KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated}

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Posted: 18 years ago
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KISMAT SE HUM MILE

Hey guys this is Nilanjana,aft my prev fan fic 'pyaar ki rahein' I am strtin a new fan fic again on sujal & kashish,by the above name,hope u all like it

First of all let me give u the background of sujal

Sujal ka pura naam hai sujal garewal,wo bohot bade industrialist ka beta hai

Uska pura parivaar abroad mein hai

Wo India mein akela rehta hai,yahan business badane ke lie

Uske ghar mein uske siva mrs d sauza hain,jo uski bachpann se governess rahi hain

Aur haan,sujal ki shaadi archie khanna se tey ho chuki hai

Archie ko sujal bachpann se jaanta hai

It's a deal more than marriage

As unn dono ki shaadi se unki families ko 500 crore ka faida hoga

Sujal aur archie mein 1% bhi attraction nahi hai

Archie is a chipku,& sujal gets thoroly irritated by her

Paar as sujal doesn't believe in love & all,he decides 2 marry him,for the sake of business & family

Waise kehne ko to abhi archie & sujal ki shaadi ko 7 saal ho gae hote paar

Sujal kuch na kuch kehke shaadi postpone kar deta hai

Waise archie is a cheapest gal in the world

Rumal jaise size ke kapde pehnti hai

Galyon ke bina baat nahi kar skati

Paiso ke kaaraan maha bigdi hui hai

Smoke,drink etc saab kuch karti hai

Haar ulti phulti jagah tattoo hai

& she wants 2 sleep with every boy in the town

sujal ke saath shaadi karne ka maksad bhi,uska money & sex hi hai

waise shaadi ke bad apni harkatein badalne ka uska koi iraada nahi

to readers ye tha intro,pasand aae to aage likhungi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice story line 👏 . waiting for 1st part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oeee neeelu pasand kya ...bohot pasand ayah awesome introoo 👏 ....lol archie ka character abbi seh hi funny lagta hai and sujal wahin arrrogant lagta hai...can't wait jaldi continue karrrooo 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey congrats 4 starting new story
nice story line................
Edited by lovely babe - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW ! it seems a nice story hmm u r a very nice writer i must say n like PKR i think this story will laso ROCk iNSHALLAH,my best wishes r with u 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW ! it seems a nice story hmm u r a very nice writer i must say n like PKR i think this story will also ROCk iNSHALLAH,my best wishes r with u 😃 😳 aur haan u know me na to jaldi se kashish ka intro bhi de do 😳 , q k sujal bina kashish k adhura hai 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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seems interesting.... Pls update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok nxt prt-

Thanxs all readers 4 comments keep reading & commentin

Bohot raat ho chuki hai


Raat ke yahi kuch 10-11 baje hain

Ek alishan makaan mein

Ek bade se kamre mein sujal baithkaar,apne laptop par kuch kaam kar raha hai

Saath mein table paar ek drink rakha hua hai

Aaj raat toofaani hai

Bahar toofaan aaya hai

Paar raat jitni tofaani hai,utni hi shaant hai

Achanak se,ek zor se awaaz aati hai

CLUUUUUUUUUUNKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S gets strld

Wo uthkaar khada ho jaata hai

s-aare ye awaaz??????ye awaaz to gaeage se???????iss samay kaun????????ki chor???????

S uthkaar goes twrds the garage

Garage ka shutter kholta hai

Wahan bohot andhera hai

S turns on the light

S suspicion ke saath idhar se udhar apni nazar daudata hai

Paar wahan koi nahi hai

Wo sochta hai chor wahin chupa hua hai

Achanak uski nazar ek kone mein padti hai

Uske saamne ek parchai si hai

Usse lagta hai,chor wahin chupa hai

Wo daabe paon jaata hai,bina koi awaaz kie aur

Achanak se uss shaks ka haath pakadke pulls twrds himself

Paar 2 his surprise,chor ki jagah

Uske saamne ek khubsurat si,daari hui si,sehmi hui si ladki khadi hai

[yes thts kashish]

s-[hairaan & confused] tum????????tum kaun ho????????tum//tum to ek ladki ho?????

K thoda thoda rone lagti hai

k-chodo muje,chodie muje plzzzz!!!!!!!!

s-tum yahan chori karne….??

k-[bohot darri hui hai,face has become almost white with fear,paar phir bhi kisi pariyon ki shehzaadi se kamm khubsurat nahi laag rahi] nahi,nahi..main koi chor nahi,plz leave me.chod dije muje!

S realizes ki s is holdin her hand

S confused saa hokar leaves her hand

s-tum yahan kaise….

B4 s cld complete,k s ko thoda push karke,runs away

Aur dekhte hi dekhte,uss kali raat ke andhere mein kahin ojhal ho jaati hai

S remains stndin there,confused,surprised,& strtled by her behaviour,& somewhat smitten by her beuty


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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow......sounds interesting......i love pyar ki raahein n am sure it'll be the same 4 dis.....continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wooow neelz awesoem part loved it..abbh shows a mansion jahan sujal as usual apna kaaam karr rahan hai llagta hai one of the punctual guy hai harrh wakt kaam kaamm.aur tabbi usseh lkuch awwaazzeh atti hai woh shocked ho jattah hai keh kaun hoga..he goes toward the garage..lights on karta hai aur trys to see agar koi hai lekin he doest find anyone abbhe jao theek seh chek karro tabb hi woh sure nehin hotta and he sees someone'z parchai tabi wahan seh woh uskah haath pull karta hai aur he'z suprised to see a beautiful gul itni khubsuraath hai keh woh uski khubsurti mein khooo jatta hai..phir he comes to his sense aur usseh puchta hai keh who are u aur chorri karne aii ho kya?yeh sujal bi nah buddh ka buddhu abb dekh ek khbsurat larki itni raat ko anjaan si jaggeh peh usseh samajna chaiyeh ki aburri hogi shayad ghar seh bhag gai hoggi and sujal aise hi kehta hai keh kya chori karneh aiii ho..phir he notices bohot darri hui hai bechari woh uskah hatth choddetta hai phir he starts asking him kwh woh kaun hai aur kaha seh aii usseh pehle sujal ki baat addhuri reh jatti hai aur kashish usseh dhakkah marr keh challi jattti hai ssujal wahin khada reh jata hai shocked ....gr88 start neelz loved it continues sooon 😳

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