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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello to all!!!

I apologize for being late, but since its the last one, I have tried to make it as perfect and
long as I can.
Before starting the LAST OS of this series I would just like to
thank all those who liked the U - UNERRING part
and a special thanks to those few people who even commented
This chapter is dedicated to all those
especially to all who have commented even in there hectic school schedule
and also to all those who have ever commented or liked at any part even once.

This chapter is also for all who right now are on the verge of quitting SADDA HAQ all beacause
of certain SAARTH scenes.

Its this support which keeps the writer going, thank you and without any further delay
I present you the last and final installment of the J.E.A.L.O.U.S

(It's a little long by the way and
Bold + Italics = Sayunkta's POV
Italics = Randhi's POV)

SEPTEMBER

It was almost the night of 1st September. 11:30 to be precise.
The winds were there, not too cold though.
The drizzle last night was like a soft goodbye of monsoon to Roorkee
for this year.

Meanwhile on the FITE ground.

He was strumming the chords of the guitar while humming the lyrics of

" WOH PEHLI BAAR JAB HUM MILE
HAATHON MAIN HAATH JAB HUM CHALEIN... "

when he saw her coming.
Clad in her pink kurti with her hair open, just the way he liked it.

Hi !! , she said coming closer.

In response he only pecked her plush cheek softly.
Now that's the way you say " hi " klutzo.

She smiled at this and also his choice of nickname for her.

KLUTZO

True to the name, she was actually clumsy at least in front of him she was, always, she thought.

Okay stop all this, look what I got, she said and presented a lunchbox before him.

What's this? he asked.

A Lunchbox Laad governer, she replied sarcastically.

I know that Klutzo he said in a obvious tone. What I meant was, what's inside it?

I cooked something for you, i meant for today, she said while
tucking her hair behind her ear.

And what is so special today ??
And actually why this sudden late night meet ??, he said while proceeding to
take a bite from her dish.

He didn't remember, didn't remember the day when they...!!!

Hey!! where are you lost, he asked bringing her out of her thoughts.
By the way this is awesome Klutzo ,
finally my girl has learnt to cook, he said only to earn a playful slap.

No, Just. And now I can't even request you to meet me, you've become that busy?? she said faking anger.

Absolutely not, Klutzo. You know we can meet whenever you wish,
he said winking at her.
But for now Klutzo you should just go to your room before that good for nothing watchman comes and eyes us.

She agreed at this, instantly.

Good night he said with that smile that was EXCLUSIVELY RESERVED
for her and her only.

She smiled at this, came towards him and pecked his cheeks.
Now that's how you say good night Randhir.

All he could do was smile, and say the final good night to Sayunkta.


Later in the morning


The classes were running no less than Mumbai Locals.
The speed with which the student were scribbling the notes, could fail a typist.
Not to forget the DREAM TEAM had a special task of its own.

THE MOTOR BIKE MAKING.

Of course not a toy bike it was, but a full fledged faulty bike.

The bike readily assured Randhir and Sayunkta to not get to spend any time at all.
Moreover working on entirely different parts had subsided them to even work together.
This had saddened Sayunkta. She was waiting for Randhir to say something, but he absolutely showed no signs of recognition of the importance that today's date had.

The entire day day she saw him all busy, busy to complete his part like
a freaking Rajdhaani express,
only in order to stand first without any fault, thought Sayunkta.

Not that she disliked this trait of his. In fact now she loved this attitude
of his, she was proud to be his.

The whole day was gone in all this only.

Finally late evening, Sayunkta saw Randhir all tired while on his way to Boy's hostel.
Thus she dropped the idea of calling and meeting him like yesterday.

So Sayunkta went on to her room and freshened up.
She was about to call Randhir, when she received a text from him.

Klutzo,

Come on the FITE ground this instant.
And don't be late, you know how much I hate it.
*wink*

Waiting,
Laad Governer.

Laad Governer, she was right in giving him this name, she thought
while almost running on the way to the ground.

She reached the ground panting, only to be treated with darkness.

RANDHIR , she shouted-whispered.

That's when she heard the guitar. She walked towards the sound, and what she saw was UNBELIEVABLY ASTONISHING.

Though in his black vest and pajamas, Randhir looked handsome.
Even that would be an understatement.
Finally her eyes met his after her check out session and he started his song.

Woh pehli baar, jab hum mile
haathon main haath jab hum chalein
ho gaya ye dil
deewana
hota hai pyaar ka
isne jaana...


All she could do was smile through her now moist eyes.
He kept his eyes fixed with her through out the song.

So, how was it?? asked Randhir while rubbing his neck sheepishly.

It was lovely Randhir, Sayunkta said with utmost sincerity.

So you remembered after all haan, Laad Governer.

Of course I did, what so you think of me haan.
Remember, you only said I can fit almost everything in my brain and
this is one of the most important things that ever happened to me.
And now here you go.

What's this?? asked Sayunkta.

A lunch box Klutzo, Randhir said.

Sayunkta couldn't help but eye him. He was repeating her dialogues
from yesterday no today no yesterday night.

Try it, cmon.

Sayunkta then realized that Randhir had cooked for her, at least tried to. Who would have thought, Randhir Singh Shekhawat, and cooking.
I wonder how did he manage this but finally keeping all her thoughts aside she tentatively took a bite.

How's it? Randhir asked all curious like a child for his marks.

It's yummy..ummm..so tasty baby.
She hugged and pecked him.

BABY haan...hmmm not bad Klutzo.
I like this name better than that Laad Governer for sure.

