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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey neelu awesome part yaar.⭐️.kya baat hai you write both the stories so well 😉. it's simply amazing. BUT YAAR WHY KASHISH WAS SHOUTING SO LOUDLY 😕 . WHY DOES SHE ALWAYS REACT SO HORRIBLY 😡.AKHIR BAT KYA HAI NEELU😕.bechara sujal he will get deaf.😆.he goes to do something nice but everything at the end is turned on to him BUT I KNOW WOH KASHISH KI PARESHANI JAAN KAR HI RAHENGA AND WILL SUPPORT HER AT THE END BECAUSE HE IS OUR SUJAL😉😉😉. SUJAL THE GREAT 👍🏼 !!!!!!! CONTINUE SOON YAAR PLZ.... CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECARE.😊😛😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42
wowowoooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww great part...
plz continueee!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
continue plz waiting for the next part plzzzzz 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
continue soon plzzzzzzz 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz continue this one too i want to know more about kashish actions and sujals reactions 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey neelu continue soon yaar 😭😭😭 !!! can't wait any longer. bye takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47

Ok nxt prt- k-aa..aap..aap..ne…m..muje..b..bach..bachaya..??/[weak voice,shiverin & breakin with fear]

s-haan,doob rahi thi tum!

K is quite ankhon se asoo beh rahe hain

Standin at the same position,in some thought

k-[ankhon mein asoo]kyun bachaya muje?maar jaane dia hota

s-kya??????dekho,main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon,tumhare parivar wale pareshaan ho rahe honge

k-[with blank grieved eyes looking at s]ghar?parivaar?[aft a moments pause]nahi main chali jaungi

s-nahi,itni raat ko akeli kaise jaogi,kuch ho gaya to!

k-[with eyes which can speak volumes but r expressionless]kya farak padta hai….abb

s-dekho,ill drop u

k-nahi,main chali jaungi!

s-maine kaha naa CHALO!

S walks twrds the car,& k follows quetly

They reach the car-

S opens the door 4 k

S looks at s,with her mystic eyes,& sits inside

S strts 2 drive

s-raasta bata dena

k-hmm

k is ittin quetly sar jhukake while s is drivin

s is wonderin ki iss ladki ke saath akhir hua kya hai,kyun itni mayus hai

s-yahan se kahan?

k-emm..er..[with confusion]..emm…e..s..sidha

s drives

s-abb?

k-emm..err…left..err..nahi..sidha..

s soch raha hai ki ye apne ghar ka route batane mein itni confused kyun hai

achanak-

k-rukiye!

S brake lagata hai

k-bass yahin mera ghar hai

ass pass saab sunsaan hai,bass agge ek andheri si sadak,as pass bass jungle,naa surr suur taak koi makaan hai,naa koi insaan

s-yahan?

k-haan

s-yahan,road pe?

k-nahi,bass pass mein hi hai mera ghar

s-main chod deta hoon

k-nahi,main chali jaungi,thanku

k gets down

s phir ass pass dekhta hai

s-ghar yaha?ajeeb ladki hai!

S drivs back!


Edited by belanila - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great part !!!.....why is kashish acting so weird when sujal ask her about her family and where she live's????????????.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

oho!!!!!! mystery girl kashish.............ye jungle me rehti hai??? 😕 hmm kuch to gadbad hai

continue soon!!!! cant wait to read about kashish's family............jaldi se continue karo neelu

Edited by togepe30 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
hey!!!!! neelu awesome part yaar👏.lekin abhi tak kashish ki baat samaj nahi ayi yaar 😕.akhir hua kya hai uske saath. she is so upset 😭. i am first time reading about her something like this. quiet interesting 😉 . very eager to know what's up with her 😉.continue soon yaar plz....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare.😛😊😊

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