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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: vijisridhar
Very nice.. Do update soon.
Thanks
Viji

Thankyou so much 😊

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---
res

Please unreserve 😆

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa
lovely update surbhi... let them meet soon...
will wait for the next chapi & pm

Thankyou 😃
Ya sure 😊

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Surbhi Every update I am surprise with your writing...
Haila kyu
and again Vow... beautiful update...
ThankYou 🤗
I loved how they both care and worry for each other... Jalal doesn't care he is injured and Jodha worried that he came out to search for her... What is in that letter... Why that kid didn't gave letter to that solider?
De toh diya bhavini 😲

So Jodha unknowingly kept maha shivratri fast for Jalal's long life.. I hope they meet soon... 😃 Please update soon😃 Amazing update!!! 👏👏👏 😲
Thankyouu so much bhavini 🤗Your comment always brings a smile on my face!

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: ashpat
Really good chapter. u have superbly brought out the duality/conflict of Jodha's feelings. one can see care, concern and love of her for Jalal in the letter. Jalal despite being hurt does not want to waste time to find his love.
update soon. thx for pm.

Thankyou so much ash! 😃 I am glad you liked the update!

Originally posted by: spvd
part 4
awesome dear...
nice...
so Jodha has kept vrat too...
cont soon dear...

Thanks Alot friend! 😃

Originally posted by: taaniroyal
surbi supeerrrb chap 1... :)
res chaptr 2.3.4 n thankx 4 pm

Thanks alot for commenting! 😊 I am glad you liked the first one.

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Hey ... I have updated comment on page 12

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Comment from Di (_Deepika_ )

Hey baby...🤗

sorry for the late reply..u know i was tied up with stuffs...coming back to the updates...wooo...aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai...jalal is desperate to meet his jodha...and jodha...even after that painful night alll she can think is about his well-being...he cant stop searching for his love n she cant accept her love with so much pain in her heart...they need each other to heal their wounds...his reaction to her letter where is requested him to go back was nicely written...loved his concern n realization about her selfless love for him ...despite of being insulted so much she kept fast for his well-being...she is truly beautiful..inside n outside...Abul mali was a shocker ...loved the way u portrayed jodha as jalal most precious thing...cant wait to read the next part...keep writing baby❤️

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

loveed it.But abul mali bich mein kahan se tapak gaya.damn no one leaves our akdha alone. 😉

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prianka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

wonderful dear...very nice...hope to see the next update very soon...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

part 5
awesome...
finally Jalal found Jodha...
OMG where is she now?
and this Abu Maali grrr...
cont soon dear...

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kritika_shrimal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Subbbiii ❤️
Dude you are so freaking good
I just loved ittt
Itnaaa talent kaha se laaayi tum
Btw pm me wen you update next chapter.
Haha
Keep it up mere sherni 👏 🤗 ❤️

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

surbhi ...sorry yaar I will comment soon... yaar I will read again about that solider part... me shayad confuse...

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Surbhiii... Updateee.. kabbb????? 😛

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Thankyou so much for your love and response on the last chapter. Keep it coming. I won't disappoint you.
Will do replies soon 😊
Here you go. I didn't check the update so forgive me if any errors occur.

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Chapter: 6

"Jodha Begum!!"
Jalal shouted at the top of his voice creating chills in the atmosphere. His nerves were venting out blood all over. He took his sword and thrashed abul maali's neck from his head!
SLAM!!! A shrilling sound came and a glass broke into two pieces making jalal stumble out of his chair. His eyes popped out of his sockets! His clothes were wet due to sweat! He looked at the bed and found jodha sleeping peacefully. "Allah!! Toh yeh sab hamara sapna tha! Shukr hai jodha begum salaamat hai!" he calmed himself down and wiped the sweat from his face. It was an atrocious dream for him, even a mere thought of losing her stabbed his heart from inside. He went and sat on the bed near jodha, covered her fully with the quilt and held her hands in his. He observed her serene face, this delicate soul has given so much to him and mughal empire he thought. Since her entry in the agra's mahal she has resisted so many allegations, all false though! From the fake pregnancy news to benazir's poison, she had heard it all and every time I blamed her regardless of the truth I have always held her wrong! Jalal tightened his wrist in anger. He was angry guilty and what not. He again looked at jodha with loving eyes and said "Aapne hamare khaatir kitne apmaan sahe hai jodha begum aur ek baar bhi humne aapka saath nahi diya...hum aapse haath jodke muaffi maangenge jodha begum...ek baar aankhein kholiye bas" but his angel was in a deep slumber. The night was turning passionate as he adored his love owing to the moonlight falling on her face. A beautiful rhythmic ambience could be felt in the room. The dark and glittery night was adding to the tunes.

