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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1995

Awsome dear,loved it
But why did she faint,waiting eagerly to know
Update soon
Love
Pari

thnk u pari.. 🤢 lv u a lot... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
So guys... Ready wd nxt... Hope u lyk it...

PART 13

He was completely engrossed in his phone and sensed a sound "dhappp" and turned back. There he found a faint sanyukta loosing her sense.

"sanyuktaaa", said rd turning around widening his eyes.

There jiggy on call..
J: rd.. Rd.. Sab kuch thik to hai na.
R: jiggy pta nhi sanyukta ko kya ho gya h. Main rakhta hun.
J: what??? Main abhi aata hun..

And he hung the phone.

R: sanyu..sanyu.. are you fine. Oh god. Sanyu wake up.. ( he shook her face holding her cheeks )

He took her in his arms and placed her on bed. Again he shook her from her shoulders but she did not wake up. He sprinkled sone water on her face but in vein. He again lifted her in his arms and forwarded towards the main door. He placed her in his car.

Meanwhile jiggy reached.
J: rd bhabhi thik to hai na.
R: nahi yaar pata nahi kya ho gaya hai. Kabse hosh me laane ki koshish kar raha hoon par koi asar nahi ( he was hell panicked ). Abhi main hospital jaa raha hoon.
J: thik hai tu ja main guard ko bol k aata hun.
R: jo karna hai kar mujhe abhi sirf sanyu ki fikr hai.

At hospital 10am..

R: dr look her what happened to her. Aankhen hi nahi khol rahi hai.
D: par inhe hua kya hai?

R: I dont know doctor. Wo thik thi achanak se kaise beshosh ho gayi pata nahi.
D: ok dont worry main pehle check kar leta hoon.

R: please doctor use kuch nahi hona chahiye.
D: patience young man. She will be fine.

After a few mimutes, jiggy came and joined Rd, who was sitting on a bench.

J: rd, sab thik hai na. Kya hua hai bhabhi ko. Kya kaha dr ne.
R: kuch nhi yaar. Bas check kar rahe hein.

Meanwhile dr came and both the boys reached him.

R: dr kaisi hai sanyu.
D: kuch nahi bas body andar se bahut weak hai.

R: lekin dr, wo bilkul thik thi. Koi weakness k signs bhi nahi.
D: kya unhone kuch khaya ya piya tha?

R: dr wo bas fresh hoke aayi thi. Khane ya pine ka to sawaal hi nahi hai.
D: ok humne unke blood samples liye hein. Ho sakta hai usme kuch mil jaaye.

R: reports kab tak aayenge doctor.
D: ek do din me aa jayenge. Ap unhe abhi ghar le jaa sakte hein aur maine kuch medicines prescribe kiye hein wo unhe regarly dijiye.

R: ok doctor. Par use hosh to aa gaya na.
D: thodi der baad hosh bhi aa jayega.

Both took sanyukta from hospital. Jiggy drove the car and rd sat on back seat planting her head on his lap.

A tear drop rolled down from his eyes. He wiped it out and raised his face to have a convo with jiggy.

R: jiggy, sanyukta bilkul thik thi. Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha achanak se ise ho kya gaya.
J: rd tu bhabhi k baare me sochna chhod. Wo abhi thik hai. Us room k baare me soch yaar. Mera to dimaag hi kaam nahi kar raha.

R: in sab me to bhul hi gaya yaar. Wo latki hui aurat mere dimag me ghar kar gayi hai. Itni khatarnaak thi yaar.
J: dekh rd. Is maamle jaldi se niptana padega.

Meanwhile they reached home. Rd placed sanyukta and they both headed towards that room. They opened it and entered.

R: ye kya? Yahaan ki lights kaise off ho gayi.
J: rd is waqt ye baat imp hai ki ye room kaise thik hua. Lights aur door to laxmi (the maid) bhi band kar sakti hai par ye room wo decorate nahi kar sakti.
R: haan yaar maine to ye socha hi nahi.

They both were tensed and then rd's phone rung. He gazed the cell.

J: kaun hai rd.
R: pata nahi yaar. Number bhi display nahi ho raha.
J: kya? Dikha. He bhagwaan. (he cut the call)

Again the call.

R: utha k dekhta hoon.
J: nai rd.
R: tu to hai na saath.(and he picked the call)

C: hihihihihihi..(in a chudeil voice)
R: who is this??

C: hahahahaha..(again in same voice)
R: non-sense.(and he cut the call)

J: kaun tha?
R: pata nahi. Aise ajib se calls kaise? Aur kuch kaha bhi nahi bas paaglon ki tarah has raha tha. Ya thi jiggy. Kanhi ye wahi aurat to nahi. Mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai yaar.
J: dont worry rd.. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Zaruru kisine mazak kiya hoga. Tu relax kar abhi.

And then sanyu voiced high. Rd.. Rd..

R: haan sanyu aaya.
J: jaa rd. Bhabhi ko hosh aa gaya hai. Iske baare me sham ko discuss karte hein. Office ki kuch files pending hein. Tu ghar pe hi bhabhi k paas ruk main bhijwa dunga.
R: thanks yaar(they hugged and jiggy left)

Rd reached to sanyu.

R: how are you?
S: main thik hun rd. Bas pata nahi achanak sar kaise bhari ho gaya aur main gir gayi.
R: achha tumne kuch khaya ya piya tha kya? Dr puchh rahe the.

