boys drag the girls into the middle of the dance floor.
Teri Tamanna Aa Aa Aa
Teri Justjoo Hai
Mujhe Aaj Bas Ek Teri, Mujhe Aaj Bas Ek Teri
Teri Aarzoo Hai, Teri Aarzoo Hai
Neev takes Prachi's hand into his and starts twirling her around,
much to her amusement. She is surprisingly enjoying herself,
while rotating around as Neev plays with her hand.
Mere Zehan Mein, Khayaalon Mein Tu Hai
Yeh Itanisi Duri Bhi Hai, Gar Toh Kyun Hai, Gar Toh Kyun Hai
Kavya pulls Anjali closer to him as his hands explore her curves.
Anjali drops her arms around his neck, pulling him nearer. Her eyes
lock with his as she sees the intensity in them.
Abb Kuch Aaj Aise Tu Muhjme Sama Ja
Soyese Ehsaas Saare Jaga Ja
Tujhe Kya Pata Main Pyaasa Hoon Kabse
Abb Tu Aaj Banake Ghata Mujhko Bhiga Ja
Angad spins Kripa so she in front of him. His hot breath travels down her
neck, heating up her body filling it with flaring passion. Kripa closes her
eyes only wanting to feel his presense. Angad notices Kripa flinch
and kisses her neck softly and slowly while she is left breathless.
Teri Tamanna
Teri Tamanna
Teri Justjoo Hai
Mujhe Aaj Bas Ek Teri, Teri Aarzoo Hai, Teri Aarzoo Hai
The boys whisper to the girls they will just be back and chug
down a few drinks while watching their wives moving their bodies
on the dance floor and having fun with each other.
Yeh Teri Julfon Se Khushboo Jo Aaye
As Neev drinks he feels the urge to grab Prachi from behind and
smell her silky hair as he dances with her closely.
Toh Meri Saanson Ko Paagal Banaaye
As Kavya drinks he wants to grab Anjali and move his
hands down her body while whispering sweet nothings in her ear.
Uff Mere Dil Mein Yeh Kaisa Junoon Hai
Jo Tere Honto Ko Nazdik Chaahe
As Angad drinks his eyes burn with desire as he watches Kripa dancing
seductively on the dance floor. He feels so turned on at the moment
because this girl knew how to dance.
Teri Tamanna
Teri Tamanna
Teri Justjoo Hai
Mujhe Aaj Bas Ek Teri, Teri Aarjoo Hai, Teri Aarzoo Hai
After they boys place their empty glasses at the bar, they can't seem
to spot the girls anymore. Just then each of them spot a girl who is wearing similar
clothing to their wives and walk towards them.
Mere Zehan Mein, Khayaalon Mein Tu Hai
Neev grabs the girl from behind and whispers in her ear.
Yeh Itanisi Duri Bhi Hai, Yeh Itanisi Duri Bhi Hai
Kavya grabs the girl from behind pulling her closer to himself.
Gar Toh Kyun Hai, Gar Toh Kyun Hai
Angad starts moving his hands all over the girl.
Teri Tamanna
Teri Justjoo Hai
Mujhe Aaj Bas Ek Teri, Teri Aarjoo Hai, Teri Aarzoo Hai
The random look alike girls turn around and smack Neev, Kavya,
and Angad for pestering them. The look alikes soon leave while
the boys hold their cheeks as their buzz is killed.
Teri Tamanna , Teri Aarzoo Hai
Teri Tamanna , Teri Aarzoo Hai…
The boys see their wives glaring at them quite angrily and
leave rather pissed off.

Lucky for the girls, the cruise ship is docking and they managed to get off the ship before the boys, not only that but the girls had previously confiscated their car keys since the boys decided to drink. The girls drive off in the convertibles back to the beach house. The unlucky boys run towards the cars, but aren't able to reach the girls in time since they speed off. The boys are forced to hail a taxi back to the beach house each muttering curses are their horrible fates. Angad exclaims in a fraustrated sigh, "UGH!!! How the hell was I suppose to know that wasn't Krips!!" Neev says dreadfully, "I never saw that kind of look on Prachi's face!! I don't want to go home!! She is going to eat me alive!" Kavya looks at Neev like he wants to kill him yelling, "Prachi?! Are you crazy Prachi won't kill you she won't even kill a fly! Anjali is going to slaughter me and I have seen her kill flies!!" Soon the taxi comes to a halt and the boys look towards the house gulping in pure terror.

