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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
loved it dear!!!
awesome work really.
and the way you said abt. the feelings and his own mocking cmment on himself was just superb.
looking forward to read ur next works!!
and thanks a lot for pm!
i'm a science student too so not getting much time to read any work and ur pm helps me
a lot otherwise i would sure have missed it!!!!
and this one is very different from others and happy and more glad that i didn't miss to read this story!!!!


always with love❤️
#niru

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey sukirti,,It is turnimg out to be epic...👏👏The way you are pouncing on every aspect of randhir,,kudos!!!I loved the Jade part,,vardhaan and niharika👏...The next two parts,,indeed,,phenomenal,,i am really in awe of this work of yours now sweets:-)...Sanyukta is indeed a treasure which is so valuable to him though unknowingly...What willl he not give just to have her fight with him??Though i want to know it from sanyukta's angle too...You are just too good a writer,,the inner shattered soul of randhir hidden behind his chauvinism ought to be battered somedayy...Banda dil ka bura nhi h...You ,,my dear are amazing ...wt preciseness,,crispness,,beauty nd excellence your wrks hv got...keep it up..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki08

Hey sukirti,,It is turnimg out to be epic...👏👏The way you are pouncing on every aspect of randhir,,kudos!!!I loved the Jade part,,vardhaan and niharika👏...The next two parts,,indeed,,phenomenal,,i am really in awe of this work of yours now sweets:-)...Sanyukta is indeed a treasure which is so valuable to him though unknowingly...What willl he not give just to have her fight with him??Though i want to know it from sanyukta's angle too...You are just too good a writer,,the inner shattered soul of randhir hidden behind his chauvinism ought to be battered somedayy...Banda dil ka bura nhi h...You ,,my dear are amazing ...wt preciseness,,crispness,,beauty nd excellence your wrks hv got...keep it up..


i have never written anything...
u don't even realize that how over whelmed right now..
i never thought someone will write such special words for me..
thank you, thank you so much


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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Rekha85

Heeelllooo!!!!!!!!!

Thank u for mentioning my name!!!!!!!!!!!
I am ur first forum frnd...I am happy!!!!!!!!!!!
The update...it was just awesum...the way u expressed Randhirs inner turmoil!!!!!!!!!!
I thought it was affection and it was Abnegation!!!!!!!
The reason why Randhir is always an MCP is explained so beautifully!!!!!!!
Anyways u surprised us like the cvs always dooo!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep Wriitng!!!!!
Update sooN!!!!!!!!!
Waiing for ur next update!!!!!!Of L!!!!!!!
I don want to predict...because...u love to give us surprises!!!!!!!
With Love...
Rekha!!!!!!!!


thank you rekha..
not able to reply you in the first post...
i hope i have made up..
yup, the next part will be up soon...
hope you enjoy it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niranjanastar

loved it dear!!!
awesome work really.
and the way you said abt. the feelings and his own mocking cmment on himself was just superb.
looking forward to read ur next works!!
and thanks a lot for pm!
i'm a science student too so not getting much time to read any work and ur pm helps me
a lot otherwise i would sure have missed it!!!!
and this one is very different from others and happy and more glad that i didn't miss to read this story!!!!


always with love❤️
#niru


thank you..
glad you know how it feels to be a science student..
no problems ever in sending PM..
with such lovely comments as reply..
am i more than okay to do this..
Thank you for commenting..
means a lot to me...
Edited by sukriti11196 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello to all!!!
I know i am super super late, and i apologize to all those who waited for this part.
But the next installment will have to wait, because i have a surprise and i.e.
ABNEGATION from Sayunkta's POV as wished by anki08.

Anyway before starting the surprise OS i would just like to thank all those who liked the
Abnegation from Randhir's POV part and
a special thanks to those who even commented

Its this support which keeps the writer going, thank you and without any further delay
I present you the surprise installment of the J.E.A.L.O.U.S

ABNEGATION
(From Sayunkta's POV)

Did he think she cannot realize his piercing gaze on her, on her and Parth??
Nope he did not!!

Did he really think she was that oblivious to her surroundings??
Yes he does, remember how many times you have fallen on him!!!

And why on the first place he was staring like a bloody hawk??
Why are you so bothered, its his wish, he can look, stare, wink
wherever he wishes and to whoever he wishes!!
But he did not even come and gave the i-know-what's-cooking-between-you-two look of his??
Like i said, why do you freaking care??

Of Course i do

And what do you do, Sayunkta? asked Kausatki while looking at her super stressed-annoyed-tired form.

ummm, nothing sorry, its just that I am super stressed, and I guess
I'll just have walk, need to clear this head of mine,
stated Sayunkta

Argh MCP, you are taking a bloody toll on me !!!!!!

Why are you behaving this way MCP ??
Why are you not stating I don't belong here tag line of yours ??
Why are you not fighting, irritating, frustrating me ??
Why of all people have you stopped talking to me ??

And that's when Sayunkta Agarwal had a realization dawn upon her
of how
She is habitual of Randhir...,
His presence if not physically but verbally is important to her...
Their fights are like oil to machine..,
Their bickering is part of her daily routine now...,

But then she remembered his words,

STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!!

It was not an order, it was a plea, a request
And she realized how much he meant it,

And all Sayunkta could do was sigh,

sigh on how her meet and greet you mom speech failed...
how her help turned disaster...
how the feeling of abnegation has settled inside her...

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A/N - I hope you liked this one, It was an out of box and was not a planned one
I hope i did justice to it, and anki08 your approval on this one is a must
I hope you enjoyed, you all enjoyed it
and yes it was an out 😃and out SAYUNKTA !!!!

Abnegation means to give up something valuable

Thank you for reading

Cheerios

P.S - positive criticism is welcome, so are LIKES and COMMENTS...(please)😃

P.P.S - buddy me for PMs if you wish to of course

Edited by sukriti11196 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Just loved it yaar!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
With Love
Rekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Sukirti,,I am literally thanking you eternally from every single cell of mine for giving sanyukta's POV...You are brilliant sweetheart:-)This series is one of the best i ever came across on this forum..No unnecessary buildup,,just straight from the heart,,no wonder,,it manages to untangle the emotions in me,,just striking the right chord every single time...I am spellbound,,truly,,you are mesmerising..you have it in you...You are excellent in writing,it is evident from your works but you are excellent in capturing the shots too...I adore you yaar!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anki08

Hey Sukirti,,I am literally thanking you eternally from every single cell of mine for giving sanyukta's POV...You are brilliant sweetheart:-)This series is one of the best i ever came across on this forum..No unnecessary buildup,,just straight from the heart,,no wonder,,it manages to untangle the emotions in me,,just striking the right chord every single time...I am spellbound,,truly,,you are mesmerising..you have it in you...You are excellent in writing,it is evident from your works but you are excellent in capturing the shots too...I adore you yaar!!!!


Thank you so much...
its really nice to read lovely words...
and that too for your work...
thank you again for ensuring that its a good update..😛😛
hope you like the further updates...

P.S. - what's your real name ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rekha85

Just loved it yaar!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!
With Love
Rekha!


thank you REKHA...
for taking out time..
and commenting on
the update...
means a lot...

- Sukriti 😊😊

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