Kahin To... Kahin To
Hogi Wo,
Duniya Jahan Tu Mere Saath Hai..

Jalal shyly touched her fingers making sure it doesn't bother her sleep...then locked them in his grip and kissed them whole heartedly...the tender touch of her fingers launched his senses in to heaven...a simple and pure touch of them made him go weak on his knees... then he smiled from the corner of his mouth and slowly freed her hand to make it rest on her stomach.

Jahan Mein, Jahan Tu,
Aur Jahan, Bass Tere Mere Jazbaat Hai,
Hogi Jahan Subah Teri,
Palko Ki, Kirano Mein,
Lori Jahan Chand Ki,
Sune Teri Baahon Mein..

He suddenly felt a gush of wind entering into the room and his thoughts got interrupted in between...he looked at the open window...the curtains were wavering in the air...he stood up, went there and closed the window. He saw her peacefully sleeping and a cute smile appeared on his face.

Jaane Naa Kahan Wo Duniya Hai,
Jaane Naa Wo Hai Bhi Ya Nahi,
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse,
Itni Khafa Nahi..

He travelled to her bed once again when his eyes fell on her feet. They were swelled and some blood stains were also present on her foot. He sat on the bed and placed them on his lap. Instead of knowing that if she would've been conscious he could've never been able to even touch them he took a hot water bowl and with some cotton pieces kept on her side bit by bit he started cleaning her wounds. A rajputi princess and a begum could have to go through such pains made him guiltier.

Saasein Kho Gayi Hai Kiski Aahon Mein,
Mein Kho Gayi Hu Jaane Kiski Baahon Mein,
Manzilon Se Raahein Doodhti Chali,
Kho Gayi Hai Manzil Kahin Rahon Mein..

Jodha was asleep. She was unaware of the happenings...but her heart was still alive somewhere but it had lost all hopes of beating once again. It was broken by the man himself whom she had just started loving...
she was still busy collecting her broken self.

Kahin To, Kahin To,
Hai Nasha..
Teri Meri Har Mulaqaat Mein,
Hoton Se, Hoton Ko,
Chumti, O Rehte Hai Hum Har Baat Pe

Jalal caressed her foot slowly and then covered them with the blanket. He saw the payal on her ankle and it reminded him of the day when he made her wear the same in the bagh. How he had not valued her and how he had behaved with her made his face hung with shame. He breathed heavily and went closer to her...he saw her ever beautiful face and he could read the tensed jodha. He slowly bended towards her face and in a blink of an eye he was overlapping her shadow...making the distance almost nil...his lips were almost an inch away from touching and feeling hers...he gazed at her face adoring her beauty, she was looking so alluring right now, moonlight falling on her face and the proximity between them just tortured jalal...but he smiled and moved towards to kiss her forehead. The contentment of seeing her after so many days brought immense happiness to jalal which he wished to express it to her soon.

Kehti Hai Fiza Jahan,
Teri Zamin Aasmaan..
Jahan Hai Tu, Meri Hassi,
Meri Khushi, Meri Jaan...

Jalal fancied to keep this moment locked forever. He wished to stay with her always like this, happy and close. He held her one hand and kept the other on her cheek..."Hum bahut besabri se aapka uthne ka intezaar kar rahe hai jodha begum...hum aapko apni dil ki baat batana chahte hai aur apse muaffi maangna chaahte hai ki kyu humne aapko khudse itna dur jaane diya"
His tears were the evidence of the arrival of his happiness, which was serenely sleeping before him.

Jaane Naa Kahan Wo Duniya Hai,
Jaane Naa Wo Hai Bhi Ya Nahi,
Jahan Meri Zindagi Mujhse,
Itni Khafa Nahi..

He then stood up from her bed...with stealing glances of her he launched himself on the chair. After minutes of adjusting himself on it he slowly fell in a deep slumber. He was also very tired and after the adventurous searching he needed some respite.
He was just waiting for the sun to rise.

Next Morning.

Jodha opened her eyes...she was feeling a bit fresh...her body was still weak but a certain calmness was present around her. She looked around her and her brows narrowed...she got up suddenly and observed the room. "Yeh kiska kaksh hai aur hum yaha kaise aaye??" she immediately got out of the bed. She was stepping out of the room when suddenly she bumped into someone.

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Hope you guys liked the update. I am sorry for the late update, i was out of town. I will update early next time pakka 😛

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