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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting waiting for masterji and student to come up
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Maaneet convo nice..kaccha part was so funny
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 15 i
awesome dear...
lovely...
Geet was trying to understand by herself...
cont soon dear...
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Maan let her sleep.But now he was really feeling hungry but couldn't expect any favour from Geet.




"Maan otherwise you gonna have headache again so better to order instead of expecting anything from her .Even I am not in mood to cook." He looked back at her and searched for his phone.


But he had forgotten that his phone was in his room when he came downstairs fuming in the evening...


" Eh lo...yaha yeh hogi koi na koi kaand to hoga he (wherever she is something unusual always happens )" He wanted to kick himself that how he forgetting things...


" Oh should use this land line" He took a deep breath finding land line phone in front..


He just had spread his hand to pick up the receiver when something unexpected happened. A total black out in the room. Electricity/Light had gone "Ab isko kya ho gaya. Without electricity this phone not gonna work.." He mumbles..


Somehow he came to the door and pulled the handle but what he got ? A broken handle came to his hand and now they had been locked in this room and couldn't open it without key or someone opens it from outside.


He knocked the door...he hit the door..scrammed .."Nakul...Nakul ..Daddi Maa...is there some one outside ...Please open the door.." But nobody responded back as every had gone to their beds in servant's quarter now and Daddi's room was far away from study.


It was surprising there was no effect on Geet .She was in deep sleeping shifting sitting position to lying on sofa.." Kitni garmi hai koi phanka to challa do (its too hot please some one switch on the fan)" she said raising her arm in deep sleep..


"Isko pankhe ki paddi hai...Mera haal behaal ho raha hai.." He rubbed his hand over sweating forehead.In search of window he hit the sofa and lost his balance directly fall over Geet.


" Bachao..bachao..kon hai...kon hai..mujhe mat maaro.." His whole weight was on her so it brought her out of sleep.


" Chup bilkul chup ..Its me Maan.." Some how he tried to get up but dug his elbow in her stomach unintentionally


" Aaahhh aaah...you are giving me punishment in this way..Why here is total dark ? U switched off every thing..mujhe sazza denne k bahaane ..you are trying to save electricity bill.." she yelled


" Bakwaas band karro Geet...its electricity failure...No phone is here even..Handle of door has been broken...I had already told Ramesh for repair of this lock..But he didn't..Now we have been trapped here.Every one has been gone to bed so no one gonna listen to us.." He cleared..


" Aab kya hoga...?" worried she said.


" I was going to open the window..But due to dark I hit against this sofa...Window open karte hai..Watchman hoga baahar ...let me call him.."


" You can't walk in dark not to worry...I can..I m used to it...coz in the villages electricity failure and cuts are very common..and Even I hav played hide and seek a lot in dark..Give me your hand..challo.." Without waiting for his reaction some how she grabbed his hand in dark and showed him way toward window.


She opened the window ..What they found light was there in whole area even other parts of KM .Just not in this part.


" Light to hai saare area main .Even in Mension too.." Surprised he said.."Oh is part ka main fuse box alag hai..May be some problem in that.."He estimated.


" Karam Singh...Karam Singh..." Maan called watchman so many times but no response .." Such a dead loss ..all these...When ever they are needed no one is here " Frustrated Maan said..


How Karam Singh could respond when he had severe stomach pain due to over eating and so he was rushing to toilet after each 15 minutes. Even now he was there.


"Maan may be Karam Singh is not here let me try..." There was some light in room coming from outside after sliding curtain..and opening window.


She pulled his shirt dragged him back .."Ooye Ramu...Shaamu..Raaju..." She took some names aloud.But who were they...Maan scratched his head.




"By the way who these persons are...? " he questioned


" Don know may be any one..Even any one walking on the road...someone may listen and will respond to us.." She giggled .


" Chup ho jaayo Geet...u stupid...keep ur ideas with you..Aab mujhe he kuch karna padega.." He jerked her..." Sabko dekh lunga.."


" Itni baddi baddi aankon se yeh Geet dikhti nahi...sabko dekh legay..." she teased.


" Geet it's the limit..." He trapped her in the grip of his arms In corner next to window.


