Mg New ss Kashmkash ......part 6 on page 9- 23 Feb

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Part one


He come out to the balcony of room like his habit he look opposite side of balcony he sawher after around 2 month but this time he feel pitch in his heart when he saw her like that missing smile miserable…status and lost eyes like she loss her life ….just few days and life get shake like anything ….totally up and down …he totally remind the first time he saw her full of life away from a worry …her mischief eyes when he first saw her two month ago when he come to live here in this apartment ..thou he have own banglow but he prepred to live in this apartment its his own earning first property and its very closed to him….

When he shifting here he have some luggage with him and lift get stuck like anything his flat on 9th floor and its out of question that he can carry that ..he feel like struggle someone in frustration …why on earth this happening to him.ahh he want to kick something its too much to him,first jet lag because of ong travel he so much missing his bed now …now how on earth he called for watchman upon that he don’t know the number of watchman or security ….he cried U are such duffer Maan ,…he called himself itself. He serch for intercom but he don’t found it screw you MSK don’t u have sense that u know about it for emergency now become a trazan and start the walk ……

But TARZAN MORE ON JUMP THAN WALK NA someone say someone from behind ….maan who already in verse the mood turn and say what the hell who are u?

There man may be his age 26/27 standing on his Bermuda and tshirt with specks with teasing smile on face …

Ok boss no teasing I am dev malotra live in same buiding flat no XXx he say casual …..oh sorry Mr. Malhotra it jet lag make me so irritated nice to meet u …..my luggage and the lift so I am get irrited I am Maan singh Khurana your new neboure next to your flat he say with smile …

Both shake hand with each other and he sayoh please dev is ok with me for u Maan or Mr.khurana Maan laugh on his talk and reply ok ok Maan is good with me also

Dev smile and say u needwith this he pointed to his Luggadge Maan nodded and dev make some call with that he took Maan number and send him all number for emegancy service in society …..

That is first meet of Maan and dev….and they cick each pther so easily like they Know each other from ages ….both comfatable in each other company ……Maan got to know that he is just married with girl ,which is his girlfriend from 5 year…..

When he first time went to his bedroom galory he found her first time early morning drying her long hair all lost in some thought ….she is beautiful ….maan first time admitted that in his heart the sunshine rays making to look her more beautiful …..that soft orange light making her more Devin ..

Just than someone come from her behind and hug her from back …..maan smoothing odd but found it dev …he get that so she is mrs dev …ok he imm turn his gaze to other side he don’t want to ruin their friendship with any misunderstanding ….

After that incidence he saw her two three time in blaocny he think that is her fev place ….

After one month he have to fly to NY because or work and when he return he get shock after shock thou he is touch with dev but last three four day are verse for their work that he almost switch off his Indian number mobile for while …and when he reach out for mobile he get numbers of massage and miscall …from dev and his family and one massage shook him like anything …he took next flite and come back india …its massage of dev dismissal in car accident two day prior….

He don’t know but he feel very big loss because they are really come close as friend and now sudden he is goan ..like this ….

Next morning when he went to balcony as habit there he saw her ….like all color weep from her life its so sudden ,,he as new friend also not cop up with this situation he missing him terribly how she is managing now that thought make him shake with tension dev parent and she they are so broken ….

Justthan he saw her went inside in hurdle burdle ….don’t know why but he feel some tension he turn worried with her ….he is deep thought that whether he have to chake it or not because he want to help not any hurdle for her or new tension for her.

Justthan he heard door bail which is ringing so cotinusely he rush to door and found dev father with so much tense and tear running form his eyes …so many bad thought pass from his head …he hold his plam and asked in worried tone ….kya hua uncle , next moment that old man hug him tightly and sob with broken voice please save her please save her we need her already we lost dev now ….she also he stop for while …..

Tum binkya hai jeena, kya hai jeena

Tum bin kya hai jeena

Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise

Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin

Sadiyon se lambi hain raatein

Sadiyon se lambe hue din

Aa jaao lautkar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai...

Phir shaam-e-tanhaai jaagi

Phir yaad tum aa rahe ho

Phir jaan nikalne lagi hai

Phir mujhko tadpaa rahe ho

Phir mujhko tadpaa rahe ho

Is dil mein yaadon ke mele hain

Tum bin bahut hum akele hain

Aa jaao lautkar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai...

Kya kya na socha tha maine

Kya kya na sapne sajaaye

Kya kya na chaaha tha dil ne

Kya kya na armaan jagaaye

Kya kya na armaan jagaaye

Is dil se toofaan guzarte hai

Tum bin to jeete na marte hai

Aa jaao lautkar tum, yeh dil keh raha hai...

Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise

Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin

Sadiyon se lambi hain raatein

Sadiyon se lambe hue din

Aa jaao lautkar tum, yehdil keh raha hai...


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice start!

Do continue!

So will Maan save Geet's honour and marry her for the sake of the happiness of Geet's in-laws who have lost their only son to the cruel clutches of death??


Can you PM next time, please?

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congrats for new story

very emotional start

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Hi Mahi.... hope all is well

Congrats on another SS

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Part 1

heart wrenching update

feeling for Geet.....

she was a happy vibrant person but Dev's death changed everything

seems like Maan was attracted to her when he first saw her but realised she is married to Dev

Maan and Dev became good friends

oh Dev died

Maan was shocked

Dev's dad ask Maan to save Geet

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Congrats for new story..

Nice update..

Continue soon..

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Congrats for the new story mommy.

