J.E.A.L.O.U.S. Series of 7 OS (LAST part updated)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello to all !!!!!
You may or may not know me, but still..
am just like you a complete SANDHIR and SH Fan and
I think i have something that just might interest you...

(I am writing anything virtually and on the forum for the first time, hope you like it)

J.E.A.L.O.U.S. is a series of 7 OS, and it is named so because Jealousy at this moment in
Sadda Haq is taking new heights.
I'll be writing anOS starting from each letter of the word JEALOUS.

So, now i present you the first installment of series J.E.A.L.O.U.S


JADE

The first thing he had noticed about her was not her fiery attitude, not her passion for engineering, not her tactics, not her persona but her beautiful smoldering eyes.
They were not blue but they weren't green either, they were different.
They were HAZEL , first he had ever seen.
They for some reason bought calm to him.



Her eyes, he thought again, ahh reflected all her emotions,
they sparkled when she laughed,
grew moist when she was sad,
go all big when she was caught in mischief.
One could easily drown in them, and never come out.
She has the most beautiful hypnotic orbs he had ever seen.



And thus today on their engagement he had adorned her finger with the a JADE studded ring, which depicted Love , Healing and Protection



and at this moment Vardhaan knew that Niharika's eyes were his killer.

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A/N - I couldn't help myself to write about Vardhaan & Niharika as i have not read about them anything yet. Hope you find it worth reading, and yes hope i was able to create a mystery about the character.

JADE means a gemstone, bluish green, represents Love, healing and protection

Thank you for Reading

Cheerios

P.S - positive criticism is welcome, and so are LIKES AND COMMENTS..(please) 😃😃



INDEX

J for JADE -

E for ENGINEERING -

A for ABNEGATION (Randhir's POV) -

A for ABNEGATION (Sayunkta's POV) -

L for LAVENDER -

O for ONCOMING -

U for UNERRING -

S for SEPTEMBER -


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MainPareshaan thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woaahhh!!! This was superb!!! The description about the eyes was perfect
For a moment I thought it was about Sandhir ...
Anyway !! Great concept!! Update soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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EEKS! I love the idea !
This one was amazing :D
beautiful , I want to read the next one so bad !
Kudos!

- Nidhi :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..

Woaahhh!!! This was superb!!! The description about the eyes was perfect

For a moment I thought it was about Sandhir ...
Anyway !! Great concept!! Update soon!!!!!!


such a quick response was not expected...
eiks..am so happy..
don't worry ur SANDHIR will soon be coming..
thank you so much..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

EEKS! I love the idea !

This one was amazing :D
beautiful , I want to read the next one so bad !
Kudos!

- Nidhi :)


Thank you so much Nidhi...
and yes you'll be getting the next one
as soon as possible..
thank you again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey gud description dear!
yup i imagined it to be sanyukta's eyes!
and shock-vardhaan and niharka!
anyways i would love to read your next one dear!
all the very best for ur future works!!!!!!!
and do bring more SanDhir moments!
would love to read ur amazing works!
and thanks for the pm dear!😊
#niru
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The first part...the way u expressed the beauty and features of Sanyus eyes!!!!!!!!!
Even Niharikas!!!!!!!!!!
It was awesum!!!!!!!
Wen I read ur os ...I felt something special in it!!!!!!!!!
Waiting for ur further updates!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sukriti! This idea is one of a kind! This part was incredible! Waiting for the next one! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niranjanastar

hey gud description dear!

yup i imagined it to be sanyukta's eyes!
and shock-vardhaan and niharka!
anyways i would love to read your next one dear!
all the very best for ur future works!!!!!!!
and do bring more SanDhir moments!
would love to read ur amazing works!
and thanks for the pm dear!😊
#niru


thank you so much..
and i was wishing it would shock you
now that it did..am glad..
yup sandhir moments are on the way..
will reach soon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Sukriti! This idea is one of a kind! This part was incredible! Waiting for the next one! :D


i am glad you liked it...
you are an awesome writer yourself
so this feels really good coming from you
thanks

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