S: nai bas paani piya tha.
R: lekin paani se kya hoga.

S: naya climate hai ho jaata hai rd.
R: zyada dr banne ki zarurat nahi hai.. Tum stress mat lo. Rest karo aj lunch main banaunga.

S: rehne do main kar lungi.
R: bilkul nahi aj laxmi bhi nahi hai.

S: ok main kitchen main baith to sakti hun na.
R: haan par tum apni jagah se hilogi bhi nahi.
S: ok.

Noon 12pm..
In kitchen..

She was sitting on the gas reck bitting a carrot and rd was cooking.

S: tum cook karte hue to aur bhi hot lagte ho. Must say these sweat suits perfect on you.
R: really? Garmi bardaast nahi ho rahi ab.

He said and leaned towards her. Nut she pushed him.

S: kitchen me zyada garmi ho to exhaust fan lagane ki zarurat hai. Ye sab k liye bed room kaafi hai.
R: kaho to isi ko bedroom banaa doon.

S: please rd. Bhuk lagi hai mujhe.
R: mujhe bhi.

S: chup karo aur khana banao. Warna main tumhe kha jaungi.
R: aur mujhe to sanyu recipie hi sabse zyada pasand hai.

They both giggled

They finished cooking, eating and all other stuffs. Sanyu slept and rd on his laptop.

Evening 7pm..

Sanyu woke up and rd was still on his laptop.
S: good evening husband.
R: good evening wifey.
S: uff ye laptop band karo na. Mujhe pata hai jabse main soyi hun tabse lage ho tum.
R: haan sanyu kaam bahut pending hai. Yahaan ka bhi aur mumbai ka bhi.
S: main help kar dungi. Tum band karo na.

And she shut the laptop and put it aside.

S: abhi to tum mujhse baat karo.
R: achha. Kya baat karun?
S: sidhe sidhe kyun nahi kehte ki baat nahi karni.
R: mere baat karne ka tarika thoda different hota hai.
S: abhi to soch me the kya baat karni hai.

He then grabbed her waist and came over her leaning flat on bed.

R: yahi to soch raha tha kaise karni hai.
S: aise baat karoge?
R: tumhi ne majbur kiya hai.

Saying this he placed his lips on hers. Soon he started sucking her lower lip. She was responding in equal passion to his raw attack. He pinched her waist and she opened her mouth. He glid his tongue into her mouth and intermingled with her. He slid his palms to her and clutched both her palms into two tight fists. The kiss grew hungry.

Meanwhile some sound came from drawing room and it broke. They both gazed each other breathing heavily.

R: ye kaisi awaaz hai.
S: main dekhti hun. Waise bhi I am feeling little lazy coffee bhi laaungi saath me.

She said advancing outside the room.
R: sanyu.. Main saath aata hun. Akele mat jao.
S: Relax rd. Agar kuch serious hua to main bulaungi tumhe.
R: careful.
S: hmm..(she smiled and nodded)

She reached towards the drawing room. There she found a vasc rolling and its flowers were also on the floor. She picked it up and adjusted the flower in it.

There rd was tensed and called her.
R: sanyu.. Is everything ok?
S: yeah all good rd. Bas ye flower vasc gir gaya tha.

She placed the vasc and felt air blowing into the room. She gazed towards the window and it was opened.

S: offo ye laxmi bhi na. Kuch yaad nahi rakhti. Khidki khuli chhod di hai. Isi wajah se vasc gir gaya hoga.

She forwarded towards the window and closed it. She turned around and what she saw was beyond her imagination. He eyes became wide and red. She placed her palms on her mouth gazing the scene infront of her eyes.

The same white eyed, red skinned, messed hairs, blooded teeth and scared face was standing right infront of her eyes. A few drops of blood flown from her mouth and she opened her mouth like a wide wolf. Her canons were extra pointed and her tongue was fleshy red. She stared her making her wide enough to form a round.

Sanyu was not in her sense and she shouted "aaawwwaaahhh".. The next second she was faint leaning on ground.

To be continued...

Guys I know m nt rplying u all... Its due to mobile version n pc is always nt available wd me... Still m trying 2 rplying u all.. N harly like button is working... So m really sorry... I always chk 4 ur queries n feedback.. So plz dont 4get cmnt atleast a single word may b gd or bad watevr u found... Lv u all..

Smiti
Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
spooky.. Nice update.. update Asap😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just come across dis ff ...
Its amazing...luvd ur imagination...
Waiting eagerly for next part...update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesome fab part.
thanx for pm me updet asap.😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey girl, this update was great! Their budding romance, with also lots of tragedies, is a perfect drama! Loved this chapter! I am just curious ki how is all this gonna end? I don't want this to be forever in sandhir's life! Hope you come upto that soon! Thanks a tonne for pm'ing and updating! Continue soon! Keeps writing, love you, always! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
what happened to Sanyu??? i hope woh bilkul teek hain... Ab sanyu bhi Ghost ko dekh liya.. i think ab horror part actual main shuru hoga haina??? Eagerly waiting for next part...pls update asap dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! Smiti
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely update dear
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written
love it to the core
Well now also seen the chudail
She's fainted hope so she's fine
keep it up
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome thrilling update yar
hope rd tell d truth abt dis lady ghost
very eagar to know wat is dat
thanks for pm
continue asap :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow the update was awsome
But I m tensed for sanyu
Waiting for next part
Love
Pari

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