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gauriS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

smokin hot n awesome update surbhi😳

really liked Jo's smartness 😎😆

but why did u end it😔

happy diwali🤗

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Surbhi darling.. dhamakedar Diwali gift to me.. hay hay.. I'm still relishing those moments.. kitna naughty hai ye donon.. steam steam game khel rahe the.. 🤣 very beautifully portrayed passion dear.. I loved loved loved it... dil se.. ❤️ you brought out the right feelings and penned it very aptly darling.. I could envisage their desire, their longing, their passion.. ☺️

I'm sad that I can't get more of this Jalal and Jodha hereon... but the ending was sooo chweet.. Jodha subah ki baat karti hain, Jalal raat ki baat karta hain.. sahi jodi... 😆

please please be back with a different SS soon.. love you loads my special sis, wish you and your family a very very happy pataka Diwali..

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@old_charm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

wonderful update loved every bit of it ...❤️

& thanks for the pm 😃

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Lasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

WAAAOOOWW!!!

It was beautiful dear...

So splendid...and hot SR...😆

THANKS for a wonderful story...

Love you ...

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Surbhi my dear

Happy Diwali and Happy New Year

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surbhimathur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
Surbhi my dear

Happy Diwali and Happy New Year

Same to you di! Hope you had aa fun diwali :)
Happy New year! :*

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

part 12 b
last part
awesome dear...
lovely...
they are finally one and happy also...
nice...

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khushboo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

wow nice update

what are u going write next??

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Saumya

@tinkylove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Hii dido..!! OYE HOYE hosh udd gye mere toh..! Wah kya SR di hai apne..!!! Bas aur kuch ni hai khne ko mere passs..!! :p *wink* Dii mind blowing..! Fantastic update was that..!! *doing bhangra* Gosh bas ankhen nikal gyi padte padte..!! :p Woh chandini raat jabhue yeah dono saath..! Aeee hayeee..!!! Bas sitaron se sazi vo raat bas kamal kr dia apne di..! Bas bacha hi nhi bolne ko ab toh kuch..!! Shocking rocking SURBHI MATHUR DIDOOO..!! U LALLALALA..!!! UIII REEE..!! Bas jhakas thi yeh toh..!! Ek dum happy new year jaise..!! U r hell terrific diii..!! Keep it up nd keep talking with me nd Make a comeback with new story..!