KISMAT SE HUM MILE-sk fanfic { updated} - Page 2

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! its different and really interesting!!!!!!! plz cont. soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dat was just too gud 👏 grt start!!!
pls update soon...

WOW !its really very nice yaar im especting a really nice storysujal au kashish ki pehli meeting andhere meinaur woh bhi aik adhuri mulaqaat.........! w8ing 4 the next part k agay kya hoga? 😳 so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soonnnnnnnn 😃 n once again best of luck 4 the new story 😳

wow gr8 part 👏
cont. soon

gr8 part really liked it hope it will be interesting plz continue soon 😊

👏 nice story neelu......nice starting ......continue soon!!!!! 😛 😉

het neelu one more fan-fic that's awesome yaar 👏. the starting was really very interesting and damn good 😉😉😉 . so continue soon yaar plz.bye. take care. 😊 😛 😊

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
greaentry..
i read u pyar ki rahein...
hope will b same for this!
love ur ffs

great part
its very intresting
👏

Ok nxt prt-

B4 s cld complete,k s ko thoda push karke,runs away

Aur dekhte hi dekhte,uss kali raat ke andhere mein kahin ojhal ho jaati hai

S remains stndin there,confused,surprised,& strtled by her behaviour,& somewhat smitten by her beuty


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Agla din-

Its Sunday

S is lazily sittin on the bed

Tabhi achanak-

Archie comes & jumps on him

Ar-sujaaaaaaaaaallllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jisse wo bed pe ar ke saath gir jaata hai

Ar is tryin 2 hug him,getting close 2 him,& is touchin him uncomfortavly & kissin him on his chest

s-[irritated]archie!!!!!!!!!!

Usse dhakelke durr kar deta hai

Aur gets up frm the bed

s-behave ur self!kya chahie tumhe! Kyun aai ho yahan1

ar-muje to bass tum chahie![tryin getting more close]

s-kaam ki baat karo!

Ar-oh darlin![ar puts her hand on s shoulder paar s apna kandha hata leta hai],I was thinking kyun naa aaj water fall ke pass ek romantic si picnic manane jae!

s-nahi!

Ar-mera bohot mann hai!

s-aur muje bohot kaam hai!

Ar-plz,I knw its jst an excuse!chalo naa!

s-tumhare baaki boy frds kahan marr gae,unke saath jao1

ar-sujal!if ull not come ill tell dada,& he will call ur family & tell ki humein ye shaadi nahi karwani,jisse hamari aur tumhari family ko jo 500 crore ka faida hone wala hai,wo nahi hoga!

S thinks a bit,

Kicks on the grd,irritatedly

s-kahan jaana hai!

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Abb s without any intrest goes with ar for picnic near a waterfall

Waise jagah bohot khubsurat hai

Paar saath itna ghatiya hai ki s ko khubsurat jagah bhi bekaar laag rahi hai

Aur uske upar ar ki irritatin,baatein & behaviour

Aur harr moment ar ki s ke pass aane ki koshih,s ka mann kar raha hai khichke ek chamat mare ar ko!

Ar to itni chimku hai ki,fevicol company wale usse dekhenge to sponsor kar denge,aur utni hi irritatin bhi

Aur kapdo ka to maano tyaag hi kar dia hai

S ka mann kar raha hai wahan se bhaag jae

Ar jo bakwaas kar rahi hai,s is not payin a bit heed 2 it

Wo saamne jo waterfall hai uss taraf dekh raha hai

Achanak –

S dekhta hai ki

Durr waterfall ke upar ek ladki hai hai [han haan its k]

S gets up,use dekhke shocked

s-arre ye to kudne wali hai! [he shrieks at top of his voice] heyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! Kudnaa matt! Don't jump!!!!!!!!!!!! Paani ka bahav bohot zyada hai!!!!!!! Doob jaogi!!!!!!!!!!! Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Paar taab taak k kud chuki hoti hai!