Manneet new os Anhokha Bnadhan part 2, 3(A), 3(B) on 8 and 12,20 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow second part bhi dene waali ho
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part 2


geet turn to him and want say something but maan say can I hug you once please , he make such face that she cant denied and with shy face and thudding heart she nodded in yes maan just took step to geet and with each step of maan geet get nervous it is so much for her he is first man who will hug her other than her family maan just come near her and open his hand and just took her in hug like soft flower like he don't want to hurt her with his touch ,both can hear each other heartbeat ...maan feel himself on top of world , he just want world just stop hear only he found so solace in her hug his soul mate his wife Geet maan Singh khurana ...they just took step to fall in each other love yes to become MAANEET ...

this one hug and both feel like someone put medicine in their wounded heart , geet feel after her parent someone is for her who really care her and maan feel like yes she is his his , he just lack of words feel that time he just want to live that moment he come out from hug and say thnks geet with moist eyes and say please come in hall ...and just went from there

geet feel something serious in his tone she just get ready and went to down where she found all family there with serious face maan just called geet and make her stand near him , all just give disoppint look to geet , geet eyes turn teary from back two month she love this family as her own family and now ...that time she forget pain which is given by maan with help of this people love and now their gaze

maan just took geet hand in his hand all just gasp with his action

maan - I want to introduce all of you my wife and DIL of this house specially you bua , maan give angry glare to her

bua face turn pale in fear

maan - anni come hear anni just went near maan , maan say anni if after your marriage if your husaband say that he is not interested in you he love another women what is you reaction dear

anni just say in angry tone , pehael uska mu tod dungi than uske gharwalo ka phir sab ko sue kar dungi

maan just went near dadi , what is your reaction for this if anni face this

dadima - maan main anni ko wapas le aaungi , she don't have to live with such people maan

uhhh maan give meaning ful look to his parent , who get some thngs

ok I will ask you all if they don't give any food to anni for 3.4 days if her in law found that she not sleeping with her husband

all just say n angry tone MAAANNN

maan - just clap his hand and say wow o what an reation than who give you right to you all that don't give food to my wife for 3,4 days ...he roared like lion he ask like a hurt lion full of anger all just get scare with his anger

geet - maan jane ...but her word died in her mouth maan just show her his palm

maan - maan went near dadi I don't expect this from at list you dadima kya app logne usko puch ke wo alag ku soi hai

ya ek bar bhi nahi laga apko shayyad main guneghar hua to , and from when we start to stop other food dadima

dadi - dadi eyes winded in shock and that place full with sound of slap yes dadi just slap tight on maan face , maan just bend his head he know he deserved it

than dadi march to bua and ask in hard tone sudha tumne to kaha tha ke tum geet ke food ka khayal rak rahi ho ...and mind sudha no lie this time

sudha get that she don't have any option and he just say wo main anger main this

dadi with cold voice anger for 3,4 days

sudha - wo ma main wo

dadi - nakul nakul

nakul just come there aj koi khurana ko khana nahi diya jaayega including me and maan sudha ko 3 ,4 din tak nahi diya jaayega and before any one say something dadi show palm and say no one change my decision so better not try it maan , geet come in my room now

maaneet just follow dadi

dadi just called geet with painful voice geet beta please hume maaf kar do , hum apene khoon pe kuch jada hi bahrosa kar bete dadi give pinful look to maan

dadi just hold dadi hand and say softly please dadi ma bade haat jode hui acche nahi lagete

dadi just hug geet and geet just sob loudly in that old leady hug like pain , fear of this days wash out with that tear after some time dadima cup geet face and kiss her forhead and say don't cry beta ...geet with choked voice wo dadima

dadima nodded in no and say just called me ma aj se app hamari beti hai sabse payari beti pari meri pari

maan feel some tear in his eyes

dadi - geet ans me truly you wanted to live with this man

geet cheek turn red in shyness

but next word and maaneet get shock of there life

dadi - geet app humare sath rahengi next 6 month ke liye and this man live in this mention koi game nahi ye life , aj ek se pyyar ho gaya kal dusare se so he have to stay away from you get it

maan get that dadi so much angry with him that she avoiding to took his name but away from geet for 6 month

geet just give look to maan like kuch to boliye but he just give helpless look just than nakul entered with geet bag now that is blow for maaneet they expecting tonight or tomorrow

geet again look to maan

maan - wo dadima

dadima - 6 month could be turn in year Mr.

