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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
hey once again a gr8 part just loved it continue to write interesting parts like this 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
hey a really nice part but why did kashish wanna comit suicide................. 🤢 tats for archie
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ok nxt prt-

Kuch der baad doc comes

Checks k,jo ki behosh hai

& gives medicine

doc-waise she is allright,bohot weak hai,medicine khila dijiega,she needs rest,maine injection de dia hai,kuch der mein hosh aa jaega!

s-ok doc!

Dr goes

K bed par behosh leti hui hai

S is waitin ki kaab usse hosh aega
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Kuch ghante aise hi bat jaate hain

Kaafi raat ho gai hai

S thaak gaya hai,k ke uthne ka intezaar karte karte

Wo zameen paar baithke,

Bistar pe jahan k leti hui hai,uske pass sarr rakhke so jaata hai,s ki ankh laag jaati hai

Abb-

Dheere dheere k ko hosh aa raha hai

k-eh..eh..ah…

wo dheere dheere apni ankhen kholti hai

aas pass dekhti hai to bohot confused hairaan ho jaati hai

usse pata nahi wo kahan hai

yahan kaise aai

wo bachi kaise

kuch pata nahi

aur agla nazara dekhkaar to wo bilkul bhauchaaki reh jaati hai

jahan wo leti hai,wahan bed ke pass ek addmi soya hua hai [s offcourse!]

k ko kuch samah nahi aa raha

usse pata nahi,kya karna hai kaise react karna hai

wo yahan kyun hai,ye aadmi kaun hai

issi confusion aur darr mein wo cheekh padti hai

k-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S is strld

Ghabrasaa jaata hai

s-huh? Haan?

Hadbad karke uthke khaada ho jaata hai

K cheekhe jaa rahi hai

K bhaagke dusre side daarke mare litrelly kaapte hue,deewar se chipak ke khadi ho jaati hai

k-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! [daarke mare kaanp rahi hai,face ka rang udaa hua hai]

jitna k daari hui hai,utna hi s bhi confused hai

s ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha ki,wo ladki darr kyun rahi hai,aur chilla kyun rahi hai

s stps a bit 2 pacify with her

s-dekho..suno..!

k-k aur peeche jaane ki koshish karr rahi hai lekin peeche deewar hai

darr aur ghabrahat ke kaaraan k ro rahi hai

k-aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh,bachaooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Helllpppppppppp!!!!!!

s-hey!hey!listen…[stepping 2 console her]

k-nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!nahi!pass matt aanaa!!!!!!!!!! Kya chahte ho!!!!!!!!durr raho!!!!!!!dur hato mujse!!!!!!!!!!!!!kya irada hai tumharaaa!!!!!!kyun muje laye ho yahan!!!!!!!!!

s-kya???????main to bass….

k-jao yahan se,gunde badmaash kahin ke!!!!!!!!!

s-kyaaaaaaaa?????????main gunda badmaash???????

k-aaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!aaaaaaaaaaaaaeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s-shh!!!!!!!! Chup ho jao!!!!!!!

k-[aur panicked ho rahi hai][cryin] aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

s-SHUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT UPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K aur darr jaati hai,

Wo itna darr jaati hai ki mooh se koi awaaz taak nahi nikal rahi!

s-kya problem hai tumhari???????haan????????

k itni darr gai hai,ki kuch bol nahi paa rahi,shiverin with fear

s-pehle suicide karne ki koshish karti ho!phir jo bachata hai,thankful hone ki jagah,usspaar chillaati ho!!!!!!!!!!!

k-aa..aap..aap..ne…m..muje..b..bach..bachaya..??/[weak voice,shiverin & breakin with fear]

s-haan,doob rahi thi tum!

K is quite ankhon se asoo beh rahe hain

Standin at the same position,in some thought


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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
its really nice part 😳 sujal ne jaise kashish ka kahyal rakha was very touchykisi anjaan k liye koi aisa kahn kerta hai but he did 😳 aur kashish aik dam pagal ahi bina kuch soche smajhe jo man mein aye socha liya aur bol bhi dia 😕 sujal bhi insaan tah na ghussa ana natural tah uskojisko aap apni jaan pe khel k bacaho aur woh aape aise ilzaam laagye 😕 to bura hi lagta hai na khair per shukar hai sujal ne khud ko justify kia 😳 aur kashish ko sab bataya now she will understand him 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
wow neeelu dear gr88 part loved it awesome...abbh kashish kuddh jatti hai pani mein sujal rushes to save her biin a time waste kiyeh woh jaldi seh kashish koh bachatah hai she ss fully wet aur behosh..awww not gooood ...sujal notice keh yeh wahin ladi hai joh kal raat uski garage mein theeee he starts rubbngher hands and all ..usseh hosh mein lanneh ke liyeh mouth to mouth oxygen denna par raha hai he trys lekin phir bi hosh mein nahin arrahin ...woh archie ko bulata hai asks 4 help as keh he is a guy and he can't take her toh woh archie ki baachi itni berehm dill..sdil hai yah patad ..usne manna kardiya only for a stupid party ..what a stupid gul..phir sujal takes her..to his house aur jaldi seh doctor ko bulata hai doc kehta hai she'z fine lekin weak hai..and gives him medeciene..abbh sujal wahin itezar kaarh raha hota hai phir raat hojatti hai sujal sits down kashish keh hosh men anne kah itezar karrh raha hotta hai..aur wahin uski ankh lagg jatti hai..sujal jab ankeh kholti hai toh sdekhti hai keh woh kisi anjaaan jagaa par hai lagta hai ussseh yaad nahin what she was doing jab sujal ko dekhti ha gabda jatti hai aur chillatti hai oeee yeh larki hai yah ek baby chilla rahin hai non stop sujal tryys to console lekin samajti hi nahin...lagta hai bohot tensed hai wph chlla rahiin hai help tabbh toh sujal ko gussah ayah and he starts shouting shut upp ghehe goood goddie accha kya sujal ..wow kya awaaz thi keh kashish th chupp hi hogai..sujal says ek toh jaan bachai upar seh hummpeh hi chllana..toh she gets into her senses and shiver ho rahin hai...she keeps quiet aur asooo neh rahein hai issseh dekh kaarh lagta hai problamatic life kuch toh gadbad ha...gr88 part neelz loved it continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
gr8 part bechara sujal ek to kashish ko bachaya aur phir bhi tag mila gunde badmaash ka very good kashish 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
hey awesome story neelu 👏 👏 👏 !!!!!!!!!!!!!............. i can't belive sujal and archie engaged 😕 .. poor sujal....i can understand him 😊 ....... but what's happening with kashish 😕 ... why is she behaving like that 😊 ....continue plzzzzzzzzzzz........your story is really interesting 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 .....Very good starting...i wonder wht is kashish upto now.....sujal is so caring yaar...and waiting to know the suspense...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
👏 nice part....continue soon!!!!! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!

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