Nice start

Waiting for the updates continue soon

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Congrats for new story , emotional update , geet was married to dev and he died in car accident so sad. Her in laws are worried about her , eagerly waiting for next update dear

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part 2

Just than he heard door bail which is ringing so continuously he rush to door and found dev father with so much tense and tear running from his eyes …so many bad thought pass from his head …he hold his palm and asked in worried tone ….kya hua uncle , next moment that old man hug him tightly and sob with broken voice please save her please save her we need her already we lost dev now ….she also he stop for while….please he sob in Maan arm..

Maan somehow brake his hug and say softly don’t worry uncle I am coming with u ..kuch nahi hoga thik hai bas muje key and wallet lene diyji give me two min …when Maan found hum little bit stable he run to inside room took all thinks he need and went to their house ….thou his hand imagin so many panic image of her ….what happen what happen to her is she alright kuch serious to nahi hoga na he took deep breath and mummer god please smabhal lena



He entered in room with dev father ….and skip his heart beat when he found dev mother lay on floor in behosh hal and frozen HER near aunty so pale and lifeless face Maan feel something twisted in his heart ..her cloth in blood …what happen …he turn t uncle and uncle replay my wife fall down and blood spared like this and may be some memory get trigger of of dev..he mummer softly …..i bend near auty and try to check her injury she get hurt back side of her …..he push his hand little bit hard on wound so bleeding may be get minimum from wound .

Uncle please called ambulance he say to helpless uncle who almost lost the ability of thought because of event he nodded and call ambulance ….in between Maan ask uncle to make HER sear little bit always she is still in shock …uncle fallow Maan talk and went to Geet side and mummer beta utho please please I need u now beta more than anything meri baat suno beta ..but don’t get any response from her she is just looking to blood in daze stage …..

Maan get that she is in deep shock ….he again say to uncle its ok let first ambulance come than we will look her ..uncle nodded and next in 5 min hospital person arrived with statue …..and next they took over of aunty ……just than Maan who is little bit heisted to talk with HER or touch HER and look to uncle like silently asking permission uncle nodded with tear …and Maan turn to her …

He called softly Mrs. Malhotra Mrs. Malhotra are u lessoning me …..please uncle is scare he need u …are u lessening me mrs Malhotra …..he try three four time but don’t get any positive response at last he say in little bit hard tone MRS MALHOTRA U HAVE TO LOOK AFTER DEV PARENT and that work the name of Dev brought back her in reality ….

He body shake with fear and her head jerk back and once look to uncle ….with shock and fear ….fear of losing one more her own..she shook with thought ….she cried baba ma , ma where is ma wo kaha hai she start to get panic …..baba rush to her and took her in his hug and mummer she is ok GEET she is ok ….they taking her to hospital we have to rush there ….beta I need your support I cannot handle it alone ….beta look at me…



Geet look to baba and found a hops and trust for her she somehow nodded …..he say further I have to rush with ambulance ..we cannot afford delay …



beta u reach with Maan to hospital after ….geet once look to her cloth and she feel again that scare nausea ….the blood smell and red color …but she know he have to control her emotions its not right time



She say u go ahead I will reach there after changing the cloth …I am ok now baba don’t worry …she took few deep breath and stand on her feet ..her pale face …baba once look to Maan who nodded in assurance ..he went from there with heavy heart ..

Maan waited for HER to joined him so they will reach to hospital as soon as possible he fearing for her he feel t hat she is still in shock and may be dev memory trigger her mind like anything and she reacted like this …he heard the door get open where she went before few min ..

She change in another white dress a keys along with purse with her …she still not look once to him….maan went out side the house she also come out and try to closed the lock with key but still her hand shaking …Maan look for second and softly say can I …..she just nodded and be away from door …so he lock it …he lock the door he give key to her and press the lift button …he wait till she entered in it…



She fading with her bag ….she is in fear he got it ….he open the door of lift …he start to walk to his car but his eyes on her he match her speed without uttering any word ….

They settle in car ..she again fumble with seat belt ……but somehow closed it …Maan offer her water bottle to her …she once look to bottle she took that and gulp big amount of water …. She feel little bit good but still the panic and fear in her body and she hating it her this condition so weak and useless ….her brain not working right in this moment all she getting image of blood ….and that smell she again feel like omitting……she somehow control herself and took deep breath he have to wrap up her mind and her fear ….her baba and ma need her now .

She caressed her both cold palm to get grip her cold body ……Maan notice her attempt to take grip on her body and mind.


After 20 min they reach to hospital Maan park the car and both come near desk and ask about ma …..both went near OT and Maan found uncle outside of room ….all tense she took some speedy steps to reach to him….

She ask with tens baba ma …..baba no worry beta she is ok they stitching her wound …..after some hour she will get the hosh beta ….she took deep breath and seat nearby chair baba also seat near her ….she still caressing both her palm to each other …

Just than Maan say softly I bring coffee for u two …baba Maan beta nahi pheale hi bahot takleef di hai tumko …..

But Maan cut him and say please don’t say like this agar wo hoto to haq se muje ye sab kuch karne ko bolta uncle ….the old man eyes turn moist with his talk and first time she look to him the Maan name catch her attention in last two month dev so many time talk about Maan , she first time looking him face to face ,they always don’t get the chance to meet each other with some reason …

Edited by Mahimaan - 4 years ago
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Nice part

Geet's mother in law is injured and Maan is there to help.

But geet is still lost in her grief and Dev's name brings her back to reality.

Waiting for the next part mommy update soon

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