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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi m sorry I was busy so couldn't read the last update but I have read it today and also commented ...do post next update...
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it's amazing dear.after a long time i read this story. geet become very sad after hearing pinki's word. now she is thinking her position in km. maan is trying to ignore geet but he can't able to do so. dadi ma is also get to know about maan's feelings for geet. last part was amazing when maneet were busy in their sweet nok jhok and masti. waiting for next dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
updating just for readers ...15 July



Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Great update
Maaneet nok-jhok nice
Eagerly waiting for next part
thanks for pm
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Medicine worked and Maan went into deep sleep .Geet had made her mind not to disturb him due to his bed health.Put his phone on silent and removed the reminder he had set for 5 pm." If you won't take class for one day...nothing ll turn upside down...But your health matters more.." she stroked his cheek with her hand softly and got up from bed.


She decided to revise once again what Maan had asked and to go through next chapter by own self ." Geet you have to prove that you are not dumbo in front of Master ji..Just wait..kaise shock hote ho aap..after you ll learn how intelligent I am" She was over the moon (excited).


She had revised but when it came to new chapter she had problem in accounts. Her whole plan to impress Maan had been ruined..."Geet ! you couldn't drop weapons..try again.." She cheered herself up again


Reminders..alarms..etc matters nothing for Maan..so even though Geet had switched off his phone..he woke up around 5:15.He was feeling fresh after this quick nap." Whats the time ? ..I think I woke up before time..Good !!" a slight smile came to his face.But when he looked at the clock it was saying 5:15 "What how it is possible..!! He quickly grabbed his phone which was off.In a jiffy he judged who did this.."Geet ...I don gonna spare you.."


"Daddi Maa..Daddi Maa.." Bare footed Maan yelled..running downstairs .Every one was aware that Mr. Khuraana gonna set this house on fire now " Geet ...Geet come downstairs immediately ...you silly girl.."


" Maan betay..Are you alright ?..Hows ur head ache now..? worried Daddi took not a moment to be there .


"Nothing happened to me..But you know what your sweet heart did..?" irritated he said


" Humme kya patta hoga...hum kya astrologer hai...?" she teased.


" Daddi you are too much.." he nodded his head .."Geet ...Geet...come down in 5 minutes otherwise.." he screamed aloud.


" Otherwise.." Geet repeated his words who was behind his back which he not observed.Her sudden arrival changed his tone some how he knew how to put control .


" You...you ...what you think off yourself ?..Don be over smart in front of me k...You wanna bunk class for today ...isliye mera phone off kar diya.." he burst on her.


" Maan betay kyo chilla rahe hai..bechaari bachi per...? " Daddi interfered


" Daddi please don come in between us.We r not family here but as teacher student .." Maan requested


" Maan ...Maan...maine yeh day off k liye nahi kiya...But I did that just because you could take little rest.." She said sobbingly " I revised what you asked again ...Even I was still going through next chapters when you called me.." Her teary hazel eyes were enough to tell how much she was hurt.


It was matter of her future so Maan had to take some hard steps so he had to get a grip on himself.."Geet just listen to me.You did mistake and you gonna get punishment for it now.." he declared .


" I know..Like every one in this house..aab mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai...Chotey Saab k order ki...boliye.."she dared to speak up


" Chup bilkul chup...just listen ..I gonna take your class...this is first thing.." he put his finger on her lips.." Now about your punishment...After class you gonna cook for me and you..I mean dinner...tumko sabke liye banana padtta...per bach gayi..Because if you cook after class it gonna take long...But Daddi Maa needs to have on time..isliye main tumko chod raha hu..k.."Determined Maan said


Geet looked toward Daddi Maa for any support.But Daddi shrugged her shoulder " I don wanna b a scapegoat k..Both of you solve your issues by own.."


Daddi was not sad but happy as she knew If Maan gave this punishment to her.He not gonna spare her alone in kithen.When it comes to Geet she knew how to cook so nothing to worry about .As Daddi wanted to give them a space to let their relationship bloom .


" Sabhi mijhe akela chod gaye..Daddi..Nakul...Ramesh...no one is here ..." she made baby face .


" Per main tumko nahi choduga.." Maan grabbed her hand and almost dragged toward studies .


In the study


Maan forcibly made her sit on the sofa .Even Nakul had placed new White Board here which Maan ordered in the morning..Much annoyed she was blabbering without making any voice.Her coming and going facial expressions brought smile on Maan's face and finally burst in laughter.


" By the way kitni galiya nikaal chukki ho mujhe.."He teased.


" Haaye apko kaise patta main galiyaan nikaal rahi thi.." how this sudden question forced Geet to pour her heart out .Even she was not able to understand as she was in own thoughts and forgot who questioned her.


" What ?" surprised Maan gave a glare to her with his false anger but some where he was enjoying it.He took few step forward toward her.


" Hey Babaji !! Yeh maine kya kiya...aab tu gayi Geet...not just dinner ..lagta hai baartan (utensils) dhone padegay.." Stuck dumb in shock she thought "Kapde bhi donne padegay inke ..But I don"t gonna wash his inners..no no..mujhe sharam aati hai .." she nodded her head thinking about it and then hided her face with hands.

" Yeh kya kar rahi ho.." Amazed at her gesture he said


"Main main main aapka kaccha (boxer)...nahi dhone waali...pehle he bataa deti hu .." totally slip of tongue again ...it was sure that she was not in her right mind at this moment ..


" Mera kaccha...wo kaha se aa gaya...your r a derailed train yeh patta tha mujhe but I think tumhara mind bhi derail ho gaya hai ...kya bol rahi ho.." he grabbed her and squeezed her arms.


