AkDha SS: Yeh Laal Ishq /Last Chapter 12b page 45/ - Page 12

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

wonderful dear...very nice...hope to see the next update very soon...

Originally posted by: spvd

part 5
awesome...
finally Jalal found Jodha...
OMG where is she now?
and this Abu Maali grrr...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Thankyou so much prianka! 😃 Yea i will try to update soon from now 😊

Thankyou so much! 😃 Yea he found her finally!




Labbuuu 🤗🤗🤗
hahaha thank youu yaaarr dil khush kar ditha tussi!
haha pm yes yes why not :p
i still can't believe you commented! Gosh i should thank heavens! ___/\___
Loveee youuu re! :*



Arey sorry kis baat ka...mera ss yahi hai...kahin nhi jaayega! You read aaram se 😊
waise this is the short snippet of that part which you are confused about..read these lines--
The kid went and gave it to the sainik. Before he could ask about the letter the kid ran away from there. He opened it but as he was illiterate he didn't got a single word. He shoved it in his pockets and continued the search for jodha.
So the kid gave the letter but sainik didn't read it 😊 i hope now its clear to you di :)

Chapter: 5

Surbhi another amazing update... When it comes to intense emotion... your pen works like magic... I could feel jalal's restlessnes... poor soul, he is not getting any success after so much of his effort. Thank god Jalal got that letter. I thought that solider will throw that precious letter of Jodha...

Heart wrenching letter!!! Jodha's letter is so painful... I love the part Jodha is telling him to take care of his duty and also mention that she understand what he is going through... and she is fine... at least Jalal knows that she is not in any danger... I can imagine what Jodha was going through writing this painful letter... and telling him to go away from him...I could feel her anger her pain for not trusting him... Surbhi you are blessed writer... the way you penned down their emotion... any one can feel their pain... I picture every reaction of Jalal and Jodha... While reading I felt Jalal suddenly got some energy ...he got one little hint and ran to get his begum... vow he crashed in to crowd... he was not shenshah that time he was only a husband...who was worried for his wife... the description of the temple and surrounding vow you deserve a clap here... mind blowing writing... I felt crowd... and everyone rush to get in the temple to do pooja... vow...

Jodha was losing her balance and finally moment came and Jalal found Jodha... vow... I am so touched... amazing writing... She lost her concisous and Jalal caught her right on time... vow Finally Jodha is with him... par yeh kya ho gaya... Abdul Mali... Kamina.. Jodha ko utha le gaya... OMG...

Chapter: 6

Originally posted by: hely

Amazing update as usual👏
Superb going👍🏼
lOved it..!
poor jo😭

No more words..juSt take my lOve🤗
&update sOon...😳
m excited 4 next chappy😉

Originally posted by: rima4ever

fantastic update

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Surbhi ... mera like button kaam nahi kar raha hai ... but i loved this amazing update ...& thank u so much for the PM 🤗... lekin ye toh bahaut chota tha 😒 ... next update plz lamba wala dena ...

btw thank god it was a dream ... mein toh dar hi gayi thi ... ... & my jalal's condition is so vulnerable ... poor guy .. i so much felt for him ... but I didnt get one thing jalal & jodha r in the ashram's hut right ... when did they get back to Agra ..?? becoz u used kaksh & all ... lil confused 😕

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

very nice update & continue soon...

waiting for teh pm

Originally posted by: lourel24

nice