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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Nice update omg poor Astha she is punishing herself for what the guy did I hope she finds happiness soon

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miac

@miac

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Oho dear anu heart breaking update and how desperate I want to know about her kids now...

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@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

awesome story anu ...i read the first two parts and it felt like a pretty nice start with mystery around aastha and her kids' father...i thought it was some flashback or something...the third part cleared that it was no past but all present...

but my oh my...the fourth and the fifth part took the story to another level, a very very serious issue and alarmingly common issue...and you are handling it with such maturity...the way you described her reaction to abuse and the way it affected her personality...it was just too realistically done...👏

now time for some HAS...obviously aastha could not have tolerated any sexual relation with any guy so this must be her adopted kids...prove me right, prove me right...plz plz plz😳😆

do tweet me whenever you update again, i am also planning to tweet instead of pm bcz its much less time consuming

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@ashlok

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

awesome dear

it was fabulous

the update was heart touching dear

aastha need someone to love her

i think shlok will love her more than she want

but still the tittle seems to be mystry dear is there is any mystry with the title?

love ur update anu

Edited by ashlok - 11 years ago

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

awesome update

ok so dat was the story of kalindi

waiting to know more abt astha

do update soon

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athmi

@athmi

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

really heart crushing update,😭

continue soon...

tfd pm

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Nice update dear... Poor astha has gone thru a lot in the past... Hope her future will be filled with lot of joy and happiness...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
I am typing this for the third time🤢 smthing wrong with laptp!

Scrary chapter...I hate it when ppl tolerate abuse..it happens so much in realonly the ones who have faced the storm know its destructiveness as you said!...you made me feel the same hate and scorn for that man and fear for a fictional girl! Thats what gr8 writers do!👏
So Astha decided to reveal and he got her mum killed?🤬 Please make that man suffer hell!😡

and you said Asthas neva been married? So adopted kids? I m glad she managed to atleast secure her career despite the odds! thanx for letting out the past on the reader's curiosity!😊

Abt the pm's sorry for bugging you😃But I felt you will miss out on many readers who arent on twitter!I I will anyway stalk your thread😛

Three times... I applaud your dedication and determination. I would've just given up. Thank you aishaa!

Thank you for letting me know that you felt her anguish and felt the disgust as well. I think you're have an amazing imagination, rather than me being a good writer. Just to spite u I just might have to change the storyline. You shall get the a sewers soon. May be not. May be I'd just let u ponder with your assumptions. Glad you're enjoying the story. Will get to ashlok soon. He's just been blown away carried away by hurricane Astha... Will he come out of it bruised battered or without a scratch...wait and see.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Aishaa3
Heartbreaking😒...Cant believe that man killed himself! Psycho Feel bad for Astha..she deserves to be loved after suffering all of this! But the past does leave a trail of it right!

I've never been in favour of the death penalty. I think it's just too easy. The perpetrators don't suffer enough. So yes, he got off way too easy for my liking. But I needed to end it there itself. He didn't have any further use for me. He's done his part. She's been through a lot. She's still here and he's not. So she's the victor.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: rbb1
Nice update omg poor Astha she is punishing herself for what the guy did I hope she finds happiness soon

Thanks ray as always. She's come along way. Her kids have helped her to cope with her guilt. She's already found so much happiness in the form of her kids. Yes, that's what re Shlokie baby is there for. Is she ready for him?

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