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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Thanks aparna, for taking time from your busy schedule to read my fiction. I'm touched. Yes, ashlok saga will be unfolding in the coming updates. Glad your liking the story. I know the first few updates are bit heavy, but things will dart to look bright. Hope you'll find time to keep track of this. I'll keep on bugging you with my twitter tags.

Edited by Anunilmini - 11 years ago

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drafsul

@drafsul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Wow didn't realise u had updated also ... gonna read now ... will comment then 😃

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drafsul

@drafsul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

First of all thank you for reading and commenting. And answer to your question. Witness as in proof of once being. I head it a movie dialogue. As in the movie she says once kids are witnesses of their parents. I have taken the tittle keeping that in mind, but might change it, she has immense guilt and moreover regret. I shall reveal why? Soon. In the next...

ur most welcome dear ... its a pleasure reading ur ff ... I must say its a unique one soo far with a very different concept ... thanx fr da explanation 😊

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: lachii
Very nicely written, lovinb the flow of ur story n at least I can say for me, despite absence of ashlok, it is far from boring...

Thanks Sonia! You are a sweetheart. Means a lot.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesome updates...

Thank you. Would really like to know your name? If you don't mind that is.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: rbb1
Another nice update thank you

Your welcome. And thank you for reading.

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drafsul

@drafsul

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Alright dat was heartbreaking ... poor poor aastha 😭 ... can't believe dat psycho killed her mom and then himself 🤢 ... loved da 7th chapter ... really excited as to how shlok is gonna break all those walls around her ... really like ur unique concept ... well I am having another query now ... as far as I have known for a molested and raped person its very difficult to be intimate ever again ... so is aastha also gonna suffer from dat problem ... infact its so bad for some ppl dat they can't bear to be touched ... wt should cause pleasure causes them pain ... wouls love to see how shlok would handle dat if she does have this problem ... will be waiting for da next update 😊

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Just read all the parts...omg you are totally a brilliant and perfect writer anu👏...u know how to keep ur readers interest alive in the story👏...every chapter was great⭐️...but the later ones were sooo emotional😭...

Liked ur unique concept⭐️...u have selected a very sensitive issue...hats off for that👏...
Loved astha and her twin daughters😳😳😳...want to know abt their past story tooo like kalindi's😕...
Felt sooo bad for astha and her mother😭...
But loving ashlok's unknown connection😳...
Eagerly waiting for ashlok lovestory😛😛😛...hope shlok helps her to overcome the troubles her past's bad experiences will create in her future life😒...

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Liked it very much...let's see how they express their feelings.

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Dee James

@DJames

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Ah that chemistry is slowly building up eh? Get that going I say. I can already feel the steam...c'mon go for it I say 😆. Shlokie is in hosp so the tiger is tamed..just let him come out and then we will see Shlokie unleashed 😆😆. Jokes apart, this was the best update amongst all the 6 chapters..the Agnihotri family time was just so touching and awesome. New writer on the block, our pro Anu, pat on your back 😊.

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