FF : HORROR MYSTERIES [ PART 24 UPDATED ] - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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when r u going to update moi checking it every now n then
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome yaar
But it was a chotu one
Plz update soon and thanx fot the pm
Love
Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so guys... ready wd nxt part... spl thnx 2 sakshi, pari, anu
_anya, param_love... all others who support me thnx... here i go..
b4 u start i wd like 2 inform u all dat ds contains 16+ elements.. scroll at ur own risk...
PART 12
He placed his head on bed facing up towards her to get a glance of her. He eyes her and tried to touch her but she jeked his hand.

R: oh god! Meri princess to gussa hai mujhse bahut zyada ab main kya karun. Bura laga chholy..
S(in a crying voice digging her head down): dont touch me.

R: arey baap re tawaa garam hai. Koi baat nahi mere paas iska ilaj hai.

He went towards the wardrobe, took something and went to washroom. As he reached, she was still weeping.

R: aww my baby bas ye aansu ka the end.

He switched off the light and she raised her head planting her palms on bed and knees down.

S: are itba andhera kaise ho gaya. Rd rd. Tum ho kya?

She got off from bed and advantced two steps. Suddenly she collided to a strong chest and was about to fall but he grabbed her from her waist and spot light covered them.

He was non other than rd. He was in a milk white angelic dress with a bedsheet tied on his neck towards back. He was smiling staring her. Her eyes were swollen and red. Tears still had marks on her cheeks. He started singing alongwith wiping her tears.

(chanda ki doli me pariyon ki jholi me shehzaadi aayi meri)-again smiled at her

(chanda ki doli me pariyon ki jholi me shehzaadi aayi meri)-he stroke his fingers on her cheek and she stood straight

(palkon k dar se wo aankhon k ghar me rahe)-she was taking a departure but he clutched her wrist

(khwabon ko sach hone de, har ek dua mei usko hi maanga sadaa)-he pulled her towards himself and har palms fell exactly on his shoulders. They stared straight in each others eyes.

(wo bhi mujhe maang le)-stretched his earlobe making a puppy face.

She started sobbingonce again facing him back. She was wiping her tears from her upper wrist.

(aane se uske yaha mehka hain sara sama)-he placed his palm on her shoulder and went infront of her.

(usko toh sajda kare ab ye zameen aasmaan)-he threw some zinc particles in air and it started raining on her.

(mujhe hain yakeen, itna hasin pahele kahin dekha nahi)-he curve changed to smile and she stared up

(sun le zara tu yeh iltejaah hain khuda)-she strated rotating

(woh kaash mujhko miley)-he stared revolving around her

(chanda ki doli mein, pariyon ki jholi mein

(shehzadi aayi meri)-she stopped and smiled at him, he stared her.

He placed his left palm on her right cheek and wiped the remaining tears.

(khwabo, khwabo ka aao ek ghar banaye)-he went behind her and closed her eyes

(harsu jaha hum mohabbat sajaye)-she opened her eyes and found rd infront of her

(subah shaam ho jaha dilkaashi, raate miley shabnami)-he poined towards bed and forwarded his palms towards her

(ek chand jaise taaron ke dil me pale)-she placed her palm on his and they leaned on bed

(yeh pyar aaise khile)-both stared each other and he placed his palm on her cheek.

Chanda ki doli mein, pariyon ki jholi mein
Shehzadi aayi meri Disha o..o...

R: I am sorry.
S(in a kiddish tone): its ok. Par mujhpe fir mat chillana please.
R: I promise never.
S: ok ab kapde badal lo.

He Just nodded, kissed her foredhead placing his palms on her neck. Soon he changed to bare upper part and trouser. He went near her and she slept in his embrance placing her head on his chest.

Rd's Narration..
Tab jo ho raha tha tab mera dil mera dimaag kuch mere bas me nahi tha. Sanyukta ko to samjha diya tha par main khud ko nahi samjha pa raha tha. Kis tarah se khud pe control kar k maine use sambhala tha ye main hi jaanta hun. Kyunki jo kuch bhi us room me hua aur jo kuch bhi maine dekha wo definitely sapna to nahi ho sakta tha. Mere dimaag bas wahi latki hui aurat aa rahi thi aur un sabka stress maine sanyu pe utar diya tha. Tab agar main kisise ye baat nahi kehta to shaayad main paagal ho jaata.

My narration..
He pecked her forehead and marched outside the the room without disturbing her sleep. He dialled jiggy's number. Jiggy picked up the call.

J(in a sleepy voice): kya hua rd itni raat ko?
R: yaar jiggy aj mere saath kuch bahut hi ajib hua. Mere dimaag me bas wahi ghum raha hai.

J: kya hua rd? Tu thik hai na? Bhabhi ko to kuch..
R: are kisiko kuch nahi hua.

J: fir?
R: aj main laptop pe kaam kar rha tha.

He explained everything.

J: what tu paagal ho gaya hai kya? Wo room agar itne dino se band tha to saf kaise ho gaya? Fir aise kaise koi wahaan latkga?
R: main nahi jaanta yaar. Par main wahi bataa raha hoon jo mqine dekha. Kanhi wo waapas to nahi aa gayi?

J: what rubbish rd? Usne humaari aankhon se saamne dam toda tha.
R: haan par usne kaha tha na ki wo waapas aayegi. Wo na sahi uski soul to nahi aayegi?

