STORY (non-investigative): Flashback - 2

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

I think except Me everyone Interpret the Story correctly...😆

Mujhy phir say Parhni paray gi...😊

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

No no gd its just my opinion :)

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: nsapo
No no gd its just my opinion :)

Arry Nahi BACCHA...

Mujhy bhi yehi feel ho raha hy...

Parhny mein kuch miss ho Gaya hoga...

Main phir say parhun ga ab...😉

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ControlledChaos

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I read this story straight after getting your pm... but reviewing this much lately because I was trying to guess some nice words to praise this beautifully written story.
I must say Vis di you are brilliant.. I love this non investigative one shot. Liked how you simply ended this up leaving us to think and make up rest of the things😉
Great work di... keep on writing such cute one shots.. 😊 👏

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Arry Nahi BACCHA...

Mujhy bhi yehi feel ho raha hy...

Parhny mein kuch miss ho Gaya hoga...

Main phir say parhun ga ab...😉

Arey GD...it's ok...you didn't like it, I have no problem with that...I can't expect everyone to like all stories. It's ok. 😊

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: nsapo

And moreover vis di I think the abhijeet they have sculpted is like that.and you have interpreted it rightly is what I felt 😊😊..lot of bottled up emotions ,sometimes spouts of anger but a lot of nice things to say inspire of the fire inside...eg last scene of sr insp abhijeet...if I were him I would have lot to say to survi😆

True...

But did you mean Survi of Flashback or Purvi of Sr Insp Abhijeet?

I first thought you meant Survi of Flashback...even there he doesn't tell her anything. The episode ends with him saying 'maine bohot kuch khoya hai'.

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: visrom
True...

But did you mean Survi of Flashback or Purvi of Sr Insp Abhijeet?

I first thought you meant Survi of Flashback...even there he doesn't tell her anything. The episode ends with him saying 'maine bohot kuch khoya hai'.

oh crap...sorry i meant purvi that grand lady of daya's😳😳😛

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misha.as

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Congratulations Vis di...
and lovely story..
It was really nice and simple with some lovely
dialogues ... ⭐️ ⭐️ 😊

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: visrom
Arey GD...it's ok...you didn't like it, I have no problem with that...I can't expect everyone to like all stories. It's ok. 😊

I did not say I Dislike it...😵

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Sonali.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Ohhk I think I am the the most late arrival on this thread which had lots of things... I loved the emotional part of Abhijeet... You are great at filling the gaps dear... But the story I personally felt was short and sweet... An attempt of showing CID officers are human and have their own problems... Abhijeet trying to stay away from his Mom because of his pain and then entry of Anirudh her demise I felt all this jelled completly with current flow of the story... The way you tried to show time healed the wound between Abhijeet and his brother was really commendable... Great work Vis...