KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated} - Page 3

very nice i will kill this archie the b*****
off bechara humara sweetu kaha phas gaya
sujal kashish ko bachaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

hmm I hate THIS ARCHIEEEEEEEEE,q peri hai sujal k peechay ajb woh usko pasan nahi kerta hai 😡 poor sujal life partner bhi mili ti kaisi 😕 per yeh kashish ko kya hau hai ?y she is jumoping from the water fall 😭 iska jawab i want jaldiiiiiiiii 😳

so plzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

wow neeelu ear gr88 part loved it tooooo tooooo goooood...mindblowing ..superb...abbh sjal wahiin ka wahin khade ho jatta hai thoda shock thoda kush..kashish ko dekh kaarh abbh agla din atta hai sunday boring day plus lazy humare hero sahab utth keh appne bed peh beht jatteh hai aurrr tabbi badal kadke aur bijli aiii i mean mussibat aiiii ARCHIE....wah kya style hai ladki ka oeee yeh shareefooo ka mohoollla hai...cheaps ke liye koi entry nahhin...😆 abbbh she comes siddha sujal keh upar jump karti hai yaar ussseh kya karne ka irada hai ek toh sujal hai hi pareshan insan apppne kaaam mein busy rehtta hai 6 days a week taabbb week mein ek din attah hai sujal ke liye keh woh thoda araaam kade par yeh bi god neh ussseh cheeen liye aur isss archie keh galleh parwadia..kya kisat hai sujal ki...bechara..abbbh sujal is like behave yourself..oee sujal kisse keh raha hai behave karreh yeh word archie ko toh bilkul shobah nahin dettah...tabbi archi requests keh ussseh romantic jaggeh peh janna hai picnic manane sujal keh saath aur sujal taunzz her keh tumharreh boyfriend's kaha hai aur woh shuru ho jatti hai blooody blakmailer keh deal cancel karwadegggi yaar isss larki kahh maan karta hai gallah dabaduh...sujal bohot irritae hottah hai apna gussah nikal keh asks her kahan jannah hai..woh ek khubsuraat si jaggeh par pohonch teh hai jaage woh woooow hai lekin compny bomb hai...esi jagaah oeh kissi acchi llarki keh satth annna chaiyeh jiskeh saath bettkar ghantn bethna aur romance karna ..not thiss archi ki bacchci..tabb hi nazar hattateh hue sujal sees koi cliff seh kudddhhh raha hai and can u beleive it its kashish omg...abbh ky ahoggah...m sure usseh kuch nahin hoga woh kya hai na her o sahab hai na mr sujal garewal woh zarur kashish ko bachaengeh...great part neelz continue soooon loved it...waiting..... 😳 😊

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S gets up,use dekhke shocked

s-arre ye to kudne wali hai! [he shrieks at top of his voice] heyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! Kudnaa matt! Don't jump!!!!!!!!!!!! Paani ka bahav bohot zyada hai!!!!!!! Doob jaogi!!!!!!!!!!! Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Paar taab taak k kud chuki hoti hai!

S without wastin even a sec runs twrds the waterfall 2 save her

Aur pass jaake wo dekhta hai ki

K bahav wale paani mein doob rahi hai

He jumps into the water 2 save her

Aur jaise taise bohot mushkilon se,jaise taise uss behav mein tairkaat holds her hand

Aur apne arm mein supports her gragile body while swimming with other arm

Wo k ko safely kinare pe le ata hai,& usse zameen per leta deta hai

Wo behosh hai

He looks at her face & realizes ki wo to kal wali ladki hai

He rubs her hands,pats on her cheeks etc

2 mak her gain concius,paar wo hosh mein nahi aa rahi

she cant breathmsaans lene mein takleef mehsoos kar rahi hai

hanf rahi hai,neeli paad rahi hai

s apni puri koshish kar raha hai 2 mak her wake up!

Paar kuch nahi ho raha

Atlast he is bound 2 give mouth 2 mouth respiration 2 her

Aur aise 2-3 baar karne ke baad,wo saans lene laagti hai,paar abhi bhi usse hosh nahi aaya hai!

S is damn worried

s-archiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! Archi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yahan aao jaldi!

Ar comes there

Ar-arre ye kaun hai isse kise utha lae?

s-listen,she needs a doctor,isse ghar le jao,doctor ko dikhao!

Ar-kya main??????????I cant,main ye musibat nahi paal sakti,tum le jao naa isse!

s-kya?main??????????archie don't u understnd,ye ek ladki hai,main akela rehta hoon!isse apne saath kaise le jaun?

Ar-to ise yahin chod do!

s-r u mad!!!!!!!!! Tum insaan ho kya ho!!!!!!!!!!! Cant u c iski haalaat kitni nazuk hai!!!!!!

Ar-I don't knw,she is ur prob,bachaya kyun usse?

s-kya matlab bachaya kyun???????marr jaati ye!!!!!!!!

Ar-haan to,muje kya marti hai to mare,thts ur headache,waise bhi I gotta rush ek party hai ,bye dear!

Ar wahan se nikal leti hai!

Aur s doesn't hav any choice

Wo k ko apni bahon mein uthata hai,aur apne ghar le aata hai


Ghar mein aakaar

S calls doc urgently

Kuch der baad doc comes

Checks k,jo ki behosh hai

& gives medicine

doc-waise she is allright,bohot weak hai,medicine khila dijiega,she needs rest,maine injection de dia hai,kuch der mein hosh aa jaega!

s-ok doc!

wo!that was very nice effoert by sujal he si sooooooooo sweet 😳 k ko dubta nahi dkeh paay aur khud pani mein kud k saves her 😳 n after that he is worried about her b'coz she is unconcious na! nthen uska k ko mouth to mouth air provide kerna was sooooo hailaaaaa khair per she si still not in a btter condition so s call thata rchie oh just hhate hr 😡 😡 uski himmat kaise hui kashish ko yeh kehne ki k merjane dia hotasahi kaha sujal ne woh insaan nahi haikhair ab sujal kashish ko apni bahonmein utha k ghr laat hai aur doc says taht she is ok but still weak n tell him about the meds 😳 now agay kya hoga!jab kashish uthegi toi hope woh sujal ko ghalat na samjhe 😃

awwwwwwwwwwwwww sho shweet of jujal i mean sujal 😆 😆

kahiin yeh kashish pregnant toh nahin hai na????????? is that y she was committing suicide??????????????

i hope my prediction is not correct!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plzzzzzzzzzz cont. soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

amazing part 😊
sujal is so sweet
does archie not think about anyone else except her own self
cant wait 2 read the next part 2 find out why kashish tried killing herslf
great fanfic very intresting
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
yaarrrrrrrrrr kya part hai!!! EKDUM MAST !!!
plz contine...

wooooooooow neelu!it was so romantic 😳. sujal kashish ko bahoon mein uthakar pani ke bahar le aata hai and archie she really freaks me out 😳. i can't bear her at all, and i really don't know how sujal bares her also for little time 😡 . i just hate her. but yaar why this kashish tries to kill her self and also in last part she was so scared.is there any bad past of her just like sujal had in pyaar ki raheein?????😕 both parts were extremely well written neelu ⭐️ . loved it so much.it is full of excitement👍🏼.continue soon yaar plz...... can't wait any longer. bye.takecare. 😊😛😊

hey great intro and great story plzzz continue.... 👏