Kavya and Angad step towards the enterance of the house only to be pulled back by Neev. They both give him questioning looks. Neev mutters, "We need plans first so think!!" As ideas pop into their heads, the boys smirk to themselves and quietly make their way inside ducking to make sure nothing is flying their way and to their luck there isn't. The boys make their way towards their own doors and look at each other one last time before knocking.

Prachi opens the door giving Neev a glaring look saying, "I don't want to talk to you!" Neev smiles, "Sure you do" while shutting the door. Prachi mumbles, "Why don't you go back to the club because I'm sure there are other girls you would rather waste your time on!" Neev sighs and crawls up behind Prachi, who is sitting on the bed looking out the window. He whispers seductively in her ear, "You look sexy Mrs. Prachi Neev Khanna!" Prachi decides to give Neev another glare, however, when she turns around she finds a pair of intese eyes looking passionately into hers. His look is unnerving and Prachi starts to fidget under his intense gaze. Neev mumbles apologizes all along her neck and collar bone, while she melts at his touch. He softly explains the mix up, while all Prachi can reply with is a soft moan, which leads her into a night of passion.


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Anjali opens the door and walks back into the room waiting for him to enter. The moment Kavya shuts the door Anjali screams, "Have you come for another slap?" Kavya grins, "My my aren't we feisty…" Anjali folds her arms and looks out the window enraged. Kavya comes up behind snaking his arms around her waist while whispering, "I thought she was you Anju…" Anjali turns around to yell in his face, only to be given a passionate kiss on the lips. Anjali refuses to go along with the silencing kiss, but soon finds herself not knowing what she should do. She then starts to struggle under his grasp, Kavya continues to kiss Anjali with such intensity to make her only remember his love. He leads her towards the bed and then Kavya tips over onto the bed with her underneath. Anjali's struggling arms soon start to relax as she looks into his eyes full of love, a love which only belongs to her. She soon gives in to his passionate desires and forgetting all troubles.


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Kripa opens the door and asks with a bored expression, "Can I help you?" Angad looks at her with a loss of words, but this is only temporarily. He then answers playfully, "Is that jerk of a husband home yet?" Kripa annoyedly replies, "I wouldn't know he is probably off grinding with some tramp!" Angad sees the anger on Kripa's face which only fuels his passion for her further. He steps into the room locking the door replying, "Good because he doesn't deserve a gorgeous girl like you… I bet he is too drunk, so drunk in fact he probably can't even recognize you… You don't need a guy like him!" Angad softly kisses her cheek, while her anger starts to melt as she understands the underlying meaning of what he said. Angad continues, "You know you look really hot tonight, you see I have been watching you for days now waiting for a moment you find you without your jerk of a husband. Main iss mauke ka kabse intezaar kar raha tha!" Angad kisses her neck passionately while Kripa playfully responds, "You're unbelievably sexy, you know I was waiting for a time to be alone with you as well! You see I'm not happy with my marriage or my jerk of a husband, if only I had met you sooner" Angad stops kissing her neck and looks at her wide eyed asking, "Wait…what?" Kripa continues while pressing kisses down his chest and neck, "Anyways lets not waste time because you never know when the jerk will show up and ruin our night!" Angad's mouth drops open replying, "HUH?" Kripa then pushes him to the bed laughing at their little game. Angad asks, "You were joking right?... right?" Kripa laughs while kissing him passionately and soon enough Angad forgets his questions only keeping one thing in mind… their love.

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So that was the next part! hope u liked it!! leave comments and sorry for delay!

Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 mindblowing awesome dear 👏 👏


thanks sooo much!!!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

😆 😆 😆 poor boys having to go shopping lol angad is no better than kavya when it comes to their wives 😆 😆 n lol the guys plan 😆 bichari larkiyan....ddnt even have a chance 2 talk 2 each other 😆 😆 😆 was a fab part! n congo 4 completing 150 pages 👏 keep up the good work 😃


lol yea he is like kavya lol! yup poor girls couldnt chat! thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part congrats on completing 150pg


thanks soo much!

