STORY (non-investigative): Flashback - 2 - Page 6

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Originally posted by: Sonali.

Ohhk I think I am the the most late arrival on this thread which had lots of things... I loved the emotional part of Abhijeet... You are great at filling the gaps dear... But the story I personally felt was short and sweet... An attempt of showing CID officers are human and have their own problems... Abhijeet trying to stay away from his Mom because of his pain and then entry of Anirudh her demise I felt all this jelled completly with current flow of the story... The way you tried to show time healed the wound between Abhijeet and his brother was really commendable... Great work Vis...

Thanks for reading Sonali. Long time no see. Where are you?

Originally posted by: visrom

Sorry, who's this? 😕

Keep guessin. tata.

It was really nice and simple story vis di, great work.

Read it Vis...

Very Interesting story!
Short and Sweet.
I'd love to read more stories like this.
Thank You.

Re read it. Its quite poignant. Poor abhijeet! But wow u made his brother come bk and try to keep in touch wt him! After all he needs family apart from cid and friends ... Thanks viz its awesome! The person who u said didnt like the idea is a dud. Am sure i know who that person is... Viz its a lovely short story!

Originally posted by: suhaani.cidmjht

Re read it. Its quite poignant. Poor abhijeet! But wow u made his brother come bk and try to keep in touch wt him! After all he needs family apart from cid and friends ... Thanks viz its awesome! The person who u said didnt like the idea is a dud. Am sure i know who that person is... Viz its a lovely short story!

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