**Dosti Mein Pyaar** #2 The End pg.29 - Page 23

the cutest and most adorable ending ever loved each and everything and the face u explained every minute detail magnificent job mindblowing

Originally posted by: kuthi

😛 the story waz great but why did it have to end!!!!!!!!!!!1

lol it had to end because since they were in their career phase they most likely problems they would face would be their wives or husbands suspecting each other of infidelity and affairs etc. Which would mean there would be villains and vamps and i dont really like negative characters i would rather have a positive character has negative shades! plus i had to end it quick cuz college is bout to start and i cant work on two ff's at the same time! lol sorry hun!

that was just brilliant yaar 👏
i still cant believe the ff is ended now 😭 😭 😭
oh well, im also hooked to sweet revenge 😳
anyways just wanna say this one of the best ff i have ever read 😃
the whole script, scenery, characters was excellent 👏

dat was amazing
its sad u ended dis 1 coz i luv it
u did extremely well in dis ff
will miss it
😳

WOW-- that was the first thing that came to my mind after i read ur story !!
no villains, gr8 couples, cute scenes--------> a gr8 story !!--
entirely enjoyed reading it !!!
esp loved all the cute scenes between each of the couples-- and also how no matter wat they stayed together and all that--
also no villains-- definite bonus point-- coz sumtimes it gets really boring coz all stories hav villains but still u put out a gr8 story without em.
newez-- AWSUMMMMMM stuff !!!!!!!
keep up the gr8 work !!_ and cant wait to read more of ur stories ! :D
~Sweetoo

hi
jus read ur whole ff!
amd its amazing!!!!! 👏
really gr8!

hey

just caught up with ur whole fic... seriously loved it alot...

loved all the jodi's... especially AK of course...lol... hmmm, angad was such a sweetheart throughout, nd i loved the fact he loved her so much

haha..kripa made the 1st move, by kissing him, but i gotta say it surprised me as much as angad...looked like she cudn't control the urge 😆 😳

awww, i felt bad 4 him when he had confessed but was rejected by kripa😭 ...poor guy loved her so much,...but o boy!!!, i loved thr confession scene, and loved the way kripa confessed, by kissing him again... 😳 😆 it was reli romantic... i liked thr suhaag raat scene 2... but it was also somewht funny...

hehe... when the gurls were pregnant they sure gave the guyz a hard time with thr mood swings.... nd wanted 2 go shopping on thr honeymoon??? 😕 😆

sorry 4 this reli short comment, i'm busy with revision but decided 2 comment on this anywayz...lol... butseriously loved the whole fic

xx


Irsa

hey

i juz read ur ff yaar

juz got 2 wrds




luved it


🤗

life goes on never ends ❤️

rellllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyy had a grt time reading it 👏

keep up da gudd wrk
luv ya n tak care
mahru

loved ur fic especially AK 😳
very well written!!!!!!
👏