" Nahi nahi mera yeh matlab nahi tha .." She was about to cry .."Wo wo ..I mean to say ..I will clean utensils ...will wash cloths but but..."


"Geeettt...You shamelss girl...chup bilkul chup...?" He groaned.


"Apke saame bol kon sakta hai...main main to bas yeh keh rahi thi k...wo wo apka kaccha.." Pouting her lips she said innocently.


" Kaccha...just listen to me ...don use this term again okey in front of me...main kaccha nahi pehnta...aur agar fir se tumne yeh lafaz kaha na ..mujhe se burra koi nahi hoga." pointing finger toward her he warned.


" Kya !!!!!!" Her eyes popped out in surprise " Aap kaccha nahi pehne te...cheee cheee...hey Babaji yeh pehla insaan dekha jo ..." She was in disbelief.


" Bas karo meri Maa...mujhese aur bardaashat nahi hota" he pulled his hair in anxiety " If I said I don't wear kaccha ...it means I wear boxers.You got it now ?" It was more than hang over for him and dropped himself on sofa.


"Aap theek hai na...are you all right..?"She rushed near to him


" U have turned me insane Geet ?" He burst.


" Aap chilla rahe ho...oh it means you are fine..." Calmly she said "Boxers ..?"She came to same question again.


"In your jo kacche market main milte hai na..jo factories main bannte hai...unko boxers kehte hai.." she had made his condition miserable "But why why I am explaining this to you...?" he thought for a while.


"Oh yeh baat hai...why you took it long...sidhe sidhe keh detey na aap underwear pehnte ho...?" She giggled "Per main fir se keh deti hu kacha ho ja wo wo kya ? Ha Boxers...I don gonna wash it...?" she cleared.


"Hey Babaji kya item banayi hai aapne...iska jo hoga so hogga but she gonna turn me mad.." He remembers almighty.


"Aapne kuch kaha ..?"


"I m not gonna give you any work or punishment..But please stop ur nonsense now ?" He almost begged.


"Yeh hue na baat Master ji..?" Challo challo aab hum padte hai okey.." voluntarily she placed books in front of Maan.


" I m not in condition that can teach her.Per iski class na le ...than she gonna start any new drama.."Somehow he gathered ownself and got up.


"Now with which subject we gonna start ?" She questioned going through her books.


" Give me your business studies book..I ll write down some problems on board and you have to solve it on your notebook ...just in 45 minutes okey..." He almost snatched book from her hand.


" Master ji why r u getting rude ? ...Even before test ...it means u gonna beat me after it ...agar mera test theek na hua.." She regrets ..But Maan smelt that it was just her over acting.


" Geet apni nautanki band karo..and concentrate on your studies ..You almost hav wasted one hour in this useless stupid debate.." he ordered .


Maan Singh Khuraana was in action now.So Geet dared not to speak out a word in next one hour while her test was going one.In this time Maan planned what he has teach her next.


Even without saying a word Geet handed over test to Maan.There were just few minor mistakes in it otherwise she did well.


" Not bad...Miss Handa...if you put your whole effort in studies in stead of thinking about nonsense ...there will be no mistake..?" Maan praised her and advised her.


"Okey now lets solve some accounts problems.." He took accountancy book from table .But Geet's unusual behavior was troubling him as she had kept mum from long.


"Whats the problem...why are you so silent ?"


"U asked me to keep quite ...and I also feeling hungry ..?" she answered.


" I asked you to be a good girl ...not to behave like a mad...yeh nahi kaha k agar koi problem hai fir bhi na bolo.." a sudden smile came to his face after looking at her innocent face.


"Just have look over that side table ..Nakul already had placed sandwiches and juice .." He pointed toward side table." I knew u gonna feel hungry and if you go out to get something ...uske baad tumko yaha takk lane main mujhe 2 hours lag jaate..." he said.


He himself brought the stuff for her and himself .It was about 8 and after 15 minutes break they again continued with the studies.Geet really behaved in good way and when they bind up it was about 10 .She was feeling too sleepy and yawning.


"By the way Geet you still have to cook for both of us na...?" he said mischievously.

"Tonite I have kept fast okey so I need not to eat something ..Aap bhi rakh lo its good?" Dozing she answered resting her head on sofa back.


"Iska kuch nahi ho sakta...I think its better to order for home delivery ..? " He nodded thinking about her acts put cushion behind her head .


But one more intense drama is there yet to come wait and watch...Maan ki dhulaae



Sonia



Its part (i) will update later...Please have a look...if you spend you time on this at least comment bhi kar do



Disclaimer : Tense liberties according to rules of contemporary writing

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Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was s super hit update.
Poor Geet... She was trying to make Maan relax so she switched off his phone n alarm and sat for the study and revised her lesson in advance.
But Maan blasted on her and took her for the class
OMG
That kachchha part
That was too hilarious
😆😆😆
Though I felt odd to read their conversation on such a topic yet I enjoyed that
But one thing is sure
Geet always makes him smile..and dadi can see them coming close and she too is happy for Maan
Thanks for the update
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow superb... but I couldn't understand hindi parts.😭
I really love this story. Just love this Maan and Geet. Sometimes they are like Tom and Jerry.
Thanks for giving us updates in your busy schedule.🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
it's amazing sonia. geet is really too much. maan always get irritate but try to control himself. that kacha and boxer part was hilarious. maan is teaching geet. i am surprised after seeing his patience level. i hope he keep himself like this way. because if he shout on her she will get scared. waiting for next dear


sonia i am waiting for tanha's next part. plz give it sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome master ki band banjade student ne🤣
waiting for next
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awesome update ...loved it dear...😃
By the way , today is the last validity of my net connection of this month ...So I will recharge on Saturday due to some personal issue...So will comment on sat / sun...plz bear with me...

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