Laad Governer, she muttered.

She continued to stay in his arms, while he rested his hands on her waist. They danced slowly,
wanting nothing more but the time to stop.

After a while

But I did not bring any gift Randhir. The whole day, it was all busy Sayunkta mumbled.

Shhh Sweets, he said keeping the finger on lips.
You're the best gift I've ever received and I know yesterday you prepared the dish for this occasion only.

She smiled at how well he understood her.

How come it took so long for them to realize this equation between them
How come it took so many fights, challenges, ego clashes to reach
where they are today??

But as they say Better Late Than Never.

Both started swaying again on the tunes of their heart
and witnessing Love in each other's eyes.

She finally kept her head in the crook of his neck, the best place to be

1st September thus was indeed a very special day in their life.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A/N - So, this series finally comes to an end. At this moment I know how it feels,
but trust me this has been a great start for me.
SANDHIR and J.E.A.L.O.U.S had help me made many friends, which I hope will stay connected even after this.
JEALOUS has come to and end but I hope I'll be back with some other Idea soon.

Now this update was dedicated to a SANDHIR date we all wish to see and
SEPTEMBER because i made them meet in the month of September as simple as that. šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰

As for the names KLUTZO and LAAD GOVERNER, they are inspired
from a show I still love ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON

So for the last time in this series.

Thank you all for reading

Cheerios

P.S - positive criticism is welcome, so are LIKES and COMMENTS...(please)😃😃



I'LL MISS WRITING THIS




Edited by sukriti11196 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Sweet one.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey sukriti!!!
sorry for commenting late!
this one was good bt. too short i guess!!!!!!!!
ur style of writing is really awesome and loved punching idea!!!!!!!!
though it was short bt. the way you described was really good!!!!!
sweety post the next one ASAP!!!!
please don't say this is the last one i want to read some more!!!!!!!!!!!

and huh i think this school and work is getting toll on us!!!!!!
just waiting for my summer vacations to start and then i can read and comment
on ur work regularly!!!

with love
Niru


...LAST PART...
hey sukriti gonna miss ur work badly!!!!!!
i just read ur last part and commented on it thats when i saw that u have posted the next one too!!!!!
i was so glad and excited !!!!!!!!
bt then u made me sad by saying this one is ur last in this o.s ho sweety
please come up with another o.s or ff ASAP!!!!!!!!!

this part was lovely and huh loved the way u included iss pyaar words!!!!!

all the best for ur school and being a student i can understand the hectic schedules!!!!!
happy u spared time and gave us such a wonderful work!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waiting eagerly for the next one!!!!!!(ur future works!!!!!!)

with love
Niru

Edited by niranjanastar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awieee lovely update , will miss dis ff a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
will unres ASAP
sorry
i am out of town
------edited-----
Sukriti!!!😊
This last update was very AWESOME!!!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
I smiled throughout the update😊😊😊
Randhir played Guitar VERY CUTEEšŸ˜›
The names which they have kept for each other are sweet😊
This series of OS will be remembered by me forever!
I will miss this FF
Write soon
Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Sukriti! So sad that this has come to an end :/
It was an ingenious idea to begin with! :D
I hope you will write much more! :D

Loved this romantic one! I have a thing of guys with guitars! <3
Keep writing! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: niranjanastar

hey sukriti!!!
sorry for commenting late!
this one was good bt. too short i guess!!!!!!!!
ur style of writing is really awesome and loved punching idea!!!!!!!!
though it was short bt. the way you described was really good!!!!!
sweety post the next one ASAP!!!!
please don't say this is the last one i want to read some more!!!!!!!!!!!

and huh i think this school and work is getting toll on us!!!!!!
just waiting for my summer vacations to start and then i can read and comment
on ur work regularly!!!

with love
Niru


...LAST PART...
hey sukriti gonna miss ur work badly!!!!!!
i just read ur last part and commented on it thats when i saw that u have posted the next one too!!!!!
i was so glad and excited !!!!!!!!
bt then u made me sad by saying this one is ur last in this o.s ho sweety
please come up with another o.s or ff ASAP!!!!!!!!!

this part was lovely and huh loved the way u included iss pyaar words!!!!!

all the best for ur school and being a student i can understand the hectic schedules!!!!!
happy u spared time and gave us such a wonderful work!!!!!!!!!!!!!

waiting eagerly for the next one!!!!!!(ur future works!!!!!!)

with love
Niru


Thank you Niru...
was waiting for your comment..
and finally it is here...
I hope you find the length appropriate...
and yes hopefully will start my next work soon...
Summer vacations..sounds like heaven to me...
Thank you again..
for being such a lovely and avid reader...

Sukriti 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Prachijainn

res
will unres ASAP
sorry
i am out of town

------edited-----
Sukriti!!!😊
This last update was very AWESOME!!!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
I smiled throughout the update😊😊😊
Randhir played Guitar VERY CUTEEšŸ˜›
The names which they have kept for each other are sweet😊
This series of OS will be remembered by me forever!
I will miss this FF
Write soon


Thank you Prachi..
for a short but sweet comment...
I hope length was good this time ?? šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
and yes hopefully I'll write soon...
Thank you
for being such a lovely reader..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Sukriti! So sad that this has come to an end :/

It was an ingenious idea to begin with! :D
I hope you will write much more! :D

Loved this romantic one! I have a thing of guys with guitars! <3
Keep writing! :D


Thank you Arushi...
this appreciation coming from you means a lot...
since you're a wonderful writer..
Thank you for taking out time
and commenting..

Sukriti 😊

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