" Why you talk this much ..Always blabber ...huh tell me..haan Geet..?" He whispers near to her ear.In a jiffy she was losing herself with His strange manly fragrance .


They fight...They remain in continuous nonsense..But what bond they share that suddenly in a moment This bond forces to cover a long distance between them.


" I m feeling suffocated Maan ..please leave me.?" she tried to free herself.


"Chod du...sach main chod du..?" He tried to read her mind.




"Do u fed up with me ... ?" She questioned so innocently that Maan melted in a moment.."When I said I am fed up..huh bollo Geet...u really think about me so.."


"wo wo ..." She had Goosebumps so Maan questioned remained unanswered when she gave a turn to this " Its too hot here Maan...even I am feeling hungry..."..


" Oh u r feeling hungry but abhi to tum keh rahi k...u have fast and you advised me to keep fast..." Maan came back to reality...


" When I said so? "


" In sleep..you are too much ..?" He nodded his head.


" Okey aab mujhe he kuch karna padega...I gonna climb down from this window okey.." He explained his plan.


"Haa ...aap kaise ...no no Maan haddi pasli tut gayi fir kya hoga ...(if u ll hav fracture Maan while climbing down )" She grabbed him from his biceps to stop him..


" Geet there is no other way okey wait here.." He jumped outside from window and with the help of pipe outside climbed down.


At gate


Karam Singh was back and even there was no electricity too ..As this area was also connected to same system.


" One is this stomach ache and now this electricity ...saab taraf hai bas yaha chod kar...Have to wait till morning...kya kar sakta hu mai..."Much disturbed with his condition he was talking to self.But suddenly heard a loud noise just outside KM ..Actually Maan put his foot accidently over a huge decorative flower pot which broke to pieces after hitting against metal door .Whole area echoed with the noise.


Maan might haven't expected what gonna be next..

Karam Singh

"Yeh kaise aawaz thi...I think some one is there inside...Mai 15-15 minute baad toilet jaa raha hu ..I think some one took benefit of my condition..Madam gonna forgive me but Maan Sir ll not spare me for being irresponsible..." He was about to cry " If I had informed him ...wo chute de deti..koi aur duty kar leta...but now will not listen.."


He opened the gate and started to shout " Chor chor chor.." all happened such a sudden way that was out of Maan's imagination.If there was any theif.He might have run away after finding that some one is behind him.But Maan remained there to find out who was shouting.He was near to plants it so too much dark there.


" Yeh kon chilla raha hai" He thought


" Chor chor chor.." Karam Singh grabbed him from behind and without looking his face started to bet him with his stick..."Maan tried to free himself "leave me leave me.." Attack was from behind so it not gave a chance to Maan to stand properly ...Even Maan was unaware who had caught him .No one could reorganize each other properly..


He started to blow whistle he had ..Ramesh heard that and all servants from servant quarter ran toward the side..


Hearing word " chor chor " from Karam Singh even every one also followed him "Chor chor "


No one tired to find out who that man is and beat him black and blue hitting him with sticks punching him...Made him almost unconscious.


Geet was screaming form window.."chod do chod do..he is Maan...not a chor.." But in this crowd her voice has been lost some where..When it was more than enough she adopted other idea andstarted to drop decorative pieces placed on the side table next to window on those all.When those hit on their head they all looked upward .Maan was laying on stomach groaning in pain"Haaye maar daala...eke k ko dekh lunga.."


" Who is there ? Iska ek saathi ?" Nakul pulled Ramesh's shirt.


" You idiots its me Geeet here..." She yelled


" Geet baby hai upper but why are you dropping things on us like this .." Nakul questioned aloud


" You duffers if you have phone uski light me dekho kisko peet rahe thay tum..''Fuming she said


Ramesh tuned Maan.He was on his back.When he dropped the flash on his face.."Chotte saab...chotte saab.."Every one rooted to spot...