maan- just say loudly no no

dadi just took geet hand in her hand and went to out house with nakul

maan just look to geet like someone stole his candy and took away

maan you are dog you deserved this , now how you will impress your wife lo bugado apne karmo ka fale us b**** ke liye you deserved this

dadi just brought geet in outhouse it is beautiful place but poor geet just lost in maan who walking but looking back side for maan and bump on daidi , thou dadi want to laugh on her but control and say in strin voice

wo nahi aayega umse bahot darta hai so walk properly hu , now go and set your room it is right site ok geet just nodded in yes her cheek turn red in shy , dadi caught her red hand she just run to room

geet room

she just cribbing to her babaji ab main kya karungi unke bina pure 6 month main to ladki hu na wo kuch kar nahi saket kya , apne dadima ko mana lete na , babji kise buddu ke saath banndh diya muje appne Buddu singh khurana poor girl just lost in cribbing fail to notice that somebody present in her room just than somebody just touch her shouder and geet just jump in her place and called loudly dadima ...but that preson just shut her mouth with his plam and say chup bilkul chup marwana hai kya punishment 1 year ki ho jjyegi naaa

geet shake with maan touch on her lips both feel current pass from their body geet just lost he voice he is first man so closed his hot breath falling on her face , maan first time watching her beautiful face and that innocent eyes closely it is just beautiful just beautiful he just bend down and blow some air on her face poor girl shake like lefe and closed her eyes , after some second she lost warmth and open he eyes , there is no one in room he look hear and there but no one is there , she slap her forhead , geet kuch hi hour hu hai aur tu sapne dekhane lagi wo bhi assie chi chi babaji

just ehan dadi ma knock geet door andask geet kya hua why you shout

geet get confused than her eyes winded in shock means that was not dream she scare and look in room

dadi again ask what happen , geet just say kuch nahi chuha tha

maan get schoked who hide behind urrten , he mumere chuha kya

he just sms

"Be prepare for night chuha kya raat main dikhata hu balcony ka door mat band karna" 😈

maan

dadima just say nakul ko bolna padega and went from there geet who get scared with maan sms look in room and saw balcony door open she just run there and saw down there he standing with attitude and show her thumb like Best of luck

geet just closed her mouth with shock


geet - babaji muje wo shole wali basanti ke jaisa bada mouth ku diya kuch jada hi bolti hu ye lo pad gaya saypa

geet heart tart to soucg dhak dhak , geet dar mat raat ko jaldi dinner kar aur jaldi so ja phir wo kaise tange karenge she just smile on her own idea and just finish her work make dinner for dadima tho dadi denied but geet just make her emotional and give dinner and ask her to give other member of family including that so called bua

after geet just run to her room and just hide in duat but got shocked of her life already someone in her duat and before she give reaction he say don't shout geet

muje chuha bol rahi thi aur khud chiuya ke jaise ha duat main chup rahi this , maan ask with smirk geet just bend he head , and mummer ye itne jaldi kaise

maan - no ans now say why you called me chuha

precap

third and last part may be today or tomorrow

maaneet first dance on tum se hi from jab we met

now think khali finger touch se geet ka ye haal hai

to dance ke baad 😉

ab app log vm dhundo ,mere liye 😉

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Bumper update dear...! 👏 me first again !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


i was 🤣 whole the time while reading dear...!


maan got very good punishment for ignoring geet 👏


aapke ye line-maan you are dog you deserved this !!!!!!!! 🤣

kya lines mahi...! 👏


aap OS likhrahi hai ya aapki thoti gang ki bare me likhrahi he...? 😡 😆


that b***h bua !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡

this dadi is too much no food for 3-4 days for all members...!!! 🤣


Maaneet part was very funny and cute!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


precap-so maaneet misses each other !!!!!!!!! 😳


waiting 4 next!!!!!!!!!!!!


aaj hi dedona aap update pls 😆 aapki basanti asking !!!!!!!! 😛


Love


Uma 🤗


P.S-mil gaya mahi-VM- http://youtu.be/lVa4dt5_JvE
Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
nice teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan ne sab ko sachayi batadiya and tappad bhi khaliye dadi se😆aur ussse jyaada 6months ki punishment😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part it all happnd coz of dat bua 😡 nd maan got punishment gd 4 me coz of dat sam he hurtd geet bt ab tho aur maza ayega chup chup ke romance hoga na waitng 4 nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super update mahi dear
hug scene...haayeee😳
wat a family..for their daughter 1 rule for DIL another😡
dadima slapped maan😲
dadima's punishment to family members and BUA
loved this punishment🤣
maan separate for 6 months😲kya dadi??
par hamari maan to bahout smart haina😉
yaha bi chuha🤣 🤣
super sms😎
loved it mahi dear
eagerly waiting for next update😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb dear separate for 6 months wow dadi what a punishment poor maaneet😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update maaneet punishment from dadima waiting 4 next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey mahi...awsm updte agn...
N i was shckd to c secnd prt...thght it ended alrdy thts y i commtd lyk tht on frst part as i wantd ds momnts btwn both maan n geet...hw maan will win her heart...
So it ws surprse fr me n i totlly loved...it was really grt...
Jaise ab chup chup ke romnce kr rhe h...tht chuha prt ws funny...lol
Looking frwd to thrd prt too...

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