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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: miac

Oho dear anu heart breaking update and how desperate I want to know about her kids now...


Raji, thank you for taking the time to read. Her kids truth will be revealed lil later. But shloke will find out soon enough.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lachii

awesome story anu ...i read the first two parts and it felt like a pretty nice start with mystery around aastha and her kids' father...i thought it was some flashback or something...the third part cleared that it was no past but all present...

but my oh my...the fourth and the fifth part took the story to another level, a very very serious issue and alarmingly common issue...and you are handling it with such maturity...the way you described her reaction to abuse and the way it affected her personality...it was just too realistically done...👏

now time for some HAS...obviously aastha could not have tolerated any sexual relation with any guy so this must be her adopted kids...prove me right, prove me right...plz plz plz😳😆

do tweet me whenever you update again, i am also planning to tweet instead of pm bcz its much less time consuming


I'm so happy that you liked the story. Thank you so much for the feed back. I'm touched. Like your HAS thinking. I'll just leave it at that for now, may be she could've gotten her self drunk and hada one night stand...hmmm ur thinking right.. It's s possible scenario...
Promise will tweet when ever I update. Thanks once again for the love.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashlok

awesome dear

it was fabulous
the update was heart touching dear
aastha need someone to love her
i think shlok will love her more than she want
but still the tittle seems to be mystry dear is there is any mystry with the title?
love ur update anu


Thank you so much Aishu! It's a sad reality! Glad your liking the story. She's already got her kids. But s mans love, Shlok is a good possibility...but is she ready for his love...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

awesome update

ok so dat was the story of kalindi
waiting to know more abt astha
do update soon


Don't you want to know about Shlok too...
Thanks ruha...will update bit later...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: athmi

really heart crushing update,😭

continue soon...
tfd pm


It's sad indeed. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Nice update dear... Poor astha has gone thru a lot in the past... Hope her future will be filled with lot of joy and happiness...


Thank you for taking the time dear. And glad your liking the story. She has indeed gone through a lot. She deserve to be happy...I'm sure she will.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini



I've never been in favour of the death penalty. I think it's just too easy. The perpetrators don't suffer enough. So yes, he got off way too easy for my liking. But I needed to end it there itself. He didn't have any further use for me. He's done his part. She's been through a lot. She's still here and he's not. So she's the victor.

@bold that ws poetic⭐️

bt yes the man got away easily leavng astha wid a lifelng guilt😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini


Three times... I applaud your dedication and determination. I would've just given up. Thank you aishaa!
Thank you for letting me know that you felt her anguish and felt the disgust as well. I think you're have an amazing imagination, rather than me being a good writer. Just to spite u I just might have to change the storyline. You shall get the a sewers soon. May be not. May be I'd just let u ponder with your assumptions. Glad you're enjoying the story. Will get to ashlok soon. He's just been blown away carried away by hurricane Astha... Will he come out of it bruised battered or without a scratch...wait and see.

nw u are talkng like Jane leavng us wid uncertainities😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
@aishaa Glad you saw the poetic side of it. I'd take it as compliment to be compared to Jane in any way. I'm missing her updates. Been stalking her thread.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 5


Hope it's a relaxing Sunday for all of you. But for us here in Dubai, it's the first day of the week. This is a very short update. Hopefully will post one more update later today. Thank you to all the silent readers as well. It gives me great pleasure to see the number of views. Hope you'd keep following my story and show your love. I know at the moment there's no ashlok but, I'm getting there. It may be boring as well. But bare with me...I need to lay the foundation to build the building. How tall it's gonna be it have No idea at the moment... Keep reading. Cheers!

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Chapter 6

Astha has seen only a single picture of her father. She found out about the trust fund and the house that her father had left for them. She wondered why her mother never used it or told her about its existence.It was after five years since Kalindis' death that she stumbled upon the title deed to the house and the legal documents with regard to the Trust Fund, when she was going through her mothers belongings. She was puzzled to as to why her mother never told her about any of this. But all her doubts were cleared when she opened the sealed letter addressed to her.



My darling Asthu,


If your reading this letter then that means I'm no longer with you physically. But, baby know that I'll always watch over you and even in death I shall love you. Keep me in your heart. You're the best thing that happened to me. The decision to keep you, give life to you was the easiest and the most important I had to make. If I had do it all over again I wouldn't change a thing. I will walk to hell and back for you million times over. Because you're worth it.


I hope my darling, you know how much I love you and what you mean to me. Please don't hate me, for keeping this truth from you. I lied to protect you from disappointment and hurt. Hope you'll understand my reasons.


Don't hate your father, because if it wasn't for your father, you wouldn't have come to my life. Nothing or no one is more precious to me than you. He was trapped due to traditions and society. I have no anger towards him, and I don't want you to hold any grudge against him either. Find it in your heart to forgive him. Its the best way to move forward. Don't let your past which you had no control of decide your future, which is in your hands to mould just the way you want to. But remember sometimes things don't always go according to our plan. When that happens believe in the good that you have done and the goodness in you.


Kalindi explained to her daughter with minimal details the truth about her father. She ended the letter...with these final words...


My darling baby, I don't know how old you're now. But know that I'm very proud of you, I'm very proud to be known as Asthas mother. I think the reason I was born was to give birth to you. To make sure you are born. I have fulfilled my purpose in life. You too have a reason to be here, a right to be here. Find your purpose and pursue it to the best of your ability. Don't be afraid to take chances in life. Live your life on your own terms. I love you and will love you for an eternity. Forgive me my sweet child for my lies. May you always be surrounded by happiness and love. May God Bless You Always!


Your loving

Mama.


She read the letter many times over. Astha wished her mother was with her, so that she can tell her that it's ok. There's nothing to ask for forgiveness. That she understands why she did and said what she did? Astha didn't know what she was gonna do with the house and the trust fund. She decided to just let it be for the time being.


She promised her self that she will put all that into good use. Something to honour her mother. Finding the truth about her father, made her more determined. She promised her mother and herself that she will come out of all this not as a weak victim but a victorious warrior!


Chapter 7

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Edited by Anunilmini - 11 years ago

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