Even whole drama disturbed Daddi too and she switching on the lights of hall..Opening the main entrance and came out "yeh kaisa chor hai bahar" surprised she was

On the other side of KM

"What is this ...how Maan Sir chor ki jagah pitt kaise gaye.." Ramesh was in search of any safe place to hide


" Maan to tum sab ko baad main bataye gay .pehle main batati hu some one opens the study door from outside and bring Maan in the house.." she said


What was happening it was far away from every one's imagination Karam Singh ran to open the main entrance of KM..Ramesh Nakul and Ajay all picked up almost unconscious Maan and was about too enter KM when clashed with Daddi...


" Maan Maan...kya hua inhe...kya hua hamare bachche ko inki yeh haalat kisne ki..? Hamari kuch samjh main nahi aa raha?" Her heart was in her mouth finding Maan in this condition...Daddi was about to faint when Geet held her from behind.


Servant Aanad had quickly opened the study door from outside


" Daddi Maa Daddi Maa.." She gave support to her and made her lay on couch .Servants put Maan on other couch


"Geet baby..Geet baby wo..." Scared off Nakul tried to explain .


" Mujhe kuch nahi sunna abhi ...doctor ko bulaya kissi ne k nahi.." She yelled ...whom to look after first she was unable to understand ..Daddi and Maan's condition made her blood run cold." Maan Maan ...utho.." She held his face in her hands ..


" Daddi Maa yeh lijiye ...yeh medicine lijiye..." Geet put Daddi's blood pressure pill in her mouth forcibly from her box which Ajay brought from upstairs.


In five minute Dr. Kapoor and his assistant Vinod came.Dr.Kapoor gave Daddi injection .Her blood pressure very high due to shock .Vinod looked after Maan's injuries .


Geet explained things in brief to doctor how this happened. Doctor was surprised and Servants too much scared what they had done without analyzing the situation.


Daddi had been shifted to her room .Under effect of injection she was in sleep and servant Ajay's sister Milli was with her.Maan whose condition was worse Geet set beside him..


" I am sorry Maan...all this happened due to me...I am too bad...?" She reduced to tears holding Maan's hand..


" uh..ahhh...ahhh...Geet..Geet..." He had severe pain in his injuries on back especially and arms ..As the effect of injection was reducing ...He was feeling much restlessness.


" Maan Maan..boliye ...I am beside you..need any thing...?" How much disturbed she was it was written all over her face.


"Geet turn me on my stomach...Pain in my back is unbearable.."He rubbed his legs in restlessness over the bed..


" Ji Maan ...main aati hu na apke pass..." She slips under same covers next to Maan and rolled him over her .As he had stomach ache too...Putting her both arms around his waist.With light hands she started to massage his back .Which gave little relief to him.He rubbed his stubble against her chest like a small child in mother's lap do..


" So jaaea Maan ...subh uth kar fir se fight bhi to karni hai na" Her heart was crying and eyes flooded with emotions ...She grabbed him tightly placed soft kiss on his hair as his face was on his chest.

Again humor to pain...What gonna be next...wait ...


Sonia


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Yeh kaisa ehsaas hai...Duur ho kabhi tu fir bhi paas hai



Yeh kaisi khalish hai...Yeh kaisi tapish hai
(Khalish - khaalipan...tapish- garmi)





Khaab hai tu woh...jo hongay sach bhi kabhi

Tu mazil ka wo safar hai..dur bahut dur jo hai abhi

Tu yaane...ya na jaane...maane jaa na maane

yeh kaisa iqraar hai...yeh kaisa izhaar hai

Kehna chahun keh na paun

Lage jaise HUMKO TUMSE PYAR HAI 😳

Geet



But really all Dreams do come true?





Sonia



<--- Chapter 15 Part 1
Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice👏👏




geet switch off maans phone😉




maan scolded geet😭




poor geet😭




maan gave punishment to geet😉




update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
It's amazing. Poor maan is hitted by his own servants. Geet is feeling guilty and dadi ma also become restless. Maan is having so much pain
. geet is taking care of him. And trying to sooth his pain. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
aww poor maan chor jhagah pit gaya 😆😆
but felling bad for him😔
waiting for next..cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome sab ne maan ko chor sochkar dhulaye ki and he is in pain waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsme updtae.that kachha part.rofling...but my poor geetu.maan to uspe aivehi baras gaya.bin badal barsat...waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update..wow song is awsme...

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