J: shut up rd. Ee ye kya bakwaas kar raha hai yaar. Ee.. Aise thodi hota hai bhoot woot. Beee..ekar ki baat kar aaa..aur so ja.
R: par yaar agar jo maine dekha wo sach me meri imagination na hoke sachai hui to.

J: nahi yaar. Aise nahi ho sakta. Bekar ki baatein hein ye sab.
R: yakin nahi ho raha hai na tujhe. Thik hai kal subah mere ghar aa k dekh lena khus. Room bilkul waisa hai jaise hum chhod k gaye the. Ek katra dhul ya ek jaala makdi ka nahi hai.
J: ok relax. Main kal aaunga. Thik hai. Abhi tu soja.
R: ok gn.
J: gn

He hung the phone. But rd could not sleep that night. Only flashes of that incident were disturbing him. Somehow he manged to be on bed till sunrise and then after looking to the sun rays, he was little satisfied and dozzed off.

Morning 9am...
Sanyukta came out of the bathroom in her bathrobe, dried her hairs infront of the mirror and her sight fell on sleeping rd. He was still sleeping calm and quite.

She went to him, sat besides him on bed and brushed her fingers on his hairs.

S: uthh jao shaitaan nawaab. Subah k 9 baj gaye.
R: sone do na sanyu.

S: arey office nahi jaana kya?
R: ummm..

He replied circling his arms around her belly and digging his head besides her thies.

S: ye kya bachpana hai?
R: tumhare saath nahi karunga to pados ki aunty k saath karunga kya. Ab sone do na please.

S: hmm main chali breakfast banaane. Tum agar correct time pe nahi aaye to you will miss uour favourite manchutian chow noodles.

Saying this she removed his arm and was taking departure but suddenly he clutched her elbow and pulled her closer. He rolled her and came ovver her clutching both her wrists.

R: meri favourite dish ka naam to sanyukta hai. Mujhe to yahi khana hai.

He said rubbing his nose and bitting his lower lip.

S: leave rd. Tumne brush bhi nahi kiya.
R: to mujhe nahi lagta in sab k liye brush chahiye. Iske liye to pyar aur mood hi kaafi hai jo mera hamesha hota hai.
S: rd tum..

Before she complete, he pressed his lips on hers gently sucking her lower lip. It continued and he freed her. Her palms reached his bare chest feeling his strong 6 pack tonned abs. The kiss grew more deeper and he untied her bathrobe. He glide his palms upto her bare breast and felt the amazing softness of it squeezing it hard. He slid down his mouth to her breast, trapped her nipple into his mouth and ran his tip of tongue on her tips. "mmm", she moaned pulling his hairs and he bit it. "sss..mmm", she moaned even more. He shifted to other one to grab it. He was sucking one nipple and pressing her other breast.

Meanwhile rd's phone rang and they came into sense. He shifted his vision towards his cupboard and the phone flashed "jiggy". Within second he got down from bed and left the room in an extremely tensed mood to attend the call leave a half bare sanyukta in a dumbstruk position. She tied her bathrobe and sat on the bed.
Sanyukta's narration...
Iss pehne rd ko itna pareshan nahi dekha tha. Shayad wo sach keh raha tha kal raat ki baat. Mujhe kaha aur maine believe nahi kiya shaayad isiliye jiggy se keh raha ho. Ho sakta hai ye sab uska wehem na ho. Warna aj tak rd mujhse kabhi bhi unchi aawaaz me baat nahi ki jaisi kal raak ko kar raha tha. Mujhe pata lagana hi hoga ki baat kya hai.

My narration..
She marched towards him and he was busy in his phone. Suddenly he heard a sound "dhhapp". He turned around and found a senseless sanyukta leaning on ground.

To be continued...
Precap - sanyu facing ghost...

Thnku 4 reading... Hope u all like it... Plz guys do leave ur feedback.. Again again m telling silent reader... Plz rehem karo yaar ek word taarif ka writer ka hausla badhaa skti h... So cheezy... Anyway lv u all...

SMITI
Edited by Nain5000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Precap - sanyu facing ghost...

really????? oh god ab kya hoga, ur story is getting more and more interesting... rd kiski bare main bat kar raha tha, 'vo dum thodne ke bare main'... Rd ne past main kuch galat toh nahi kiya na???? no no rd is a sweetheart... vo kuch galat nahi kar saktha...eagerly waiting for next part,pls update asap yaara...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome as usual . Loved it.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

eee☺️☺️ its amazing👏👏

kitna cutely manaya sanyu ko☺️☺️

kash koi mujhe bhi aise hi manaye☺️ but i know mere rd ko aane me abhi bahut time hai🤣 till then i can w8🤣

plzzz next part soonnn

and thanks for pm me

lots of love

sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey smitit! This part was really awesome! You wrote it so well! I am really very very very sorry for not commenting on part 11. I just read part 11 & 12 now! I was really busy with my tests at class. Sorry! *puppy face* this part was really nice. But the precap, why did sanyu faint? Thanks a tonne for updating and pm'ing! Continue soon, coz you know I love reading your write-ups! Lots of love, keep writing always! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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suspense n awesome update
very eagar to know d reason behind dis all incidents
thanx for pm
continue asap :))))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome dear,loved it
But why did she faint,waiting eagerly to know
Update soon
Love
Pari
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome lovely part.updet asap.thanx for pm me👏😊

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