Originally posted by: angel_tia

congrats on completing 150 pagess
angad neev and kavya have got brains!!!!!!!devil-brains!!!!!! 😆 sooo
r u continuing this ff or ending it?


lol thanks sooo much!! umm there are about 13-14 parts left in this ff! so yea im ending it but i will start a new one once i get an outline done for it!

Originally posted by: *Ejaz4Hinna*

congrats numeraaaaaa
awww poor guys had 2 go shopping.....lol i hate shopping too which pisses my mum off and shes like "sometimes i wonder if your a boy or girl" grrrr 😡 lol
the guys idea was awesome i tell u....."do not disturb" lol i mean come on its their honeymoon for gods sake and all these girls care about is shopping and gossiping 😡 how unromantic! they should learn from their husbands!
oh well atlast the proper honeymoon began 😉
and the pickup line was gross but hilarious hahaha kavyaaa 😳


lol really? i LOVE shopping lol its my passion LMAO! awww that sucks, lol the sign thing was totally random, im just wierd like that! lol thanks!!

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

awesum awesum awesum awesum! hahah do not disturb 😆 the boys r so bad. i cant wait till u cont...! i seriously felt bad for them when their wives took them shopping.

gurl, u R amazing, cont soon! please...*puppy dog face*

<3 kiran
E> GA <3


thats soo much!! hehe i know but i would do that too shopping in a foreign country is fun however when ur on ur honeymoon thats probably not the best idea to be doing the first days lol! thanks huN!

Originally posted by: eijaz_lover

i loved that part 😃 😃 😃
lmao the boys's idea of "do not disturb" was awsome 😆 😆


lol thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: Fashion101

Awesome part can't wait 4 the next part.

Love,

Saniya


thanks soo much!!


thanks!!


thanks!!

Originally posted by: erier101

Ok, I dont think I commented on this part. Scratch that. I dont think I've been commenting at all! Didnt get aroudn to reading the parts! But now Im caught up and will comment regularly! Fab part like always! Loved the boys with their naughtines!! The couples are so cute 😍 I'm loving it! && you truly are a fab writer! your parts always enlighten mee, they make my day! im always cracking up and my parents decide that instead of coming every two seconds to check teh computer screen they are gonna sit next to me pretending to watch tv, and then im like goddamit i didnt finish reading!! 😆 😆 KK, Continue Sooonnn && Congo on making 150 pages!!

<3 Madiha 🤗


haha lol well glad u caught up! well u make my day by ur awesome comments! lol aww that sucks yea my dad comes in my room to make copies on the printer like every day and he has developed a habit of reading my computer screen and i cant say anything cuz thats sounds like in caught or something so its creepy when he is like peering over and is like who is kripa who sent you this im like uhhhh nooooo one..... my mom is worse she comes in my room and is like vacuum ur room get off the computer etc. im just like yea sure.... parents ...sigh lol thanks huN!


thanks!!

Originally posted by: cute Aleesha

awsome Numerah. congrats for completing 150 pages.
I love ur fanfic and in this part Kavya's line was lovely 😆


thanks a lot!! glad u like!! haha lovely oh man i find that pick up like soo hilarious cuz its soo stupid!!!

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part
lolz the boys r smart
specially angad


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sana


thanks soo much!


thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: sahr_8

lol aww it ok my cousins r comin overr BUT i hope u finish soon lol cant wait to raed the nxt [part


lol yea my baby cousin came over, and they decided to watch lilo and stitch in my room, im like sureeee and my really small baby cousin would not stop crying... it was taking a toll on my sanity lol! but their cute! anyways thanks!! hah i finished 3 in the morning!


thanks soo much!!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome really cute wow the boys had some brains loved ur fic always fun to read


thanks soo much! lol well yea i always make the girls super genius's so it was time the boys develop of brains lol!

Originally posted by: pmrockz

wow congratz on completing 150 pages! Kavya's line was awesome.... 😛
cont soon! 😳


thanks a lot!!
Edited by Numera* - 18 years ago
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😆 such an awesome part 😆 😆 😆 haha the boys get so drunk they're unable 2 recognise their wives...man those girls gave in easily....if i was them i wud have made the guys sleep out in the living room 😆 😆 😆 but another great part, will b waiting 4 the next 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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luvvly numera
a vv hot n sexy part i must say!!!!!

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